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9/5/2012 5:29:02 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Three questions should be illegal toask,
First, Have you found love?
Second, Have you found Marriage,
Third, Do you have a baby in the babycarriage

They all say “we just want you to behappy baby doll”
This is why so many drink alcohol.

Useful responses to make questioningend,
First, I found my best friend,
Second, Have you been divorced before?
Third, Was it the pills you skipped?,
Or the amount of Martinis or MalibuRums made your little Theodore

I try to make good decisions, don't bemad,
I don't frown on your bad decisions,
Cant help you dressed scantly clad,
I'm not god, I try not to judge,
Depending on the source,
It can be like eating fudge,
Others drama from bad choices,
I can hear heavenly voices,
“This is why you wait!
Your life, your decisions,
there's no room for debate”.
edited by svlynn18 on 9/5/2012
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9/16/2012 4:32:44 AM

Amy Green
Posts: 8
You are so incredibly cliche it is unbelievable
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9/19/2012 5:17:11 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
morabgirl wrote:
You are so incredibly cliche it is unbelievable

Thank you! Thats so sweet))
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