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I retired from a nursing career to live a simple life in the country and write. I self
published my first book of poetry, The River of Liquid Dreams. Small presses published two more, In The Presence of Shadows, and Faith Like A Dandelion. I had the honor of having one of my poems recited in a documentary produced by the Canadian Institute on Child Health, The Healing Journey. I give poetry readings and judge performance poetry competitions.

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Romantic Gestures


Blog Posted:2/13/2014 9:24:00 AM

Tomorrow is Valentine's Day!

What is the most romantic gesture you have ever received, or that you have done for someone else?

When I began dating my now husband, I told him the most romantic song I ever heard was Broken Arrow, by Rod Stewart.  He gives his love a bottle of rain, collects it as it falls from the heavens, natural and simple and so lovely

On the day before our first Valentine's day, James went shopping for bottles The female clerks at the stores were still talking about how romantic it was weeks later He had them all searching for a simple bottle with a stopper to fill with rain (He told them the story of the song) They finally found one with fragranced liquid in it One clerk went to the bathroom, emptied and cleaned it for him He went out into the rain and filled it

On Valentine's Day he took me on a picnic in the forest to roast hot dogs over a campfire (my idea of fun, am a simple girl) The rain came again and drowned our fire We ate soggy hot dogs, then he produced a cd player, tucked it under some trees to stay dry We danced to Broken Arrow in the rain A perfect day! Rain in a bottle, rain falling around us, as we danced in the woods

I want to hear what is romantic in your lives, what gestures say I Love You


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  1. Date: 2/14/2014 9:23:00 AM
    Love YOUR romantic story. I don't think I have anything from any guy to top that one!!

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  1. Date: 2/14/2014 9:22:00 AM
    wow, Caleb went crazy on this one and left you lots of remarks!! Hmmmm, it's his last remark that fits Joe and I the best. Just every day showing consideration. IN the end, that is what counts. Joe is not too imaginative, but one year he surprised me with a beautiful rabbit fur coat. (sorry animal rights lovers. It was a long long time ago and it truly was beautiful) and he even bought me flowers one year!!! haha. I remember making a huge Valentine card one time using different candy bars glued on it as words in the poster . We give each other little treats or gifts. We will likely eat out today, a big treat for me. We rarely eat out! Maybe to Five Guys!! yum.

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    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 2/15/2014 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I think it is great when the bigger gestures don't come every day, they would lose something. When they let their imagination soar and surprise us, it is the sweetest gift.
  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:52:00 PM
    But those are just things..stuff. I think it's the everyday things that really show someone you love them. I try to show her I love her each day..and I do. She's my wife but also my best friend, and I'm blessed to have a woman that has always given me all her love.

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    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 2/13/2014 7:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I love your stories of the lights and the limo. Grand gestures are fun, but it is the day to day caring that builds a life together.
  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:39:00 PM
    I guess if you were to ask her, the most romantic thing I ever did was on her birthday one year when we were dating. I was supposed to take her out but I called 5 minutes before time to pick her up and told her I was broke down at the rest stop 20 miles away and I needed her to come pick me up...ha. When she arrived and walked behind my truck to look, I had the limo driver swing in behind her and I got out of the back. Shoulda seen her face. We drove to the capital and had dinner at a fancy restaurant. Then we came back to her hometown and cruised around in the limo while she hung out the top and made me do it too...think she might have wanted to show off her man..lol

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:24:00 PM
    Lord knows how long it took her to set them up...it was a huge display. And there she was, right in the middle of it...decorated in a skimpy outfit covered in lights...haha. I'm not saying that's my favorite thing she's ever done for me,(a big to-do and a lot of work...and funny) but it was the one she probably spent the most time on. But even after being married for 12 years, she still does crazy stuff for me, and she's sweeter now than ever.

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 2:15:00 PM
    Well, I guess the most romantic gesture I've ever gotten would have to be when my wife and I were dating. When I came out one morning to go to work, there was a teddy bear with a note on it. After work, I followed the clues on the note and found a book(E.A. Poe) It also had a note which led me to a candle-lit dinner she had spent all day preparing. She then said she was going to change and for me to go to the living room where a cold beer was waiting for me. It had a note on it. The note told me to go outside and climb the ladder leaned against the house. I did, and when I climbed to the peak of the roof, the entire back yard was decorated in bright lights which read, I LOVE YOU CALEB!

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  1. Date: 2/13/2014 11:27:00 AM
    i like your story, monterey... affectionate gestures charm the heart, especially when they come as a surprise!.. huggs!

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    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 2/13/2014 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hugs to you. Everything came as a wonderful surprise, the rain, the love, the new husband. I was determined to spend the rest of my life alone, but God had other plans for me.
  1. Date: 2/13/2014 11:04:00 AM
    for me, love and romance can be found in the mundane, the small gestures in everyday life...just a word, a certain look or smile, a caring gesture, all say 'love' in their own way...really, I can see romance everywhere! (not least of all right here on this site hehe) :)

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    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 2/13/2014 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so right, the smallest gestures mean the most.
  1. Date: 2/13/2014 9:56:00 AM
    † I Believe If In Tune One Can Just 'Feel It,' Inside, Another's Words.... Love John

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    Sirak Avatar Monterey Sirak Date: 2/13/2014 7:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So poetic, and true!

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10/12/2014 NINETY SOMETHING Free verseage,life,
10/4/2014 OZARKS Acrosticnature,
9/1/2014 FRUGIFEROUS Free verseromance,
8/24/2014 A TASTE OF----- Free versefun,
8/4/2014 FINALITY Free verseloss,relationship,
7/28/2014 DAISY PETALS Free verselove,
7/28/2014 Life Interrupted Free verselife,
7/16/2014 THE LETTER Free verseabsence,loneliness,
7/10/2014 WORDLESS MEMORIES Free versedevotion,loss,love,
6/6/2014 AUTUMN'S APPROACH Pantoumloss,
5/18/2014 A LETTER TO SYLVIA PLATH Free verseinspiration,poets,
5/10/2014 DELIVERANCE REVISITED Free versewords,
5/5/2014 MAKING BEDS IN A BURNING HOUSE Free versebrother,growth,life,
4/26/2014 KALEIDOSCOPE Free verselife,loss,lost,
4/26/2014 FREE VERSE CIRCUS Free versepoetry,poets,
4/13/2014 COW TANKA Tankaanimal,friendship,
4/13/2014 SPRING MORNING IN THE OZARKS Free versenature,spring,
4/11/2014 WHERE HAVE ALL THE CHILDREN GONE Free versechildhood,children,life,
4/9/2014 HANGING TOUGH Free versechildren,courage,life,
4/1/2014 MY ODE TO THE NETHERLANDS Dodoitsuimage,places,
3/17/2014 ALMOST Free versebaby,birth,loss,love,
3/16/2014 OLD RATTY ROBE Free verseloss,love,mother,
3/16/2014 A MATTER OF TASTE Free verseabuse,
3/11/2014 NEGATION Imagismdevotion,life,
3/2/2014 SOMEWHERE IN THE NIGHT Free versebetrayal,loneliness,
3/2/2014 THE WINDOWPANE Imagismlove,
2/21/2014 TEARS Free verselife,
2/13/2014 PROMISES Free verselove,
2/13/2014 A LOVE THAT WILL CROSS OVER Coupletlove,
2/10/2014 WHERE DO THEY GO WHEN THEY LEAVE Free verseabsence,remember,
2/6/2014 TEA PARTY Dramatic Verse (Verse Drama)dedication,inspiration,
2/6/2014 THE LOST SOCK Free versepoetry,
1/31/2014 FADE AWAY Free verse 
1/27/2014 NELL Free versegrandmother,life,love,
12/23/2013 THE BLOSSOMING OF THORNS Free versebeauty,pain,
12/23/2013 MOST DESERVING Free verseconflict,confusion,hope,l
12/21/2013 OLD MAN WINTER Personificationwinter,
12/17/2013 NATURE'S CHILD Free verselife,
12/1/2013 IF I WERE TINKERBELL Free versefantasy,
11/30/2013 A KING ARTHUR HOME Free verseculture,
11/26/2013 THANKSGIVING EVE Tankaloss,
11/23/2013 POETIC COMPARISONS Free verselife,poetry,society,
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11/9/2013 DUST BOWL SF Free versechange,life,nature,
11/4/2013 SKY Free verselife,native american,
11/2/2013 ETERNAL BREATH Free verseloss,love,
10/25/2013 GULF SHORE MOON Narrativedesire,love,moon,water,
10/25/2013 EVENING SONG Imagismanimal,eve,nature,
10/23/2013 MISTY MORNING Imagismmorning,nature,
10/19/2013 SHIELD MY JOY Free versegod,joy,
10/16/2013 BEATLE MANIA Free versecelebrity,
10/15/2013 NEW ORLEANS Where Living Is So Good Free versecommunity,culture,life,
10/14/2013 PIXILATED Free versejourney,self,
10/12/2013 HOPE Imagismhope,image,
10/11/2013 TOP OF THE STAIRS Free verseimagination,senses,
10/10/2013 EXTRAORDINARY ORDINARY Free versebeauty,happiness,life,
9/22/2013 THOUGHTS FROM A TREE Free versefeelings,nature,spoken wo
9/22/2013 MELTING RAINBOWS Free verseconflict,culture,society,
9/21/2013 EARTH ASTRONAUTS AND PARISIAN CAFES Free verseimage,society,world,
8/27/2013 WHOSE GARDEN Free versechange,poetry,
8/22/2013 LEFT SIDE OF NOWHERE Free versesocial,society,
8/17/2013 AT MIDNIGHT Free versepoems,
8/17/2013 ADDICTION Free versefeelings,identity,
7/28/2013 POETRY READING Free verseinspiration,introspection
7/27/2013 POACHING FROST Free versepoetry,words,
6/25/2013 A SECRET NEVER TOLD Free versedeath,grief,sister,
6/20/2013 PATTY-CAKE ANGELS Free verseangel,celebration,happine
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PoemTitleFormCategories
The Peace Sign Free versememory,peace,
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FINESSE Sonnetcharacter,
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Dear Robert Frost Free versepoetry,poets,
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My Poetry Garden Narrativegarden,
Hey Hank, Did You Just - Senryufunny,writing,
I need to feel Free verseangst,emotions,
What Am I Quatrainnature,
The Gift Dramatic monologueangel,beauty,
A Rare Place Blank versenature,
The Gift Verseencouraging,prayer,spirit
How Poetry Began Quatrainnature,poetry,
Hidden mountaineer Rhymehappiness,journey,
Holy Is The Lamb Free versedevotion,god,
I Recall The Wind Free versemom,moving on,
Soft September Verseautumn,
God's Kind Of Poetry Terza Rimabeauty,devotion,poetry,
FALL IN LOVE Acrosticautumn,love,nature,
The art of understanding Free verseprayer,
YESTERDAY'S JOYS Rhymechildhood,image,magic,
- Angels and Snow - Versemoon,snow,winter,
I am or maybe I am not Free versehow i feel,introspection,
Beneath the shattered Versebirth,courage,
The Hush of Christmas Past Sonnetchild,christmas,
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