Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Home

About
(Show Details...)
Bloggers PhotoPoet Biography

Please Login
 
  1. Date: 9/29/2012 9:00:00 PM
    Hullo, Lee. I think that forced rhyme is inferior. When I have a desire for my contemporaries(and myself)to become better, I am referring to breaking away from too much forced rhyme. When it comes to rhyme, I lean more towards the romanticists like, Percy Bysshe Shelley....he rhymed all the time. He wasn't inferior, but far superior. His rhymes are timeless. I also don't tire of Poe's rhymes either. I can become tired of non-rhyming poetry too. For me, it is all in the mood of the present moment.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/29/2012 7:01:00 PM
    I think Chris that you actually do think that rhyme is inferior or you wouldn't say for people to strive to become better. What makes "not rhyming better?" Lee

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Great feedback and extra input from a lot of the comments. Very nice to see! I was a bit tentative about broaching the topic of forced rhyme, because I fully realized how many people could become offended, since forced rhyme is one of the staple 'bread and butter' aspects of a large majority of poems being posted on this site. If people enjoy reading and writing forced rhyme, those people should simply continue to do so. The whole point of blogs such as this one, is for even one person to possibly re-evaluate their writing, and strive to become a better writer. This blog was not meant to be "Rhyme Vs Free Verse", nor is it an attempt at swaying people who enjoy reading and writing forced rhyme. Do as you wish. Poetry can be subjective on all levels. This blog is simply about better writing, and not about philosophy; a moral discussion concerning critique/feedback. Better writing. Better writing. Stronger writing. Better writing. Stronger writing. Better writing....

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:04:00 PM
    You can't recall the free verse that you read when you were young, while the little rhymes and jingles are still poised upon your tongue.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:29:00 PM
    I have nothing to say, ok,,, maybe a few words. LOL... i'm laughing at some of the words poets are calling forced rhymes... ha... In my opinion, I think dove and love are over used rhymes,,, Not forced at all... They perfectly rhyme. I do not mind reading forced rhymes, WE all have to start somewhere. Any ways~ Your opinion and thoughts are all welcomed in this soup box... PD,,,

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 2:05:00 PM
    I call most of mine free verse due to a mix of types of rhymes. My story poem is more important to me than the perfect wording. I must drive people crazy. Still the rhyming adds to the silliness in my light poetry. I'll definately consider things more after reading your blogg. It was very interesting in all those points made. Keep them coming. I'll keep reading. You made it easy to understand. Thank you.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:00:00 PM
    My pet peeve is sight rhyme. I guwss because I hear words as much as see them. Sometimes it seems as though there was no words to rhyme so they picked one that looks the same. Like 'love' and 'cove'.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:16:00 PM
    I prefer free verse, but as a learning curve, subscribe to the rules of rhyming for certain poetry forms. Early on I wrote the poem, Albatross, and a US Editor wrote to me and said that it would be a brilliant poem, was it not for the forced rhyming. Looking back on it now, I understand exactly what had grated (but left it as it is on this site as a reminder "not to do it again"). Poetry is such a personal language that it is impossible to judge what is "good language" or "bad language". I speak more than one of our 11 official languages and I have found what sounds pleasing in one language, actually grates on the ear in another (certain things just do not translate well). Good blog Chris.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:13:00 PM
    I've noticed that some Soupers are so "desperate" to keep ("hear") the previous line (to keep going with the rhyming pattern) that they dont perceive clearly ("see") an awkward meaning, or a downright hilarious turn... BUT...we're here to learn and share. I dont like rhyme...although I know that rhyming poetry "can be" amazing. Anyways, my opinion doesnt matter: Im one of those who are just starting the poetic journey...I've been starting it for 4 years now! LOL!

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:02:00 PM
    I didn't know this had a category name? Thanks Chris I like learning new things, I would have just chalked it up to bad writing? Light & Love

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 10:04:00 AM
    I agree with alot that ou have said here. If a read a poem that has the word "Life" and teh next line has "Strife to rhyme with it I gone on to the next poem. After reading so many poems over the years, I find red flag words that let me know there wasn't much thought put into the poem.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:48:00 AM
    I love rhyme, just show how un-intellectual I am, I guess. Rhyming just seems to come natural to me and that's why I use it. Never claimed to be an English major, just along for the ride strictly for enjoyment. Good blog my friend. Lee

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 8:13:00 AM
    I adore natural rhyme in all it's configurations......and mostly skip torturous examples (mine!) what I love best are limericks (frowned upon in poetic academia, but not in the afterlife) that actually crisply flow with perfect prosodic metre when read aloud (best with actually an audience!) cool is when you notice....super-cool is when you look back & see it! yimbo

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 7:57:00 AM
    I have a love-hate relationship with rhyme in general. This is a good blog, my Love :)...nothing worse than forced rhyme in my books...rhyme can however add wonderful flow and various other effects can be achieved when used creatively.

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 5:05:00 AM
    I don't like forced rhyme either, and this blog clarified for me what the different types of forced rhyme are - so I can make sure I don't do it! I'm a free verser at heart, rhyme doesn't come very easily to me although, curiously, I have noticed that rhyme within a line seems to come naturally to me and even some end rhymes are now finding their way into my free verse! helpful blog, anyway :-)

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 1:31:00 AM
    Guilty on you inversion forced rhyme , the change of syntax I have done that a few times but I don' think it is at the expense of the poem in fact where I come from it is quite common to ask "Is it not" and things like that. xx

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:38:00 AM
    Guilty!! I can;t help it - there is a gun held to my head forcing me to force the rhyme. It is actually an illness I think I suffer from - mostly guilty of number 3 - forcing a rhyme through inversion - actually a perversion - but I think there might be a cure - once I get all of them of me. But hey, I guy can have fun, right? Right or wrong? Tonight, I imbibed a bit too much - tomorrow, reality and I will once again be in touch - see, an illness!!!

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:40:00 PM
    Interesting! What's the difference for the rhyme meter in poetry, and music? I know in hip hop, it's done at the crisp sound of the snare drum. In music, we call it a bar(each line), in poetry they're called stanzas. Is the metering the same or entirely different? I have more difficulties not rhyming!

    Login to Reply
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:23:00 PM
    MY hand went way up! Yuppers. The only thing worse is when they add some kinda redundant tag to their line to force the rhyme so suddenly out of nowhere a ", YOU SEE" comes at you like a pie to the face. I am not proud at my reaction to this kinda poetry. Hey, to each their own. But it literally turns on my puke-a-meter. Now, on the other hand, I love rhyme, and I'm just now exploring the many different kinds of rhyme. If I see one more love and dove on this site, I may vomit. I am now going to be snubbed, I suppose. Interesting blog, Chris. Good subject. Wonder who will get it. Liked the way you "grinned and BARED it"

    Login to Reply

My Past Blog Posts

 
Shoddy Grammar
Date Posted: 8/31/2014 5:58:00 PM
For many people here, this is a long, boring blog: The Cetacean Brain and Hominid Perceptions of Cetacean Intelligence
Date Posted: 8/28/2014 6:10:00 PM
Corn dogs **edited**
Date Posted: 8/22/2014 6:17:00 PM
The Soupiquette of Return Comments **edited**
Date Posted: 8/20/2014 9:01:00 PM
Random Thoughts #1027: We
Date Posted: 8/15/2014 4:47:00 PM
Some wildlife photos of mine
Date Posted: 8/13/2014 2:36:00 PM
Perhaps They Could Be Re-located To The Moon?
Date Posted: 8/5/2014 8:16:00 PM
Some Thoughts Concerning The Islamic/Zionist Situation
Date Posted: 7/28/2014 3:50:00 PM
Who do you think will win?
Date Posted: 7/10/2014 3:23:00 PM
My Turtle-God
Date Posted: 7/2/2014 5:30:00 PM
2014 FIFA Football Fever
Date Posted: 6/26/2014 2:23:00 PM
Media News is bad for you – and giving up watching/reading it, will make you more happy and healthy
Date Posted: 5/7/2014 10:44:00 AM
After reading this blog, you will never again have to claim that you don't know how to write haiku :P
Date Posted: 4/23/2014 3:04:00 PM
For many of you, this is just another boring blog concerning thoughts about haiku(any Japanese short-forms)
Date Posted: 4/1/2014 7:24:00 PM
tanka (a long blog for a short form) **edits / updates**
Date Posted: 3/20/2014 11:46:00 PM
Random Thoughts #126: 7 Gold Stars
Date Posted: 3/11/2014 10:45:00 PM
My 2014 Contest Disclaimer
Date Posted: 3/11/2014 12:23:00 AM
Hullo, Soupers! Wot! Wot!
Date Posted: 3/8/2014 12:27:00 AM
Questions Concerning Soup-Etiquette -- Part II
Date Posted: 11/20/2012 11:52:00 AM
Questions Concerning Soup-Etiquette......Maybe?
Date Posted: 11/19/2012 9:52:00 PM
Random Thoughts: Damien Star-Man, the Israeli crack-smoker
Date Posted: 11/17/2012 11:00:00 PM
The BEAST 666
Date Posted: 11/13/2012 11:22:00 AM
Frankenstorm 2012: A Haunting of Shelleys
Date Posted: 10/31/2012 12:35:00 PM
Noah Exposed: How The Western Lands Came To Be (Part I)
Date Posted: 10/2/2012 2:38:00 PM
Lazy Boy: A Mythology
Date Posted: 10/1/2012 1:12:00 PM

My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
11/1/2014 Mr Jihad Free versewords,
9/21/2014 Deep Down Trauma Hounds Free versemystery,
8/7/2014 Mesopotamia Kimogrowth,high school,hope,k
7/30/2014 The Lobotomizer Free versehistory,hope,
4/14/2014 flowers for Chinaski -- part ii Free verseflower,growth,hope,tribut
4/12/2014 flowers for Chinaski Free verseflower,tribute,
4/5/2014 -- and there are proverbs Free verseallegory,philosophy,
3/24/2014 Preacher's Son Free versefaith,hope,life,mystery,
3/18/2014 Evergreen Free versehope,love,lyric,tribute,
3/2/2014 Captain Crunch Free versecrazy,
2/19/2014 Stalking The Stalker: Peter Pan Can Free versedark,
2/4/2014 When Harry Heironymous Huffenhoffer Met Henrietta Huckhellopolis Alliterationgrowth,
1/14/2014 Tristesses de la lune by Charles Pierre Baudelaire -- with English translations Free verse 
1/6/2014 Making Love with Crystal Antennas Free versehope,mystery,
12/19/2013 Sunlight and Rain: The Prism of an Anarchist Free versehope,
12/10/2013 Edinburgh Free versededication,hope,life,love
12/8/2013 M Free versecelebration,hope,life,lov
11/7/2013 The Kreepy Kids Free versehalloween,happiness,
9/18/2013 A Reminder: To Be Free versetruth,writing,
8/1/2013 Live The Cliches Free versedream,hope,love,poetry,
7/22/2013 The Soup Reich Free versesatire,slam,
7/18/2013 What is this Rhymesilly,writing,
7/8/2013 23 warning signs that you are severely addicted to poetrysoup dot com List satire,silly,
7/3/2013 The Gospel of Lucifer - Chapter 11: 1 - 8 Prose Poetrymystery,
5/20/2013 Kiss The Sky Free versededication,love,lyric,tha
5/2/2013 Edinburgh Free versededication,
4/18/2013 Lantern on the Water Free verseheart,hope,journey,life,l
4/16/2013 Transcendence: Religion is obsolete Tetractyschange,growth,hope,truth,
4/3/2013 Salvation comes with a far greater sacrifice than blind faith and car-wash fundraisers Prose Poetryfaith,hope,life,social,ba
3/29/2013 Wood and Nails Free verseeaster,faith,love,passion
3/26/2013 23C Prose Poetryhope,journey,life,mystery
3/7/2013 Stygstrome - Updrafts Free verseanniversary,happiness,hop
2/18/2013 Kindred Spirits Haibunhope,life,love,mystery,bi
2/17/2013 in moonlight Haikunature,passion,
2/2/2013 Attawapiskat: Orphans of the Stone and Sky Free versecourage,dedication,hope,l
1/24/2013 Aboriginal Sin Free verseforgiveness,hope,life,lov
1/15/2013 Money-God Free versededication,hope,love,reco
1/10/2013 When All That's Left Is To Love Trioletfaith,love,passion,romanc
12/17/2012 Isle of Bast Free versefather daughter,love,myst
12/4/2012 Babylon-Kids Prose Poetryhope,life,love,mystery,wo
11/28/2012 Autobahn Free versehistory,life,mystery,soci
11/21/2012 An Open Communique to the Rogues Prose Poetryhope,life,mystery,passion
11/6/2012 Pulse Free verselove,mystery,passion,roma
11/4/2012 Frankenstorm 2012: A Haunting of Shelleys Prose Poetrymystery,on writing and wo
10/27/2012 let sacred delirium flow Free verselife,love,mystery,passion
10/20/2012 shine Tankalove,mystery,passion,roma
10/10/2012 Elemental Wavelengths Free verselove,mystery,
9/29/2012 Kindergarten: Huntress Free versehope,life,love,passion,
9/17/2012 Lucem Ferre Free versefaith,hope,life,love,ligh
9/10/2012 The Murder of Crows Morphed into Midwives Free versehope,life,love,mystery,me
9/6/2012 a constant flyer: my flight, my fancy Free versehope,life,love,me,passion
8/30/2012 Cornflower Blue Free versehope,life,love,mystery,dr
8/29/2012 -- after having written 500,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,002 poems Free versehope,life,lost,love,me,po
7/8/2012 Of Rabbits and Raven Free versehope,life,love,mystery,wo
6/27/2012 Hermaphrodite - Part III Free versehope,life,love,passion,fe
6/27/2012 Hermaphrodite - Part II Free versehope,life,love,passion,me
6/27/2012 Hermaphrodite - Part I Free versededication,hope,life,love
6/18/2012 You're Smurfing Smurfilicious Free versededication,happiness,
6/16/2012 You Are So Beautiful Free versehope,life,evil,
6/2/2012 Afterglow Free verselove,passion,words,me,me,
5/24/2012 Closer Free versehope,life,love,peace,blue
5/16/2012 Dropping Mushrooms with Jesus Free versefaith,hope,jesus,me,
5/12/2012 The Jew and a Nazi Free versehistory,hope,life,love,pa
5/8/2012 'and another stiff one for my drunken pen' Free versehope,life,me,me,violence,
4/30/2012 Motherland's Funeral Free versededication,funeral,me,los
4/12/2012 The Java Bean Cult Free versehappiness,satire,
4/6/2012 Love Poem - 29 Free verselife,love,passion,peace,w
3/28/2012 Tidal Lullabyes Diminished Hexaverseimagination,mystery,
3/24/2012 Earth Hour 2012 Free versededication,happiness,hope
3/22/2012 The Widower's Garden Free verserecovery from...,
3/1/2012 Slowly Turning Japanese Free verselife,passion,love,,giggle
3/1/2012 ripples Tankalife,love,philosophy,than
2/28/2012 with a kiss Haibundedication,hope,social,wa
2/24/2012 Yamazakura Tankawar,
2/18/2012 Scat-Man Lyricdedication,music,song-lyr
2/18/2012 kids use toy guns Haikuwar,
2/16/2012 A Degree in Phantasmology Free versefantasy,history,imaginati
2/8/2012 The Whispers of a Troubled Spirit Free versedeath,hope,life,light,
1/28/2012 Big Poo, Small Poo, Yellow Poo, Blue Poo Light Poetryfor children,blue,yellow,
1/27/2012 Bill Clinton Clerihewdedication,funny,
1/25/2012 Green Eggs in Hell Rhymechildhood,dedication,happ
1/18/2012 In The Loo Clerihewdedication,
1/18/2012 J Edgar Hoover Clerihewhistory,
1/13/2012 Sixth above the Line Free versehope,life,mystery,recover
1/1/2012 Exposure: Part II Free versehope,life,on writing and
1/1/2012 Exposure: Part I Free versehope,life,on writing and
12/26/2011 From The Glowing Embers Rhymelove,passion,romance,song
12/8/2011 Awaken From Deep Slumber Free versededication,hope,life,soci
12/2/2011 Fukushima Haikunature,recovery from...,
11/28/2011 Samurai Song: Singing Blade Chokadeath,hope,life,
11/20/2011 On Wings of Moogsmoorwood Free versededication,happiness,hope
11/20/2011 blood-streaked snow Haikunature,seasons,
11/19/2011 plumes of breath Haikuallegory,nature,seasons,
11/19/2011 a twig snaps Haikunature,seasons,
11/16/2011 black willow Haikunature,seasons,
11/15/2011 branch creaks Haikuallegory,nature,
11/3/2011 Moonshine Free verselife,
10/30/2011 blackened tomatoes Haikunature,
10/30/2011 not a feather stirs Haikunature,seasons,
10/26/2011 Please, have a slice Free versehope,life,me,

My Photos


Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
Ripping Christ Verseallegory,history,social,t
Pulp Rhymeallegory,death,history,li
A Deeper Divide Versepassion,people,philosophy
The Devil's Tide Narrativeadventure,angel,june,life
Psychedelic Verselife,love,mystery,nostalg
Recording/Re-playing/Recording/Re-playing Free verselife,people,philosophy,ti
The Skipping of Stones Chokanature,sea
MUSEUM OF MODERN ART Free verseinspirational,uplifting
This Night Sonnet 
Day of Reckoning Chokanature
Go Ask Alice Quatrainallegory,devotion,fantasy
the farm boy Tankachildhood,nature
A. Long Learned Tale. I do not know?epic,space,
Socialites Free verselifenight,night,
Priorities Viewed by a Dying Man Villanelledeath,introspectionnature
Answered Prayer Sijolife,nature
Haiku for Hidden Habitats Haikunature
Raindrops I do not know?adventure,angst,art,imagi
Pretentious Collaboration Written During Conversation (Credit to Emmily Rosa) Free versepeople,love,may,time,
I Remember When I Could Fly Lyricsong-lyricme,me,
Anxious Dissolution Free verseallegory,depression,intro
Is this a Grook or Not? (Nothing) Grookconfusion
Let me write you something. Free verseloveme,write,epic,me,writ
Under the Same Moon -3-Way-Collaboration- Coupletfriendship,lifeworld,life
Breaking Free verselost love,
Sunlit Yearnings Free verselifelife,life,
Cardinal at the feeder Rhymenature,upliftingwinter,wi
The Potency of Words (Achetez Villanelle) Villanellefriendship,on writing and
Mona Lisa Free verseartme,
Aspects Of Winter Free verseseasonsme,world,old,light
Suncatcher --recited Free verseinspirational,introspecti
'Water' Cinquainnature
Interwoven Free versefamily,friendship,life,lo
IN THE DENTIST'S CHAIR Free verseadventurefootball,me,
Canadian Chris Limerickon writing and words,peop
Double Phantasy Free verseloss,mystery,sad,
In Perfect Equilibrium: A Collaboration with Chris :D Aechtner Free versefaith,hope,introspection,
A Hummerous Life Burlesquefunny,political,satire,
Attention: WORD NERDS--------- The Eight Parts of Speech Dramatic Verse (Verse Drama)art,education,family,for
Whispers of Moogsmoorwood Free verseadventure,fantasy,words,m
If you name a poem something cheesy like--- Venus --- it Will only get twenty reads Free versefriendship,girlfriend-boy
bloody men Free versedeath,fear,introspection,
GRABBING COLORS WITH VINCENT Free verseart,dream,poetry,
Why He Beams Diminished Hexaverseimagination,love,
TOUCH Rhymelove,me,
A Solstice Free versedeath,faith,religion,
ThE DrUnkeN BuMMMM Free verselife,
Withdrawal in a dream Free verseangst,depression,me,
Phobia Free verseangst,world,light,light,
Sing Solitude-Play Soltude-Confetti's Song Lyriclovedream,dream,love,
Cassiopeia Terzanellefantasy,night,beauty,beau
Watching Him Watching Her Free versepassion,
If Shoelaces Sang Little Rich Town Blues Free versehome,old,lost,lost,old,
ONE FALCON FEATHER Free versefreedom,
Seen Through A Half Glass Free verseintrospection,
MILDEWED EXPECTATIONS Free verseheartbroken,son,
CAPTCHA's Cruelty Free verseabsence,abuse,addiction,a
Dear Lucifer Ode absence,analogy,character
Reservoir of Dreams Free versehistory,mystery,places,
haiku 5 Haikunature,
Madiba, Madiba Free versebereavement,
Chris D Aechtner Haikuabsence
The Flight of Tempest Reigned Balladanalogy,deep,devotion,fee
Write a Song of Freedom Free versesatire,
AN EDUCATED MAN Free verseeducation,life,truth,wisd
A Lion Looms Listless Epiccharacter,
Tanka 1 about Smudged Roses Tankaabsence,books,break up,de
O Raintree of Steel Tankaenvironment,
The Passion Of Christ Free versejesus,passion,sensual,
Elicit Illicit Lucid Dreams -contains nudity- Carpe Diemallegory,allusion,appreci
Oh Goddess Moon Versemoon,

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
christopher higgins Jamaica Flag Jamaica Read
daver austin United States Flag United States Read
Carolyn Devonshire United States Flag United States Read
Debbie Guzzi United States Flag United States Read
Izzy Gumbo United States Flag United States Read
Ruben O. Argentina Flag Argentina Read
Charmaine Chircop Malta Flag Malta Read
James Marshall Goff United States Flag United States Read
James Fraser United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
wala na Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Italy Flag Italy Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
John Trusty United States Flag United States Read
Juan Paolo Galua Philippines Flag Philippines Read
harry horsman United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Wilma Neels South Africa Flag South Africa Read
Tony Bush United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Kristen Varwig United States Flag United States Read
Thvia Stein United States Flag United States Read
Gwendolen Rix United States Flag United States Read
Christine Ueri South Africa Flag South Africa Read
Elaine George Canada Flag Canada Read
iolanda Scripca United States Flag United States Read
Monterey Sirak United States Flag United States Read