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Life is an infinite continuum, feeding on its own death. Our mortality, real and imagined, lives within. We can always see these truths with a discerning eye. The mirrored images that seem like two, are but one, a parallel universe whose paths cross like a wisp of wind, we are all of one time, like prose and poems written in separate centuries, but of the same struggle. There, always there, truth never hides, except for those who don’t seek it  for fear of what they might find. From light to dark we fly in different directions though toward the same destination. What matters is what we do on our flight. Do we see the paths of leaves as they float on the pond, the reflection of the sky beyond, and the trees, who have now shed their leaves but will reflect full in the spring; beneath the leaves, the roots of the lily pads  and the stare of a wary carp who looks from his world as we do from ours? We must find time on our journey to read, play a game, or simply sit and wonder at the marvels around us, for death will come in its own time…

Cornish Sonnet Simplified


Blog Posted:3/10/2014 9:38:00 AM
Some have asked for clarification on the sonnet contest and after reading it over myself I can see why. The example poem would be unlikely to place high in my own contest because of its inconsistency in meter and syllable count. The only thing it's a good example for is the rhyme scheme. Also the definition is somewhat ambiguous in that it refers to all the lines as couplets which they are not. I copied the form off of The Poets Garret web site.  I would describe the Cornish Sonnet as two sestets followed by a couplet (6-6-2). The first line of each sestet becomes the couplet in that order, so the couplet therefore will not rhyme but when you write those first lines of each sestet makes sure they will make sense together to finish your poem and flow nicely as an ending as well as a start to your sestets. Also, the more consistent your meter is whether it is iambic, trochaic, anapestic, or dactylic, if you make it consistent along with syllable count and your poem also has a wonderful flowing story you will rank very high. Someone could possibly win over a perfectly metered poem with better substance but the two together will be unbeatable.  So remember the rhyme scheme Abacbc  Dedfef  AD
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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 4:42:00 PM
    Someday ... someday I'll write a sonnet. : D I promise!

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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 1:43:00 PM
    I will have to let this stew in my mind, for topic, theme... but it looks like a very lovely form, and I have been wanting to write sonnets lately. :)

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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 10:40:00 AM
    CRAIG....I JUST ENTERED! I DID EXACTLY WHAT YOU HAVE DESCRIBED HERE!!! I'm SO ebullient....I'll faint! Hmmmmm....does it need to be anonymous? I didn't write my name on it, but you could use mine as a sample!!! HA HA HA HA!!! Your contests ALWAYS push me to fly out of my little nest and soar on the wind!!! Hugs

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    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 3/10/2014 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Eileen there is your Betty Boop pose--love it!
  1. Date: 3/10/2014 10:33:00 AM
    as someone pointed out in my blog, your contest page has words that are cut by ads... have you seen it.. okay., will try to compose one for the contest.. huggs!

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My Past Blog Posts

 
Thomas Sowell
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Chopped III Judged
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Chopped III
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Chopped I
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Date Posted: 10/23/2014 4:27:00 PM
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Date Posted: 9/27/2014 4:25:00 PM
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11/19/2014 Applause in the Wind Crystallineseasons,
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9/30/2014 Pickett's Charge Blank versewar,
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8/31/2014 Autumn Alouette Verseautumn,
8/26/2014 A Note To My Sis Free verselife,
8/21/2014 Morning's Veil Ottava rimamorning,nature,
8/19/2014 Foodles Footlefunny,
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8/16/2014 No Matter Where I Roam Rhymetravel,
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8/9/2014 Perfect Free verselife,
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8/6/2014 Night Owl Rhymenature,
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7/28/2014 in the summer clouds Haikulife,rain,
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7/16/2014 The Scent of Water Sonnetlove,
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MY NYLON BIRD Dizainhappiness,education,
The Jaded Eye Sonnetdeath,love,heart,heart,
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MY SEX Free verselife,nature,people,men,wr
A Solstice Free versedeath,faith,religion,
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Cornflower Blue Free versehope,life,love,mystery,dr
Bastard Sun Personificationnature,parody,
Ballet is Poetry Free verseart,music,
EAST OF EDEN Sonnetfaith,nature,people,me,
SHADOWLANDS Free versedeath,faith,grief,history
SO Many Questions Quatrainromance,moon,
FLEETING VISUALS Free verseadventure,art,
LONELY Free verselife,lonely,me,people,swe
POETRY IS AN ECHO Rispettoon writing and words,me,
Poe and I Rispettolonely,lost love,
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The Angel Inside Rhymeallegory,angel,art,beauti
Kiss the Rain Quatraingirl,people,rain,romantic
A Sepia Recollection Free versefamily,grandfather,
The Old Wooden Bench Sonnetimagination,old,old,
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