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First a 'face' to go with my name.. and how does one add smileys here. There's a lot to learn!

Okay now to add more... "Who's gautami??!!"  She herself doesn't know yet,, It's a journey she has undertaken knowing others and trusting others more than she does herself(no, no, not what you think :).. what that means is, she is a very trustworthy person just that she trusts her friends more). May be and hopefully by the time she reaches the end,, she will be able to tell about herself with some certainty. Right now, she's in a  l o t  of doubt!!!!




(( Still, if someone seriously wants to know me,, then I'd say.. If you happen to meet me some day then you'd wonder- "How do you catch a wave upon the sand?" Now, does that ring a bell? Well, that's me in entirety! :)   ))





Dabbling in Poetry Forms - Contest Judged


Blog Posted:4/1/2014 7:15:00 AM
Thanking all the participants who entered their poems in my contest. As I had first thought I'd select only 10, I couldn't when I saw the poems. They were such an interesting mix of forms, which I hadn't truly expected. I loved them, took great pleasure in reading them.. I develop a fondness for the poems which I receive in my contests and I get a feeling like those poems that you send to me, share with me are partly mine too, since I easily attach to everything that comes close.

Judging this contest was a great deal of hard work. The poems which placed higher were to me like a revelation made through art! The level of difficulty in writing those forms, what profound emotion I could read, craftsmanship of words and phrases, a uniqueness that I was looking for; and also the beauty and originality of thought in some of those poems just blew me away. I also considered the length of poems , but not always since sometimes it is a short poem that grabs your attention more and reaches to you, rather than a long wishy-washy and tedious write.

So here are the 20 winners of this contest... (I yet don't know who wrote these poems, so I can't add the names.. shall add later)  The sequence is how they appear on my contest page Round 3.


1st    Archaic Heraldry   (Verse-Iambic Decapentasyllabic or Political verse) 
          - Giorgio A. V.

1st    Beneath the Copper Trees  ( Terzanelle)             -  Carrie Richards


2nd   Pictures at an Exhibition Female symphonies by Picasso and Ravel
          (Rhyme)   - Elly Wouterse

2nd   Memories on Branches (Quatrain)      - Kelly Deschler

2nd   The Abbey Garden (Ballade)    - Kim Bond


3rd   The Play of Light (Villanelle)      - Mike Jones

3rd   City of Thirsty Soul  (Rispetto)   - Reason A. Poteet

3rd   Soaked in Dew ( Pantoum)    - Nette Onclaud

3rd    A Mermaid and Three Fishermen ( Retourne Form)  - Dr Ram Mehta


4th    Water Portraits ( Crystalline) - Barbara Gorelick

4th    Sleep ( Etheree)   - Ralph Sergi

4th    The Seasons of Love (Quatrain)  - Andrea Dietrich


5th    The Seasons ( couplets)   - Joyce Johnson

5th    Feminine Intentions ( Quatrain)   - F. J. Thomas


6th    Trust ( Rondeau)  -  Ronald Zammit

6th    Marriage is Not Meant For This Generation (Reverse or palindrome Poem)
         - Adeleke Adeite


7th    Eggs Benedict (Epulaeryu)  -  Robert Pettit

7th    Blow The Winds Slowly (Etheree) - Seren Roberts

7th    The Evil Intruder  (Dizain)   - Tim Smith

7th    For Every Month of March in Every Year ( Acrostic) 

          -
Abdulhafeez Oyewole



Saying Thank YOu once again and....Big Congrats to All The Winners!




 


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  1. Date: 4/2/2014 2:35:00 PM
    Thank you so much for my placement, Gautami. I do appreciate it! Congratulations to all of the winners! :)

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    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 4/3/2014 3:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My pleasure Kelly,, It was a joy to read your poem! Thank you and Congratulating once again for your winning write... and I also have to thank you for honoring my poem in your contest "Every Rose has its Thorn".. a beautiful theme. It inspired and urged so many here to create some very good work. love to you dear...
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 3:02:00 PM
    i enjoyed this one, gautami.. cheers to all who joined and more light/ love to you.. thank you; namaste!.. huggs

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    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 4/1/2014 5:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love you too nette , you were awesome as always.. Congrats my sweet friend and thank you so much for gracing my contest!
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 9:54:00 AM
    It was a nice opportunity to run at a different format ;) Congrats Ladies and Gents.

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    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 4/1/2014 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats to you FJ, yours was a wonderful piece of writing, very powerful which I loved! Thank you so much for supporting this contest. love and huggs...
  1. Date: 4/1/2014 8:35:00 AM
    I made an exception this time, where I overlooked the rules,, 1. The poem- "Pictures at an Exhibition..." got placed, even though it was not exactly in the category of definite structured verse I'd asked for. I couldn't eliminate it still. The poetic material simply overwhelmed me... and 2. Dr Ram's Poem, where his name got mentioned(I'm sure erroneously)but here also, because of it's excellent form which I wanted introduced, and it being very wisely written with that element of cuteness I love so much. I simply love that child like quality when I see in a poem. So, I kept them. I deducted 1 point from each and placed them one place lower.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2014 8:03:00 AM
    Gautami! Thank you very much for the granted honor and top placement. Congratulations to all contestants and our kind host. Smiles to all! G.

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    phookan Avatar gautami phookan Date: 4/1/2014 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Smiles to you too Giorgio,, and CONGRATS!! You were beautiful!

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