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8/1/2012 8:29:57 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I'llAlways be Your Fool


Iwish you were just an ex
Yourwicked spell has me hexed,
ThinkingI could get over you,
DamnI was such a fool


Illnever know how to get over you
I'malways going to be your fool..


Iwas all good until June,
Thenmy heart started craving food,
Justdoesn't seem quite right,
Somethingisn't filling my appetite,


Illnever know how to get over you
I'malways going to be your fool..


Hitme like a brick,
Mydad, the ultimate dick,
Wehaven't spoken in years,
Youstill brings me to tears,


Illnever know how to get over you
I'malways going to be your fool..


Youshould be here for this,
Youcross my mind I get pissed,
WishI could tuck these feelings,
Itsall part of the healing,


Illnever know how to get over you
I'malways going to be your fool..


Whetherits a wedding,
Newkid,
SomethingI've accomplished,
Orwish I did
I'dlove to share it with you,
You'llnever apologize,
SoI'll just have to improvise
Don'tthink any amount of time will heal,
Gottaget a grip and learn to deal
edited by svlynn18 on 8/1/2012
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