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Blog Posted:1/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
Hello fellow viewers I am in need of comments on my new poems that I have recently posted. Please comments so I know how my work is thank you for your time :) Cheryl dunn
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  1. Date: 10/21/2014 4:15:00 PM
    I found you :) Teresa U.

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  1. Date: 10/21/2014 4:13:00 PM
    I found you :) Teresa U.

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  1. Date: 1/14/2013 8:33:00 AM
    This blog is a good idea... still leave comments on othere poems and we'll have a steady link back to yours... your friend.

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  1. Date: 1/13/2013 7:32:00 AM
    Not only is leaving comments on other poets poems a great way to be reciprocated, one will also learn more about forms, even grammar whilst commenting and learning from others. When I joined the Soup away back in 2009 I knew nothing about poetry. With the help of some really nice people and a variance of wonderful poets, I learned more than I could have imagined. <*> Everyday's a school day Cheryl, and the teachers here are well worth learning from <*> have a lovely Sunday :)

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 8:09:00 PM
    I've read and commented on four..seeing a love of the sea in each. Do you write on your phone?? I was wondering because the lines are all about the same length and some lines are one word that could be included in another. You've been given good advice. Be sure to reciprocate...if you want. Less is more, less is more !! lol

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 5:54:00 PM
    we've had this coversation before, if you comment on other writers they will likely comment on you, so sit yourself down, read 20 or so poems, say something and probably half those people will read something of yours and do the same

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    A   Avatar Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/12/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enough said....
  1. Date: 1/12/2013 4:31:00 PM
    No, no, no, no, nooou! : ) That's not how it works!! You have to comment on the poems of others and they will comment on yours. : ) OK, Im going to make an exception for you...just because im bored! : ) Have a nice evening.

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 1/13/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Watch out! LOL!
    Richards Avatar Suzette Richards Date: 1/13/2013 1:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hide! Ruben is bored..... :-)
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 1/12/2013 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : D!!!

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Needing comments Please
Date Posted: 1/12/2013 4:05:00 PM
Please comment on my poems so I know if they are any good, thank you for your time
Date Posted: 11/12/2012 11:41:00 PM

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