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Cyndi MacMillan is a well-rounded writer who embraces many genres and forms. Her poetry has been published in The Fieldstone Review, Issue 2015.

http://www.fieldstonereview.usask.ca/contents.php?edition=latest

Her fiction has appeared in local newspapers and has won contests. She enjoys reading literary journals, and she is actively pursuing further publication within their glossy covers.

Verse is both magnetic and kinetic. She attempts - madly- to give equal attention to her poetry, short stories, and a novel-in-progress, the Trim of Wicks.  Regardless of genre, she focuses on language. One word has the power to repel or pull. She never forgets the reader and does her best to make their ride interesting.

Poetry soup is a good forum which enables people from around the world to share poetry. It has some great resources and provides a nice space for friends to meet.

Cyndi lives in a small town in Ontario with her husband, young daughter and far too many books.

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THE SOUP NEWSLETTER Nov 23 2012--theme POETIC LANGUAGE


Blog Posted:11/23/2012 8:14:00 PM

Poetry is ordinary language raised to the Nth power. Poetry is boned with ideas, nerved and blooded with emotions, all held together by the delicate, tough skin of words.

                                                          ~ Paul Engle ~



The language of poetry is universal. Regardless of the possible loss of a word or two in translation, the reader will recognize the commotion and emotional rollercoaster we call life.

The language of poetry is sumptuous, evocative, figurative. It may be simple to understand and yet not be the language of the everyday. It is recognizable as art.

The language of poetry will continue to evolve, change, rebel and question.


Some poets create their own language, a type of Joyce-like dialect which tosses the common out the window, dares to turn words upside down. Perhaps, they create their own syntax, break grammar rules in such a way that- within the framework of the poem- we are reading a Rosetta stone. We become fluent in something we've never heard.


ALL poets use a language born of the common vernacular of their homeland, a  tongue which communicates a culture, a history, a land. We only need to listen, translate from the heart!


Here are two newer poets to the Soup who use language like smiths, hammer their messages home, put iron to the flame. I am dazzled by their craft. Fantastic!



THE BLACK SPIRIT
Victoria Nunoo

Tales of the untold
Legends that are not chronicled
In the absence of the aged
Leaves a slot for the animated
Cowards in the quest
To conquer weakness
Are left in the seat of mockery
The smirk of the scorner
We refuse to be tamed
We are free spirited beings
A special mould from that kind of dust
The strength is in our staff
Spirit of the force
The black spirit!
We are the strongest
The natural order of life
Mother said so…
Our voices in unison
Calls out behind those hills
We fear nothing
Come forth, deal with us
We slay with passion
And heal with zeal
We speak the truth
We have the truth
Our common language
Love for brothers
Love for the world
We are who we are
We are Africans!



(better) done than said
By Onalethuso Petruss Buyile Ntema

the sounds between the lines
of the words i speak
reminds me of the lines
i spoke in thought and trials
and the lines
within the sounds of spoken word
touched mine heart
mine dreadlocks started skanking in joy
of the music in mine thought
but til done, i thought

next to mine were time and rhythm
for less than never it were missing
the sense to do than say
and mine legs kept me in transit
mine hands touched to pick a way
whence my eyes long seen
besides, talk were amass
done; far less
than which that caught mine
til done, i do and did
done than said

the inner mine person done me
a thought to catch mine power
and grab to proceed a synergy of our
own belief to mine self and stronger
than the sounds behind the lines
of the words i speak
but from the deep lines
of the metaphor, line by talk
with mine hands holding that thought
to keep it moving and done
long before said, as done

Soupers are keeping other Souper's in their thoughts and prayers as some deal with loss, hurts, worries, financial burdens, health issues, pain, addiction and the recovery from Tropical Storm Sandy.

Our community is international. Have any of you just blinked at times when you realize how close we feel here? We speak several times a week (some daily) to people around the globe. What a gift!

So, please, share what's on your mind. How are you?

Feel free to wax on,give a brief wave, talk shop or not, whatever you wish. I only ask that you keep things friendly. :)

Hugs to one and all,

Cyndi



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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 12:54:00 AM
    i am as honoured as blessed to have had my poem(s) on your preferences. its a milestone for me Cyndi and i have no doubt that my other poems will have a taste of uniqueness and regard. have a blessed festivity, til 2013 and looking forward for endless sprouting of pen to paper. blessed! www.poemhunter.com/onalethuso-petruss-ntema for almost 60 poems. thanks Cyndi. Ntema, Botswana

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  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:38:00 PM
    I wanted to stop by and say Happy Holidays to everyone and thanks to every poet who has soupmailed me and left warm messages and comments since I left. As some of you know, I am pregnant and had a lot of complications during my first trimester including an appendectomy and some time in the hospital. I'm still not in the writing mood but do miss all of you. One day, I will be back. Hugs to all and many blessings, Rhonda

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  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:35:00 AM
    Always learn, enjoy and am entertained by your blogs Cyndi!

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:10:00 PM
    LOL,Kim..I sometimes do that too:-) Its an amazing invention the whole internet thing,if used with caution that is.Sometimes I wonder how the English language will be in about..say,25-30 yrs into the future..? Youngsters over here in Scandinavia are adopting more and more english words into their sentences:) Guess its a direct result of the world wide connections we have these days.

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:31:00 AM
    Cyndi, it is amazing to me to think that I have friends all over the world, and that I can actually communicate with them whenever I want. I feel closer to some of you here on the Soup, than I do with people I know here in my own town. I tend to brag a little when I talk to others about this site- saying I know people in England, Canada, Austrailia, India, the Philippines, South Africa, etc. etc. I love PS! Kim

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 4:01:00 AM
    Cyndi,My wife is now home recovering following her major surgery .As her 'carer' I am 'learning' numerous house-husband activities !!!(maybe they may inspire a poem or two) as I am posting a poem here from time to time and will also be starting to comment here in any quiet moments between those tasks. In the meantime I wish creative blessings to my poetic peer friends here on PS and early Christmas greetings.Rgds Brian

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    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 11/24/2012 6:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hey Brian sorry to hear about your wife, you and I sound like we are in the same boat...David
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 1:14:00 AM
    Cyndi I shall use your blog to thank you personally for running the 'David' contest, and thank you all again who entered, my life is a lot easier now that my wife is up and about and we actually went out together yesterday for the first time in almost four months, breathing is a lot easier....David

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***EDIT***WHAT IS VANITY PRESS? New article, posted on this blog.
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Date Posted: 5/7/2015 12:05:00 PM
WORKSHOP NOW ON THE CONTEST PAGE. GIVING & RECEIVING CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK.
Date Posted: 5/6/2015 11:57:00 AM
KEEPING A PROMISE
Date Posted: 4/21/2015 9:55:00 AM
MY DREAM SOUP: NO CONTESTS ONLY WORKSHOPS. I MAKE A CASE.
Date Posted: 4/17/2015 10:17:00 PM
I CAN'T BREATHE ANTHOLOGY READY FOR ALL TO READ
Date Posted: 4/15/2015 8:37:00 PM
FINAL GIFTS: Last of the word pairings poem, featuring word pairings from Craig Cornish and Wala Na.
Date Posted: 4/13/2015 9:17:00 AM
BADLANDS BEN: Word pairings poem, includes pairings by John Lawless, Ruben, Olive, and Frederic
Date Posted: 4/12/2015 3:06:00 PM
NYMPHS AT NIGHTFALL: Another word pairing poem, Olive, Frederick and Rhonda word pairings
Date Posted: 4/11/2015 5:47:00 PM
MOJAVE. WORD PAIRING POEM 3 ...INSPIRED BY OLIVE (includes her pairing)
Date Posted: 4/11/2015 6:47:00 AM
THE HIERARCHY OF PUBLICATION CREDITS. MY ROAD TO PUBLICATION.
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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
6/18/2015 Cabinet Card, 1884 Sonnetchildren,death,history,
5/25/2015 MY POEM, MY CHILD Light Poetryencouraging,hope,writing,
5/6/2015 TAIL SPIN, REVISED Free versecourage,fear,love hurts,
4/25/2015 PIXIE MARAUDERS Free versebirthday,celebration,chil
4/13/2015 PUCKISH Versecharacter,games,wisdom,
3/28/2015 MOOSE IN HEADLIGHTS Free verseanimal,environment,
11/10/2014 CHAN Free versefriend,goodbye,
8/25/2014 HOSTEL, 1978 Free versehistory,places,
6/7/2014 TORRENT Sonnetcelebration,life,women,
4/8/2014 ROOTS Free versemoving on,power,teenage,
4/4/2014 GINGHAM AND LACE Versedaughter,love,
3/24/2014 50 GODS Free versegod,peace,philosophy,
3/15/2014 WINTER IN PORTLAND Free versedepression,winter,
2/25/2014 PITY THE PIRANHA Free verseintrospection,people,
2/2/2014 WORD ON THE STREET, 2009 Sonnetbooks,friend,places,poetr
1/31/2014 JOURNEY COMPANIONS: THE FRIEND SONNETS PART II Sonnetfriend,hero,places,poetry
1/29/2014 DIVINE STEEPLES Sonnetfriend,love,places,poetry
1/26/2014 MUSE Sonnetfriend,love,places,poetry
1/14/2014 MY HEART BELONGS TO MONTREAL Iambic Pentameterheart,places,
1/13/2014 EDUCATED Free verseeducation,life,truth,wisd
1/6/2014 THE STAND Prosetruth,
12/19/2013 EXPLORING THE BASEMENT Free verseabuse,childhood,courage,
12/12/2013 THE POET'S PRAYER Versepassion,poetry,
12/10/2013 UNHOLY Versewinter,
12/3/2013 LA VIE EN ROSE Light Poetrycharacter,imagination,
11/29/2013 RIPPLES Free versesad,writing,
9/28/2013 EMILY DICKINSON Sonnetpoetess,
8/6/2013 THE OTHER-WISE Free verseart,introspection,
7/24/2013 PIMPED Free versechildren,lust,society,
6/5/2013 BAIT, 1986 Free versegrowing up,lust,men,
6/3/2013 COME AND PLAY ME Lyricmuse,music,passion,romant
5/31/2013 haiku 6 Haikuchildren,summer,
5/28/2013 BLAMELESS Personificationrain,
5/22/2013 ALL FALL DOWN Sestinadeath,history,london,
5/5/2013 SUNDAY SOJOURN Haibungarden,morning,time,
4/28/2013 WOMEN Free versefriendship,gender,
4/26/2013 SYLVIA Crown of Sonnetslife,poets,writing,
4/20/2013 THE POET'S CREED Free versepoetry,world,writing,
4/18/2013 THE TYPESET OF ANAIS Free verselust,writing,
3/21/2013 PALADIN Free versepeople,sympathy,
3/12/2013 ALLUSIVE PEARL Free verseart,imagination,
3/11/2013 ELIZABETH'S DIARY Prose Poetryimagination,love,
3/6/2013 HIS-STORY Free verseimagination,night,
2/22/2013 haiku 3 Haikufunny,seasons,
2/17/2013 BIDALSANA Free verseme,passion,
2/12/2013 GURO, MAHAL KITA Sonnetfriendship,on writing and
2/7/2013 haiku 1 Haikuchild,seasons,metaphor,
2/3/2013 ALCHEMY Versefood,seasons,time,februar
1/8/2013 HIGHWAY OF TEARS Rhymemystery,women,women,
12/20/2012 THIS BLEAK HEREAFTER Terzanellechild,death,grief,night,m
12/6/2012 CASTING HIS LINE Rondeaudad,nostalgia,sports,
11/20/2012 HOMER'S HUES Free verseart,introspection,
11/14/2012 happy haiku 2 Haikudaughter,introspection,li
11/5/2012 THE SONG OF DEBORAH Sonnetdevotion,friendship,
11/4/2012 SHADOWLANDS Free versedeath,faith,grief,history
10/30/2012 RIBBON TIED Sonnethealth,hope,life,
10/29/2012 LADY LIBERTY Sonnetinspirational,
10/29/2012 THIS TIME Sonnetintrospection,on writing
10/23/2012 THREE QUILLS Rhymeage,history,people,
10/18/2012 DAVID Sonnetfriendship,people,
10/13/2012 POETIC TART Light Poetryfunny,on writing and word
8/28/2012 VERS LIBRE, A CONSTANZA Rhymeon writing and words,word
8/27/2012 BLUE NOTES Sonnetart,blue,imagination,musi
8/24/2012 INSENSED Sonnetsad,sister,
8/19/2012 haiku 202 Haikudaughter,nature,
8/15/2012 PEOPLE OF AUTUMN Sonnetfaith,longing,people,seas
8/15/2012 AUTUMN COLOURS Acrosticlife,seasons,autumn,thank
8/12/2012 DARFUR Sonneteducation,people,war,
8/7/2012 A VISIT TO THE NURSING HOME Balladdaughter,family,places,
8/6/2012 JE PRIE, I PRAY Free versehope,loss,places,words,he
7/31/2012 A TAPESTRY WOMAN Acrosticintrospection,life,
7/25/2012 WINDOWS Shapedeath,life,people,urban,
7/18/2012 A MINER'S PRAYER Kyriellehistory,life,people,
6/6/2012 A TRIP TO EGO Free verse 
5/25/2012 IMMIGRANT Sonnetpeople,places,
5/23/2012 BURY ME IN BRAMBLE Free versedeath,introspection,snow,
5/1/2012 SISTERHOOD OF SIGHS Free versefriendship,
4/22/2012 ODE TO FIREFIGHTERS Odededication,old,people,
3/2/2012 PERFECT BLEND Sapphic stanzahappiness,holiday,
2/24/2012 THE WILD HORSES OF ASSATEAGUE ISLAND Narrativeplaces,
2/17/2012 EULOGY FOR THE ELDON GALLERY, WATERLOO Free verseart,grandmother,life,plac
2/6/2012 BOUNDLESS Free verselife,me,people,teen,
1/12/2012 CYANIDE Villanellelost love,lost,lost,
11/26/2011 Whispers of Moogsmoorwood Free verseadventure,fantasy,words,m
8/17/2011 TIM HORTONS: A CANADIAN THING Free versefood,life,people,
6/11/2011 WHAT IF I JUST STOPPED WRITING Free verseintrospection,passion,

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
The Sowing Free versedevotion,
Ten Little Toes Rhymedaughter,lifeold,old,,gra
Woodland Rhapsody Quatraininspirational
Contradicting Keats Sonnetintrospection,life
Surrender to Love Rhymeloveme,
A Totum Pole Ode Concretenative american,people,
MORE DREAMS TO ROW Rhyme royalinspirational,life,
When the Tab Comes Due Free verseinspirational,introspecti
Lighting My Candle From Within Quintain (English)caregiving,introspection,
The Kirk by the Sea Coupletnostalgia,religion,love,
Moonlight On The Ward Chokahealth,life,
Nocturnal Poetry Rhymeimagination,life,poetry,
Slumber Epicdedication,epic,slam,
FROSTY NIGHT STROLL Coupletinspirational,seasons,
Our Thanksgiving Light Poetryholiday,
Tomorrow's Grace Ethereepeace,
A New Star Shines Above Hawaii Rhymededication,music,
Jesus, Our Savior Shapereligion,life,
Monarch of Summer Haibunanimals,devotion,inspirat
Untouched Rhymeforgiveness,me,me,
Midnight Pearls Than-Baukintrospection,love,
Beaucoup Blooms Terza Rimanature,spring,spring,
On Heaven's Doorway Narrativeinspirational,life,care,c
WALKING ON FAITH Versefaith,for children,
Beachworld Free verseplaces,sea,sun,
Sleepless Nights Narrativeangst,imagination,mystery
Another Face Rhymelost love,
Paired Parings Balladchildhood,
AUTUMN'S SPLENDOROUS BEAUTY Quatrainnature,autumn,autumn,
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis Epicabuse,analogy,corruption,
Anticipation Free verseautumn,death,life,
friend to friend Haikupeople,philosophy,
Calligraphy Verseon writing and words,
Cyndi Sonnetdedication,
Night Comes Rhymetime,
Without Hope's Gleam Terzanellehope,flower,flower,joy,pa
When Your Dead YOUR Dead Rhymefriendship,love,wife,
after my prayer Haikuinspirational,
Chamber Music Chopped Blank versemusic,
Money-God Free versededication,hope,love,reco
Down Fall Italian Sonnetbeautiful,miracle,nature,
God Forbid Coupletangst,devotion,write,life
To Kashinath and Cyndi Rhymededication,devotion,frien
Edinburgh Free versededication,
CHERISHED Sonnetlove,peace,
Shield Walls Lyricimagination,love,
Live The Cliches Free versedream,hope,love,poetry,
Bliss State Quatrainfaith,
A Reminder: To Be Free versetruth,writing,
A tribute to Leonora G Dramatic Versedeath,deep,epic,evil,sorr
IN THE MOOD Light Poetryadventure,woman,
Edinburgh Free versededication,hope,life,love
The Byway Rhymecare,
To Love Myself Sonnetlove,new year,self,
Westward Movement Free versedevotion,love,peace,
The Rocking Chair Rhymechild,christmas,sister,
To the Rescue Rhymesnow,
Onward Christian Soldiers Rhyme 
BEYOND TEARS Rhymechild,encouraging,hope,
Dewberry Cobbler Haibungrowing up,
Release Free verseencouraging,grief,hope,st
IN STILLNESS Free versechange,life,
Within Reason- Maurice Yvonne and Seren Roberts Verselife,

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Caryl Muzzey United States Flag United States Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Joe Flach United States Flag United States Read
nette onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Drake Eszes United States Flag United States Read
Mystic Rose Canada Flag Canada Read
mourning mist France Flag France Read
elizabeth wesley Canada Flag Canada Read
Rhonda Johnson-Saunders United States Flag United States Read
Ruben O. Argentina Flag Argentina Read
Carrie Richards United States Flag United States Read
kathryn collins United States Flag United States Read
Catie Lindsey United States Flag United States Read
james rogers United States Flag United States Read
David Williams United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Charmaine Chircop Malta Flag Malta Read
Francine Roberts Canada Flag Canada Read
Eileen Manassian _Not Listed Flag _Not Listed Read
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Faye Gibson United States Flag United States Read
Hannington Mumo Kenya Flag Kenya Read
Lora Robinson United States Flag United States Read