Tim Ryerson's Blog
 Retired from the printing business in 2011...now happily living in Ponchatoula, LA close to my wonderful (and enormous) family. The bio picture is me holding one of my six great-grandchildren...I spoil all of them rotten because that's my job.
My goal is to write a halfway decent poem sometime...My favorite poets are Robert Frost and Edward Arlington Robinson
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An Underrated Poet
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Blog Posted:3/20/2013 11:26:00 PM
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Not many people realize that Hank Williams was much more than just a red-neck, honky-tonk country singer. He was also a superb poet…Example:
I’m So Lonesome I Could Cry: Written and Sung By Hank Williams
Hear the lonesome whippoorwill
He sounds too blue to fly
The midnight train is whining low
I’m so lonesome I could cry
I’ve never seen a night so long
When time goes crawling by
The moon just went behind a cloud
To hide its face and cry
Did you ever see a robin weep
When leaves begin to die
That means he's lost the will to live
I’m so lonesome I could cry
The silence of a falling star
Lights up a purple sky
And as I wonder where you are
I’m so lonesome I could cry
In my opinion, the last two verses are some of the finest poetry I have ever read, old or new…
How about y'all?...What do you think of these lyrics? And if you feel so inclined, tell me about your favorite song lyric or lyrics or song writer, etc...Thanks!
Just couldn't resist adding this lyric by the late, great Waylon Jennings...This song was responsible for launching the 'Outlaw country' revolution in the early 80's (Willie Nelson, David Allen Coe, Hank Williams Jr. and Jerry Jeff Walker to name a few)...It mocks the Nashville establishment and calls for a change...Many people mistakenly credit Hank Jr for writing this song, although he did do his own version, which was actually a bigger hit than Waylon's origional..
I Don't Think Hank Done it This A'way: Written and sung by Waylon Jennings
Lawd-it's-the-same damn tune, fiddle and guitar
Where do we take it from here?
Rhinestone suits and big shiny cars
It's been the same way for years
We need to change...
Somebody told me when I-first-came-to Nashville
Son you fin'ly got-it-made
Old Hank made it here (and-we're-all-sure-that-you-will)
But-I-don't-think-Hank done it this a'way
No-I-don't-think-Hank done it this a'way
Ten years down the road doin' one night stands
Speeding my young life away
Tell me one more time just so's I'll understand
Are you sure Hank done it this a'way
Did-old-Hank really do it this a'way?
I've seen the world with a five piece band
Lookin' at the back side of me
Singing my songs (and one-a'-his now and then)
But-I-don't-think-Hank done 'em this a'way
No-I-don't-think-Hank done 'em this a'way
Take it home...
***Wylon's guitar licks starting the song, in between each verse and at the ending fade-out are hypnotic and stunning...he purposely uses only one chord with awesome results (Hyphens are used to help demonstrate how the song was sung)
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My Poems
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| Date Posted | Poem Title | Form | Categories |
| 5/22/2013 | Read 'Um Like a Book | Tetractys | life, |
| 5/22/2013 | Hank's Pentameter | Senryu | music, |
| 5/18/2013 | Commercial Slam - Part II | Light Poetry | funny,how i feel, |
| 5/16/2013 | The Day I Saw the Earth Move | Choka | nature, |
| 5/15/2013 | Tale of the Tiger | Tanka | sports, |
| 5/15/2013 | How I | Senryu | hate,love,lust, |
| 5/13/2013 | Different Strokes for Different Folks | Free verse (vers libre) | racism, |
| 5/13/2013 | All Kinds of Abuse | List | relationship, |
| 5/11/2013 | No Tomorrow | Free verse (vers libre) | life,philosophy, |
| 5/10/2013 | More Good Lyrics - See Blog | Lyric | music, |
| 5/9/2013 | Never Meant | Senryu | love,lust, |
| 5/8/2013 | Anything and Everything: My Heart Desires | Free verse (vers libre) | life, |
| 5/8/2013 | Jonah | Monorhyme | life,religious, |
| 5/7/2013 | Somewhat Repetitive Fickle Foolish Footles | Footle | funny,giggle,life, |
| 5/6/2013 | Sweet Silver Blue | Kyrielle | lost love, |
| 4/14/2013 | Ego Elevator | Limerick | funny,girl, |
| 4/14/2013 | First Stirrings | Choka | girl,passion, |
| 4/14/2013 | On Troubled Shores | Haiku | nature, |
| 4/12/2013 | The Box by the Bed | Free verse (vers libre) | grief,loss, |
| 4/12/2013 | Wild Hair | Light Poetry | nostalgia, |
| 4/11/2013 | Sight, Scent and Sound | Haiku | nature, |
| 4/11/2013 | Coming Out of the Cage | Light Poetry | animal,funny, |
| 4/10/2013 | Comfortable Silence | Senryu | life,love, |
| 4/9/2013 | Where the Wind Blows | Narrative | natural disasters,nature, |
| 4/8/2013 | Even MORE Somewhat Twisted Thoughts of the Day | Light Poetry | funny,me,day,horse,love,m |
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Fav Poems
| Poem Title | Form | Categories |
| The Sowing | Free verse (vers libre) | devotion |
| A "Brush" with Horror | Limerick | funny |
| The Ice Enchantress | Blank verse | fantasy,sea,seasons |
| Kiss Me | Light Poetry | passion |
| Dearest | Rhyme | devotion,faith,mother,upl |
| He's Their Grandpa | Free verse (vers libre) | dedication,husband, |
| Causalities of War | Elegy | death,war |
| Christmas Miracle in the Ghetto (Co-written with John Moses Freeman) | Narrative | family,holiday,hope,uplif |
| Immortality | Free verse (vers libre) | dedicationheart,music,hea |
| A Boston Tea Party Prelude | Free verse (vers libre) | lost lovehusband,husband, |
| Alliums Cloud My Heart | Lanterne | introspection |
| I want your SEEDS | Free verse (vers libre) | adventure,funny,old,old, |
| Sleeves of the Soul | Free verse (vers libre) | depression,imagination, |
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