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  1. Date: 5/3/2014 10:22:00 PM
    I love Dickens...I love David Copperfield. My favorite character was Tommy Traddles....sweet boy. No wonder I loved this...This, I can deal with. This kind of enjambment I can....understand. Thanks, Craig. I love it.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2014 1:02:00 PM
    A beautiful piece but couldn't quite grasp what I thought of it til Andrea said an old fashioned feel... That fit perfectly. That and the feel of a real true one lost...

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  1. Date: 5/2/2014 8:18:00 PM
    It had that old fashioned feel to it that I knew it could not be current, so the way it was arranged confused me. Of course, i have already read the comments below. My only thing to add is that I was able to clearly understand it!!

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  1. Date: 5/2/2014 3:14:00 PM
    not keen, I've read similar a hundred times before, it's lacking in imagery for me...

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  1. Date: 5/2/2014 2:55:00 PM
    lots and lots of repetition, nice meter, pretty unoriginal take on a common subject

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  1. Date: 5/2/2014 2:14:00 PM
    Craig, I really like it....that's all I got to say bout that...

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  1. Date: 5/2/2014 10:37:00 AM
    I like the beginning its fresh and modern. The last two couplets push it too far toward a sonnet in particular-How Do I Love Thee? (Sonnet 43)-Elizabeth Barrett Browning, 1806 - 1861 -

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