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8/28/2012 5:23:25 AM
We're home an alone,
My mans in front of me,
Baring all for me to see,
His fingertips graze my thigh,
cover my butt, then my back.
His eyes expose his soul,
Our thoughts are right on track,
His hands softly embrace my face,
Kisses my nose, forehead, cheeks,
He kisses my lips, it's pure love Itaste,
Must savor each bit, nothing can go towaste....
I loose control, and ohhhhh.so sweetembrace
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