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9/20/2012 7:28:23 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Friends have always come and gone,

Not one has been through it all,

They say if you make it out with one best friend,

You must be very magical




With different phases, there's new faces,

Some brought laughter, some disgraces,

For those that are worth the fight,

keep them close,

It's those for you they'd love and die,
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