Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer

Poetry Forum


Home » High Critique » Glorious Red, Stunning Blue

For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
7/28/2012 10:27:45 PM

Luis Martinez-Rivera
Posts: 5
Nothingness-
pure,
vibrant,
black-and-white.

Oh-
the brightest you say?

Oh-
elegant you believe?

Have you ever,
wished upon a star?

Constellations,
the true color,
of canvas,
that is the sky!

A dark sea,
black-and-white
twinkle,
light and bright.

Black-
White-
Oh!

Orion's belt....

A little to the left.

A little to the right.

True color,
in black-and-white.
permalink • reply with quote

Home » High Critique » Glorious Red, Stunning Blue





Powered by AspNetForum 6.6.0.0 © 2006-2010 Jitbit Software