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An Open Invitation to All
Blog Posted:1/31/2013 9:16:00 AM

 

So I heard a saying that "Those that can write- write and those that can't become critics." Since I can't write I have decided to try being a critic. I am looking for volunteers to offer up themselves in this endeavor. Simply soupmail me your age, how long you have been writing, and a general synopsis on what you are trying to accomplish with your writing. The only guidline is that you must have atleast fourty poems posted, but like a said that is a just a guidline. I will take my time to read and evaulate your entire body of work and not indivual poems though I may use excerpts of your work in my final write up that I will post in a blog so that everyone can judge how I have done. I repeat this is an open invitation to everyone, I will not be playing favorites and will be as unbiased as possible. I will be operating on a first come first serve basis as well. I will also be posting the general synopsis at the begining of my review so please do not send anything unappropriate. I will be far kinder to those that are young and have not been writing much than those that are far older and have been writing thier whole lifes. My intent though will to offer constructive criticism or praise not to offer my opinion.  I hope to make this a worthwile endeavor for all involved. Thank you for your time.
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  1. Date: 2/1/2013 7:06:00 AM
    Have at me if you want. I can take the heat!

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My Past Blog Posts

 
Editing Ruben
Date Posted: 8/17/2013 12:43:00 PM
Need your input
Date Posted: 8/13/2013 9:35:00 AM
Dot Dot Dot Dot
Date Posted: 7/17/2013 7:25:00 AM
A Question For The Owner of The Poetry Soup
Date Posted: 7/9/2013 9:13:00 AM
more focused thoughts with puncuation
Date Posted: 7/9/2013 8:19:00 AM
blame Ruben he engouraged me lolz
Date Posted: 7/5/2013 2:20:00 PM
bunch of random thoughts i forget before i get them all down
Date Posted: 6/27/2013 12:20:00 PM
Review of Debra Squyres
Date Posted: 3/14/2013 11:38:00 PM
Random Thoughts on Adventure Time
Date Posted: 2/20/2013 9:00:00 AM
Reviewing Joann Grisette
Date Posted: 2/20/2013 8:58:00 AM
poetry soup epic fail
Date Posted: 2/20/2013 8:41:00 AM
An Open Invitation to All
Date Posted: 1/31/2013 9:16:00 AM
To The Poetry Soup
Date Posted: 1/4/2013 10:14:00 AM
A lesson in perception, on what the soup is, and writing
Date Posted: 7/2/2012 8:24:00 AM
A Commentary on Commenting
Date Posted: 5/30/2012 5:38:00 AM
to all of you who enjoy posting 10 to a gizillion poems a day
Date Posted: 5/22/2012 8:11:00 AM

My Poems

Date PostedPoem TitleFormCategories
10/16/2013The Space BetweenKwansababridal shower,
8/13/2013message for contest winnersDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)people,
6/27/2013The Worm PoemDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)baby,death,epic,mother,

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Fav Poems

Poem TitleFormCategories
REFLECTIONEpicabuse,death,epic,for her,
LIQUID HEAVENFree versebody,happiness,heaven,lus
Death of the Poet DestroyerBalladbirth,change,conflict,dea
Devils Deadly DimeDramatic monologueabuse,day,epic,irony,judg
BUTTERFLY KISSCoupletfantasy,imagination,loveh
Indian InkDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)abuse,autumn,death,deep,f
Letting GoDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)depression,emotions,epic,
Sleepless NightDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)anger,death,farewell,memo
No ReservationDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)abuse,bullying,deep,evil,
A Near Death Experience of A SweetheartRhymedeath,death,god,death,god
Crayon CaressesRhymelove,
Sequence of LoveRhymelove,
Listen to the HeartRhymelove,heart,heart,
Disposable WisdomRhymelife,socialday,war,cat,ca
TOUCHRhymelove,me,

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
SKAT A United States Flag United States Read
Poet Destroyer A United States Flag United States Read
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Italy Flag Italy Read
Debra Squyres United States Flag United States Read
Royal Trevino United States Flag United States Read
Leonora Galinta Thailand Flag Thailand Read