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About Cyndi MacMillan
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Bloggers Photo Writing a biography irks me. How much to reveal? What tidbits to conceal?  

        The Basics: I’m a 45 year-old, stay-at-home mom of an adorable two year old girl. I’m happily married to a wonderful man who is my living contradiction, the quiet to my loud, the calm to my frantic. Life continually amuses, bemuses and confuses me.

        My first poem, which I wrote at five, was entitled, “Lov is Magik” and my father kept the fading, folded paper I scribbled it upon in his wallet for decades. I have tinkered in poetry ever since, but my main passion is fiction. My short stories have been published in the local papers. Occasionally, I dabble with creative non-fiction. I have a several chapters of a book completed which I’m hoping to submit to Avalon Books.

   Despite years of living in Ontario, I will always consider myself foremost a Montrealer. Now living in Waterloo County, home of Research in Motion, maker of the Blackberry, I am content in our downsized apartment which is close to uptown, but overlooks Laurel Creek.  Though considered Canada’s Silicon Valley, the city is surrounded by a picturesque countryside filled with Mennonites. It is not uncommon to see a Mercedes Benz carefully pass a horse drawn wagon. Even our local hardware stores provide parking for buggies. We have many wonderful festivals, two universities, and culture galore.

         I spent years as an E.C.E. teacher and adore children. Now, that I have one of my own –after 16 heartbreaking years of infertility – my days are filled with finger paints and drinking imaginary tea from tiny pink tea cups. Sleep is a distant memory and writing is my night time balm. My hubby works evening shifts. After my girl is asleep, my imagination runs wild and I write.

I am a Jill of all trades. I've worked as a personal care attendant in a home for young people with physical and developmental challenges. Had a short go as a dishwasher in my younger days, oh joy.  I've also been an engraver, a store manager, a cashier at the Sally Anne, but my last job was as at an office where I worked on databases (I WISH I was a geek.)

As a newer member of Poetry Soup, I am often dazzled by its diversity,the quiet, shy voices, the bellows in the foreground, the cackles in the corners. There is so much talent here! I love the contests run by its members as I enjoy a challenge.

    Nice to meet you!  Looking forward to growing together, as writers and friends.

 

Hugs, Cyndi


 

Most Recent Blog Post


SOUP NEWSLETTER, Nov 16, 2012
Blog Posted:11/16/2012 8:09:00 PM

 

The need for rhyme makes a writer mix in the mind registers

and topic fields in an unpredictable way and this enables

surprising and imaginative expressions to be developed

which will be enhanced if the rhyme also contributes

as it should to the sonic structure of the poem.


                                            BJ Pendlebury

Megan Stringfellow, pistol-fury at Dracula's



A poem that uses rhyme with sophistication is like a painting that casts a new light on a familiar subject or scene.

I love rhyme when it is done well, when you are so taken by imagery and message that you for a moment forget the echo of sound. GREAT rhyme becomes a mere backdrop that somehow holds you there, the rhythm of the words start to match your heartbeat. There is nothing safe about the rhythm. There is nothing predictable about the rhythm. The rhythm is hypnotic, entrancing. The beat has you.

Sometimes, the beat is slow, comforting, a cool lake on a hot day. Sometimes, the beat is savage, has you gasping as you run from the tiger at your heels.And sometimes, the beat is so clever that you hold your breath, forget the need for air.

Here are two new poets to Soup who are MASTER rhymers. Rhyme deserves respect AND applause when it is done THIS well. Hey, poets, I forgot to breathe!


Heart
By Ira Dawson
Member since: Nov 2012


She hallowed out her heart again,
She tore out all the black.
Then scraped the walls with her bare hands,
Until she reached the back.
She washed off all the rusted screws,
And broken veins, and pounding wounds.
She tried to make sense of this scene,
But honestly, she could not think.
She knew she had to start fresh,
But in her chest was left a mess.
But in her hands was left the flesh,
Of memories and secrets kept.



No Road Returns
By Florian Beauchamp

Member since: Nov 2012

No road returns
but turns instead
around the words
you should have said
and leads at last
to this damp bed
where half-lights
flicker in your head
and all around
the books you’ve read
can’t tell you why
the white swan bled
and tore itself
to pieces overhead
while you, in doubt,
read on instead.

The strangest sights
the strangest sounds
now reach the earth
from underground
your place betrayed
your hiding found
your heart is measured
pound for pound.

And all those words
you never said
must heavy weigh
your heart like lead
and burdened so
in your sick bed
must leave the light

 to join the dead.


From your sponsor...
Please, leave your news,

leave your views,
leave us a few bars of fresh blues,
leave a line of verse that may confuse,
leave the pieces that others refuse.

Though I understand life can lay you low,
take a break,
take a month,
take a holiday,
take that hurt and peel its decay,
take as long as you need,
take a look and make it bleed,
take a walk with a friend,
take an ear and force it to bend,
take time for yourself, for family,
take heartbreak and set it free,
take your loss and let it grieve,
oh, but sweet friends
think twice before you go,
and please do not take your leave.

Love YOUS.

xox



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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:01:00 PM
    Yep, wonderful rhymes. Thanks for pointing them out!!

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 8:00:00 PM
    Both poems are beautiful! Ira's "Heart" and these breathtaking lines: "She knew she had to start fresh,/But in her chest was left a mess./But in her hands was left the flesh"!!... And Florian's "No Roads returns" is just quite oustanding! ('ll check their poems).

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:45:00 PM
    Cyndi, thanks for sharing these magnificent poems with us today. They are truly talented. Luv, Gail

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:57:00 AM
    I see what you mean about getting lost in the rhythm and rhyme. Awesome new poets. Well, my father has been diagnosed with stomach cancer. The doctors see no point in telling us the size of the tumor, nor what stage of cancer he has, since he has refused all treatment. Doctors seem to have too much power, and not enough consideration for family members. So anyway, i am trying to put together the funds to go see pop before it's too late. I'll do it. Love and hugs, catie :)

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:41:00 AM
    Plaudits to you and the fantastic new poets!

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My Past Blog Posts

 
PARDON ME WAITER, THERE'S A LESSON IN MY SOUP
Date Posted: 6/16/2013 3:08:00 PM
THE SOUP NEWSLETTER, SHORTIE VERSION, JUNE 8 2013
Date Posted: 6/9/2013 4:51:00 PM
AM I DISGUSTING? IS THIS DISGUSTING!!!!! RUMOUR CONTROL, HERE!
Date Posted: 6/7/2013 6:42:00 AM
IS IT ONLY ME OR ARE THE BLOGS WAY DOWN LOW? DOES ANYONE ELSE HAVE THIS? THE BLOGS I OPEN HAVE A BLANK PAGE BEFORE THE BLOG STARTS
Date Posted: 6/5/2013 8:09:00 AM
POETIC DEVICES, BLOG 2, A REPOST, FOR ALL POETS, BUT ALSO FOR ALFRED... YES, WE DO HELP EACH OTHER HERE!
Date Posted: 6/5/2013 7:29:00 AM
I MISS RUBEN!
Date Posted: 5/28/2013 3:04:00 PM
THE SHINING, A SESTINA, and may Stephen King forgive me for butchering his work, pun intended...YO ANDREA
Date Posted: 5/27/2013 9:06:00 PM
ANDREA, BRING IT ON! HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT :D trust me, you'll love this!
Date Posted: 5/24/2013 4:47:00 PM
SO YOU THINK YOU CAN'T WRITE A SESTINA. HA!
Date Posted: 5/23/2013 9:44:00 PM
THE IRONY OF MY IGNORANCE--RE: BANGLADESH
Date Posted: 5/19/2013 7:15:00 AM
HO HEY: WRITE ME A PUB SONG, WINNERS!
Date Posted: 5/14/2013 9:16:00 PM
A LOVE LETTER TO INDIA... A TRIBUTE, FOUND ON THE CONTEST PAGE, update on pub songs
Date Posted: 5/14/2013 6:47:00 AM
PRAYERS AND CONCERN FOR BANGLADESH
Date Posted: 5/7/2013 12:34:00 PM
Daily Haiku: The journal of Contemporary Haiku
Date Posted: 5/7/2013 5:30:00 AM
DOES ANYONE HAVE NEWS OF OUR LINDA-MARIE?
Date Posted: 5/7/2013 4:51:00 AM
HAIKU AND PHOTO-- Use as a prompt, share news, whatever
Date Posted: 5/5/2013 4:54:00 PM
HAIKU AND PICTURE... feel free to use as a prompt, add a haiku, thought, news, whatever! <3
Date Posted: 5/4/2013 11:16:00 AM
MOMMY BLOG: TACTICAL PARENTING
Date Posted: 5/1/2013 8:35:00 PM
SOME OF THE PEOPLE ON SOUP. WHO I THINK YOU ARE. TAKE A PEEK!
Date Posted: 4/29/2013 8:14:00 PM
SYLVIA, A CROWN OF SONNETS, FOR CRAIG & ALL PLATH FANS
Date Posted: 4/26/2013 4:11:00 PM
Sak Vid Pa Kanpe, ghostwritten... YO RUBEN!
Date Posted: 4/25/2013 12:10:00 AM
NEXT DARE, FIX SOMEONE'S UNFIXABLE. PROVE IT CAN BE DONE! WHO'S IN? RUBEN, I TAG YOURS... LET ME DO IT!
Date Posted: 4/24/2013 5:43:00 PM
OH, LORD, I SWORE I'D NEVER SHARE THIS... JUST FOUND IT... CIRCA 1998
Date Posted: 4/24/2013 4:58:00 PM
OLD SERVING OF CRAP FOR PD AND RUBEN... COME 'N GET IT WHILE IT STINKS TO HIGH HEAVEN
Date Posted: 4/23/2013 3:43:00 PM
Z IS FOR ZARIA, WINNERS and CONGRATULATIONS!
Date Posted: 4/16/2013 10:30:00 PM

My Poems

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Date PostedPoem TitleFormCategories
6/16/2013PARDON ME WAITER, THERE'S A LESSON IN MY SOUPRhymefriendship,wisdom,
6/10/2013REMEMBERING WHENRhymehistory,
6/6/201336-18-34Shapefreedom,history,women,
6/5/2013COME, ARIONSonnetfantasy,horse,mythology,
6/5/2013BAIT, 1986Free versegrowing up,lust,men,
6/3/2013COME AND PLAY MELyricmuse,music,passion,romant
5/31/2013haiku 6Haikuchildren,summer,
5/29/2013TURNING WENDIGOFree versemurder,mystery,
5/28/2013HER FIRST PLACESonnetart,imagination,
5/28/2013BLAMELESSPersonificationrain,
5/27/2013THE SHINING, STEPHEN KING PLEASE ACCEPT MY SINCERE APOLOGIESSestinaevil,film,horror,
5/22/2013ALL FALL DOWNSestinadeath,history,london,
5/18/2013POETRYFree versepoetry,
5/13/2013MADE IN BANGLADESHGhazalchange,clothes,death,
5/10/2013Contemporary haikuHaikuchildren,family,mother,sw
5/7/2013LOVE CLAMORS, A DIRGE FOR CIVILITYVillanellecare,people,rights,
5/6/2013haiku for CatieHaikugames,sexy,
5/5/2013SUNDAY SOJOURNHaibungarden,morning,time,
5/3/2013a cluster of menHaikusummer,
5/3/2013haiku - For MomsHaikulife,may,mother,
5/3/2013haiku 7 - verblessHaikuseasons,
5/2/2013FLOWER FAERIESQuintain (English)fairy,flower,
4/28/2013WOMEN, FOR DEBBIE GUZZIFree versefriendship,gender,
4/26/2013SYLVIA, FOR CRAIG CORNISH, FOR ALL PLATH FANSCrown of Sonnetslife,poets,writing,
4/20/2013THE POET'S CREEDFree versepoetry,world,writing,
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Fav Poems

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The Sowing Free versedevotion
Ten Little ToesRhymedaughter,lifeold,old,,gra
Woodland RhapsodyQuatraininspirational
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Surrender to LoveRhymeloveme,
A Totum Pole OdeConcretenative american,people,
MORE DREAMS TO ROWRhyme royalinspirational,life,
FALLEN LEAFDizainnature,
When the Tab Comes DueFree verseinspirational,introspecti
Lighting My Candle From WithinQuintain (English)caregiving,introspection,
The Kirk by the SeaCoupletnostalgia,religion,love,
Moonlight On The WardChokahealth,life,
Nocturnal PoetryRhymeimagination,life,poetry,
SlumberEpicdedication,epic,slam,
FROSTY MOONLIT STROLLCoupletinspirational,seasons,
Our ThanksgivingLight Poetryholiday,
Tomorrow's GraceEthereepeace,
A New Star Shines Above HawaiiRhymededication,music,
UNSPOKENLyricangst,love,people,
Jesus, Our SaviorShapereligion,life,
Monarch of SummerVerseanimals,devotion,inspirat
UntouchedRhymeforgiveness,me,me,
Midnight PearlsThan-Baukintrospection,love,
Beaucoup BloomsTerza Rimanature,spring,spring,
On Heaven's DoorwayNarrativeinspirational,life,care,c
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