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About harry horsman
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Bloggers PhotoHi it is time i introduced myself, I was born in Skipton Yorkshire, England, and still have a accent belonging to my birth place. in 1966 my wife Elaine and i and our two sons moved to New Zealand, where the boys were raised. then we  moved on to the city of Perth  in Western Australia.
After 45 years away we both decided to have a move back to the yorkshire dales where we were raised. leaving our children and grandchildren in what i consider the best places on the planet. (NZ-OZ)
Our reason for the move back to the uk was to be able to discover our back yard so to speak, and we have a desire to go to europe, especially scandinavia and germany.
 I would like to say how much i'm enjoying my trip here on soup, and really loved the poems posted, my bigest problem being time, i always seem to be catching up, being able only to spend two to three days on here, even then with limited hours, so please forgive me if my comments seem later than most.  I also love football (soccer) Newcastle United in England being my team, then music, all kinds but mainly Rock 'n' Roll, i'm  a avid record collector, especially old vinyl LP's of the Fifties. my favourite poet is W. H Davies, along with a few on soup here, I do not get a lot of time to read these days, but my favourite Author is Dennis Wheatley, also i love  the the Bronte Sisters, being raised only 10 miles from Haworth, one gets a real feel for their literature, when one visits the area.   Harry

5W's CONTEST JUDGED


Blog Posted:8/27/2012 4:25:00 AM
WOW MY FIRST CONTEST AND NOT EASY, THE MORE I READ ALL THE ENTRIES THE BETTER THEY SEEM TO BECOME, CHANGED I DID SO MANY TIMES THE PLACEMENTS I HAD TO STOP MYSELF FROM READING AND MAKE THE DECISION, 4 POEMS WERE DISQUALIFIED FOR NOT FOLLOWING THE RULES 2 OF THOSE WERE TOP 5 POEMS.pLACES 1 TO 4 I THOUGHT WERE OUTSTANDING, THE REST WERE BRILLIANT AND THATS WHERE IT GOT TRICKY FOR ME, BUT I'VE MADE MY CHOICE, AND THAT IS IT. WHETHER I'LL DO ANOTHER REMAINS TO BE SEEN, AS I'M NOT COMFORTABLE WITH THE SINGLE JUDGE SYSTEM. AFTERALL IT IS ONLY THAT ONE'S PERSON OPINION. I'D LIKE SOME FEEDBACK ON THIS. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Congrats to everyone and congrats on your first contest, Harry : )

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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 12:32:00 AM
    so sorry, i missed this contest, harry!... will be there for the next one... congrats to all winners and entrants... :) huggs!

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:22:00 PM
    Harry, your contest idea was very clever. I give you high marks for creativity! You are no longer a virgin. hahaha. Congrats on finishing up your first contest, and thanks for my placement. I read all the comments below mine and they are all good and many of them mirror my own feelings on the contests. Luv, Andrea (Congrats to us all!)

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:41:00 PM
    Thanks Harry Congrad's all I will try to read all of them soon. Light & Love

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:18:00 AM
    As for the judging conundrum, if you enjoyed running this contest, by all means, sponsor another contest. These aren't professional contests(obviously), and many writers gear their entries towards the person running the contest(the style, devices and themes that the sponsor enjoys). The most important thing is not to give in to the whiners, the complaints of the sore losers. If you ignore them, this works best. Attempting to appease sore losers, just makes things more complicated. I learned this the hard way....I have the tendency of learning things the hard way.

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:14:00 AM
    Hullo Harry. You didn't have to place my message....it truly was a message more than anything else. Not really a poem, as it barely used any poetic devices at all. Good on you for getting your 1st contest behind you(took long enough for you to sponsor one, ol' Boy!).

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:57:00 AM
    Harry, thank you for my placement in your contest. I agree that judging these contests is really tough. I don't like hurting people's feelings if I don't place their poem, but it is a contest. There will always be winners and losers.

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:15:00 AM
    Thank you for my place Harry...I wish I could tell you judging gets easier but it doesnt...i guess thats comes from having soooooooooooo much talent on the site xxx

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:26:00 AM
    It is hard when you first begin, but it gets easier over time. I constantly remind myself that I shouldn't feel guilty if someone doesn't place and expresses their unhappiness. We are all human and we're not going to like everything we read. We have our own persoanl tastes and that's all we can judge by. Just have fun with it and realize that your contests inspire people to write :)

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:56:00 AM
    Well I think you know my feedback on this tears and more tears... no only kidding dear boy, if you do one again I will give you a hand if you want but you lead the way, all in all a great contest pity you stuffed at the end ha ha xx

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:32:00 AM
    I had a great time writing for your contest.. I have never judged a contest so I probably am not much help sorry.. have a great day cory

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:15:00 AM
    Thanks Joann, yes i do agree with you, regards it being one's own contest, but sometimes i think the poets forget that it is only that one judges opinion, and take it personally, this is what i read into some of the comments or blogs from disappointed poets. Thanks for your feedback. Harry.

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:00:00 AM
    Thanks for hosting this contest. I was also daunted by the one person judging, so I tend to give out more places than some others judges. Poetry is subjective, from the writer and from the reader point of view. Do what you like, it is your contest.

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:37:00 AM
    Thank you for a contest which made me at least think outside the box. I enjoyed creating with the prescribed opening words. Thank you for my placement. I have not read all yet, but I agree that it must have been a difficult choice to make between some entrants poems.We certainly have some talent here on soup :-) Love, Suzette

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My Past Blog Posts

 
BEST WISHES TO ALL OF YOU
Date Posted: 12/24/2013 9:35:00 AM
MANDY TAMS THE GOLDEN GIRL
Date Posted: 10/16/2013 11:44:00 AM
YORKSHIRE DAY THANKS MANDY
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OUR GOLDEN GIRL MANDY TAMS
Date Posted: 6/23/2013 5:12:00 AM
POETRY POSTING
Date Posted: 3/23/2013 11:32:00 AM
MEMBERS
Date Posted: 2/27/2013 3:13:00 PM
TIME
Date Posted: 2/18/2013 6:10:00 AM
ANOTHER POET GONE??????????
Date Posted: 2/1/2013 5:43:00 AM
SOUP SLOWING UP?
Date Posted: 1/29/2013 10:00:00 AM
HELP ENGLISH LANGUAGE,SUZETTE C, DEBBIE G, ANDREA D, AND IF YOU'RE LOOKING BRIAN STRAND, OR ANYONE ELSE!
Date Posted: 1/27/2013 5:02:00 AM
TWO ANGELS IN ONE NAME
Date Posted: 1/20/2013 5:43:00 AM
ERROR 500
Date Posted: 12/27/2012 9:49:00 AM
ALL IN A DAYS WORK
Date Posted: 12/24/2012 2:21:00 PM
JUST A THOUGHT ANSWER,
Date Posted: 12/4/2012 9:30:00 AM
JUST A THOUGHT
Date Posted: 12/3/2012 7:17:00 AM
GOODBYE
Date Posted: 11/14/2012 10:54:00 AM
MANDY GOLDEN GIRL TAMS
Date Posted: 11/10/2012 6:43:00 AM
HERE WE GO AGAIN II
Date Posted: 11/5/2012 2:52:00 PM
SHE IS BACK
Date Posted: 11/4/2012 2:56:00 AM
SOME POETS HERE ON SOUP
Date Posted: 11/2/2012 8:03:00 AM
ERROR 500
Date Posted: 10/19/2012 7:24:00 AM
HAPPENING AGAIN
Date Posted: 10/6/2012 2:35:00 PM
DATING AGENCY
Date Posted: 10/4/2012 3:28:00 PM
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Date Posted: 9/9/2012 7:29:00 AM
SOMETHING DIFFERENT AGAIN,
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how do I say good-bye?I do not know?death,father,loss,sad,hou
The War's Over!Free verseallegory,introspection,li
Senior Moments Rhymefunnycar,
My Poems Are Children To MeFree verseon writing and wordschild
Modern Marketing, A sonnetSonnetangst,men,
Falling StarsFree versehopestar,star,
THE PUPPET MASTERDramatic monologueintrospection,
Woman's WorkSonnetallegory,caregiving,dedic
Broken Eyes Rhymelife,sad
LeadershipRhymeon work and workingpeople
Itsy, Bitsy, Teenie, Weenie BrainLyricfunny,political
Thursday Tea With Lucifer *Part II* (Born again Luciferian)Free verseintrospectionfaith,me,
Sphinx Head on MarsFree versefunny
Honking RecedesHaikuanimals,nature,seasons
Henry the EighthNarrativehistoryme,age,age,body,me
Skin DeepRhymeintrospectionmen,
White LaceSonnetlife,seasons
No Greater HeroFree versededication,father,inspira
Devils Deadly DimeDramatic monologueabuse,day,epic,irony,judg
Love ScatteredFree verselove,sadlove,me,
Summer RestoredHaikunature
Time UnwindingFree verseimagination,inspirational
wind mutters softlyHaikunature
What Easter Means to MeRhymefaith,holidayheart,easter
How A Blue Rose Came to Be Rhymedeath,imagination,love,ro
NOT GONE FOREVERTankanature
Yesterdays PeopleFree verselife,peopleautumn,
A Question of FaithEthereefaith,
My PocketsLight Poetryfunny,me,me,
SnowdropsRhymenature,winter,winter,
Greed and DeceitFree verseangst,family,
DementiaRhymelife,sympathy,life,life,
Samurai Song: Singing BladeChokadeath,hope,life,
Peer Pressure of the WorstCoupletfear,life,loss,war,
Modern LifeRhymefunny,life,car,me,work,wa
Bethlehem's StarFree versefaith,holiday,
Morning Has Broken - 1Quatrainday,fantasy,fear,me,
Morning Has Broken - 2Quatrainfantasy,
Autumn ReverieRhymenostalgia,autumn,flying,
A New YearRhymeholiday,peace,peace,
And Now For Something Completely DifferentFree versemystery,funeral,old,funer
'Uniquely You'Free verseintrospection,life,
Plockton - Wester RossRhymeadventure,angst,death,epi
Virgin AmericaFree verseadventure,allegory,animal
To me True Love isVerselove,romance,
Gold StarNarrativechildhood,war,war,star,bl
The Warp and The WeftCoupletinspirational,
A Golden JourneyCoupletanniversary,love,
Simple Words for Simple PeopleFree verselove,on writing and words
Barricaded BabiesFree versechildhood,family,fear,foo
UnconfinedQuintain (English)lost love,
Thirtieth High School ReunionRhymefunny,school,me,me,
Sentinel of Strength Rhymededication,mother,women,
WisdomI do not know?life,
In the Sun's Last GlowQuintain (English)lost love,heart,heart,may
'Memories'Free verseconfusion,life,love,
A Great UneaseRondeaulife,me,me,
Dark AngelSonnetangst,
THE DEVIL IN A BOTTLEVerselife,happy,dad,work,praye
TAPESTRYAcrosticlife,
Eleven WordsFree verselifeold,tree,old,tree,
Wishes and DreamsCoupletday,deep,dream,health,lif
Gift Exchange To Brian From MandyCoupletfriendship,poets,
Woodland PathCoupletfriendship,inspirational,
'Blowing A Kiss To You'Tankafriendship,love,
Harridan in a HousecoatQuaternpeople,children,father,da
Missing MomRhymedaughter,loss,love,mother
Morning in the Conway HouseCoupletlife,me,morning,
The Green Eyed LadQuatrainfriendship,fun,green,long
ContractBalladadventure,
5 W'sQuintain (English)friendship,
An Eagle's PrayerRhymefaith,inspirational,visio
Prince HarryRhymepeople,
911 Aftermath Misguided HatersVersefear,on work and working,
PoetFree verseart,tribute,
I PineFree versenature,
PainBalladadventure,
PoetsQuatrainconfusion,funny,art,art,p
Natural Born Dreamers Dramatic Verse (Verse Drama)death,loss,sad,baby,baby,
talibanAcrosticangst,people,places,war,
Occupy My HomeDramatic Verse (Verse Drama)introspection,
Beyond the signNarrativeadventure,epic,imaginatio
Once Upon A Car RideFree verseconfusion,depression,fear
PoetryTankaon writing and words,
Ruby LipsLight Poetrylove,passion,romance,love
Babylon-KidsProse Poetryhope,life,love,mystery,wo
Just Too MuchRhymeintrospection,
As Lovers GoPersonificationnature,summer,sun,
A Road Still DrivenQuatraininspirational,love,
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The FlameRhymelife,light,
Save The Last Dance For MeCoupletlove,romantic,dance,night
Down for the CountRhymehealth,
Do You RememberSonnetfriendship,
Lest we forgetLight Poetrygoodbye,
Jungle WarQuatrainhistory,war,home,home,
TakenRhymefear,grief,
GunsCoupletdeath,life,nice,nice,
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