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Deborah Guzzi travels for inspiration: China, Nepal [during the civil war], Japan, Egypt [two weeks before ‘The Arab Spring’], and most recently Peru. First published at the age of sixteen, she writes articles for Massage and Aroma Therapy Magazines. Her poetry has been accepted in the Literary Journals of Western CT. University, Inclement Magazine, Pyrokinections, Jellyfish Whispers, Grey Wolf’s Summer Legends Anthology, The Germ, Wilderness Literary Review, The Anthology Sweet Dreams & Night Terrors, Bitterzoet Magazine, haiku journal, Contemporary Haibun Online, Bella on line, The Autumn Sound, Eskimo Pie, and Ribbons, The Inwood Indiana Review, Five Poetry, Tanka Society of America Journal, and 50 haiku. She has published two illustrated volumes of poetry, The Healing Heart and Heaven and Hell in a Nutshell.


Smart and Small, Yet Says it All


Blog Posted:6/1/2014 5:42:00 PM
I don't know if anyone noticed but I gave out a lot of first places in my last contest.

I don't usually give out more than 1 first place -

so hopefully - all of you know I MEAN IT!


It is hardest to judge when more than one form is permitted. The group seems to like this best but for the judge; it is like judging apples & oranges against watermelons?

I don't like being restricted so I try not to restrict YOU. Please DO realize NONE of these forms were haiku and they were fine poems. If haiku is too restrictive DO use one of these forms. Read this beauties ... please ...
 

Sweet Granddaughter
By Joyce Johnson

Just for a while,
My pretty, sweet Vivian Rose,
Give me a smile!

 trillnea O
*in this form you MUST use the word ROSE
 

Time for me
By Ellie Wouterse
Form: Kimo


seated solely at the edge of my pond
counting fifteen lotus buds
such promising blessings
 

False Alarm
By David Mohen


shrill siren eye rolls
no one heeds
the car who cries wolf 

(Lune) 5-3-5 Syllables  

RAPE
By Olive Guillermo



L U S T
painful groans
scars of violence 

stigma throughout life
blind justice
humiliation

Form: Hay(na)ku  

Kimo A
By Craig 
 Cornish

the colors of the eve's celebration
reflect off the temple walls ~
Mt. Fuji glows within 

Serenity's Semblance
By Andrea Dietrich
Form: Kimo
 

Serenity’s semblance on her lined face
as I stoop at the casket
to kiss her pale cheek

 

shafts of light
By Reason A. Poteet
Form: Kimo
 

shafts of light among taller, barren trunks
dogwoods  blossom, a herald
as the woods come to life 

everlasting
By Carrie Richards

pink blossoms are budding on broken limbs
and I marvel at the strength
of old resilience
 

she would be so pleased
her peach tree
survived a harsh year

 kimo/luna

 

BLUE GREEN SILENCE
By Dave Woods
Form: Kimo

underneath the rage of turbulent sea
blue-green silence calms one's soul
elegant beauty thrives

Count First -- Three Lines Ae Fine contest
By Mark Halliday

Before you cut along the penciled line,
Get out your ruler, measure one more time --
Count first. 

*A string was done go read the whole thing! ;)
Dixdeux O

 What form's were you most drawn to & why?

 

 

 


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  1. Date: 6/2/2014 7:43:00 PM
    All of the winners should try submitting here they are very nice! http://threelinepoetry.com/submissions/

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 6/3/2014 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did it Debbie.. Thank you!
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 5:26:00 PM
    This was a nice touch that brought me much joy.. Thank you my dear friend

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    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/3/2014 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm proud of YOU!
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 1:59:00 PM
    Debbie, amazing and beautiful, thank you for taking the time to assemble these thoughts! But, I asked a friend about pictures attached to poems and he said it uses too much memory. Also, I think on a personal level that pictures and poem and music are separate arts that should live on their own until they are married as you have done here. To be debuted with visual and audio I think would free the reader from thoughts of their own. If I may, sort of like a lazy man's lobster when half the experience is scooping out the meat. LOL, I know that is a weak analogy but!...Perhaps a better one is the book versus the movie--think about it--they are different sensual experiences--I'll shell my own!

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    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/2/2014 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am trying to get the tech down [have been for years still trying] to combine haiku & art it is called haiga, & Craig it can be done as a separate art form, the words must ADD to the story not be about the art ex: cherry tree bough [photo] words [the buzz of bees/ keeps the child from climbing:lost kite]
    cornish Avatar craig cornish Date: 6/2/2014 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Don't get me wrong, because here you have drawn some Kerry Gold to enjoy the entrees with!
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 10:27:00 AM
    What form is Edger Allen Poe's 'The Raven'?

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    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/2/2014 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    (Once u/pon a /midnight/ dreary). This kind of syllable pair is called a trochee. Since there are eight syllable pairs in a line, we call it "octameter" (octo- standing for eight, as in octopus).
    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/2/2014 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So the meter is called trochaic octameter. The poem is now called a narrative, in its day it was called a reverie, a poem of remembrance. Since it is written in grouping of 6 lines it can also be called sestet
  1. Date: 6/2/2014 9:05:00 AM
    The about the poem ability is gone too, at least I don't see it on my screen anymore. [sigh]

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  1. Date: 6/2/2014 3:17:00 AM
    I returned to post my Congratulations to all the winners and more to you Debbie...:)!!! The pictures they add more to the words...:)!!! This really so great..:) thanks much...:)

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  1. Date: 6/1/2014 10:05:00 PM
    All we can do is ask Soup again to please make it so we can add a picture Carrie! The more people who ask the more likelihood they will do it.

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    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/2/2014 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debs, as I read the "rules" of what premium members are supposed to get here, I noticed it said the ability to post pictures with poems. What am I not getting? Do they just mean we can only do it in that section called "about the poem?"
  1. Date: 6/1/2014 9:05:00 PM
    Makes me want to go back and read them again and again. I wish so much that we could post picture with our own poems, it adds so much more. Thank you Deb!

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  1. Date: 6/1/2014 8:07:00 PM
    I want to try more Dixdeux O that's a very useable form! [I adore verse with a repeated line!] and to do it in a string like Mark did is a great idea!

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  1. Date: 6/1/2014 7:53:00 PM
    wow,I LOVE how you put the pictures with the poems. This is marvelous, Debs. i think your contest was very nice because you allowed us to use other forms besides haiku , which most poets, myself included, are often butchering here at Soup. Kimo and Sijo are my new loves. A moment frozen in time, this is so much easier to do than haiku!!!

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    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/1/2014 8:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes it is!! and we don't need to give up our poetic devices! BUT I grew so much as a poet from finally learning the eastern way of thought through haiku, though I do feel Kash's haiku are much better than mine ...
  1. Date: 6/1/2014 6:35:00 PM
    Debbie, I'll be back but that first one blew me away!

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  1. Date: 6/1/2014 6:28:00 PM
    Dear Debbie, I really thank you for the place you gave me in your contest.. This not to uplift my name but this to create awareness that some others just do not even dare to care.. I enjoyed learning these different forms and trying two and three of them.. however, i settled for that one cause of the alarming saddening news I heard from here and well, with the injustices happening here........ I really enjoyed all your winner's list.. it's a variety of spectacular images of nature and great great touching writes.:) Thank you very much..... :) may God bless you always and I really have fun reading all the list... In behalf of those who felt what I felt when I write that I thank you (them) too

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    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/1/2014 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We are the ones privileged to know a young woman like you!

My Past Blog Posts

 
Things That Make You Go Hmmm
Date Posted: 10/11/2014 10:48:00 PM
The Power and Peril of Punctuation
Date Posted: 10/9/2014 8:49:00 AM
Aiming for Poetry as an ART
Date Posted: 10/4/2014 2:19:00 PM
More, More, More
Date Posted: 9/30/2014 5:22:00 PM
Published Poetry of the 21st Century [not mine]
Date Posted: 9/28/2014 2:41:00 PM
HELP the Meow Meow Pussycats!!!
Date Posted: 9/8/2014 3:54:00 PM
What Does Debbie Sound Like???
Date Posted: 8/29/2014 11:53:00 AM
Eunoia Review
Date Posted: 8/23/2014 7:58:00 AM
Doowop
Date Posted: 7/30/2014 3:16:00 PM
Thank Ruben! OH Oh, Mr. O
Date Posted: 7/24/2014 7:38:00 PM
SHUF Home of Experimental Poetics
Date Posted: 7/22/2014 3:52:00 PM
Grrrr PS please STOP
Date Posted: 7/17/2014 8:27:00 AM
Dead Snakes
Date Posted: 7/15/2014 11:30:00 AM
I got 'splaining to Do!
Date Posted: 7/7/2014 11:03:00 AM
Sijo
Date Posted: 6/14/2014 3:42:00 PM
Tincture - A Fine Magazine
Date Posted: 6/5/2014 3:22:00 PM
Smart and Small, Yet Says it All
Date Posted: 6/1/2014 5:42:00 PM
I'm Waiting!!
Date Posted: 5/27/2014 8:22:00 PM
Help Me
Date Posted: 5/17/2014 12:40:00 PM
Last Call Anyone Else want help? Spring haiku Contest
Date Posted: 5/13/2014 11:37:00 AM
Some Good Advise
Date Posted: 5/9/2014 3:21:00 PM
Andrea Dietrich, Joanne Grisetti, Susan Burch
Date Posted: 4/14/2014 9:17:00 AM
A Ghost Hunt by Jack Horne
Date Posted: 4/9/2014 5:32:00 PM
Intro to a VERY Friendly Publisher
Date Posted: 4/6/2014 5:17:00 PM
Thoughts on Faith
Date Posted: 3/29/2014 7:07:00 PM

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10/21/2014Above the BroadVersemen,woman,
10/21/2014The Oracle's DescentRispettomythology,
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10/20/2014Fall's BountySonnetbeauty,
10/15/2014Dark Angels of HighgateSestinadeath,
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9/30/2014Forever Blowing BubblesLimerickhumor,
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9/28/2014Free FormVerselife,
9/23/2014Eccentric EyesSonnetpain,
9/23/2014Hiding PlacesHaibunabuse,
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9/3/2014The Devil Made Me Do ItHaibunanger,feelings,relationsh
9/2/2014Watching the Shadows GrowTrioletnature,
8/29/2014Petty-CuredAbecedarianfunny,
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7/22/2014Peek A BooVersebaby,
7/19/2014Ride Sally RideBalladsexy,
7/19/2014sun showerHaikucelebration,
7/19/2014Turtle BridgeFree versemythology,
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7/15/2014The Great Turtle and Sky Woman Rhymemythology,
7/12/2014The Clarity of EyeSonnetuplifting,visionary,
7/11/2014Shattered StagesVerseloss,
7/4/2014Debbie's Rhyme SchemaVersefun,
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6/25/2014SomnabulantSijonature,
6/24/2014Going DownLimericklust,
6/24/2014Dick's PickLimerickgirlfriend,
6/24/2014PenanceVersefaith,
6/17/2014Lord Harry's FrontLimerickfunny,gender,
6/13/2014Sea SawVersesea,
6/10/2014Dream CatchersSijoappreciation,change,
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6/2/2014Munch's Moon Verselonely,longing,
5/18/2014Smiling CharmedVersetime,
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4/12/2014Crest FallenVersecolor,
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Poem TitleFormCategories
GodFree verselife,mystery,
Hard TimesCowboycowboy-western,family,fun
For Things Once CountedRhymeintrospection,loss,uplift
PetalVerselove,
Defender of the WastesFree verseart,life,parody,world,
BirthImagismchildhood,life
this is why i woo wordsVerseart,inspirational,philoso
ForbearFree versesad,
BelongingsRhymeloss,love,mother,peacewor
Gold FeverFree versefaithfaith,political,
SplatteredI do not know?life
EchoQuatrainlost lovewords,love,
Bells (after Poe)Lyricpassion
Respectfully, Emily DickinsonLyricintrospection
Give the End Back to the BeginningFree versededication,faithme,
The Bruised and Rotting PearCoupletfaith,hope
flyFree verseanimals
ABC's for a Young CaptainABClife
Not Entirely About Living In New YorkFree verselifeworld,light,light,
WoodcutterI do not know?warold,old,
DreamsFree versefaith,forgiveness
A Feed of ChipsNarrativefunny
Weep O WillowsVersedeath
Harlem BluesFree verseblack-african amerchildre
Summers EverlastingFree versenostalgia
EASTER IVYNarrativefriendshipeaster,,cousin,
The Sowing Free versedevotion,
End of daysRhymeinspirational,lifeme,war,
Past-Life NightmareNarrativemystery,autumn,
I dream of you (to JEW)Free verseimagination,lovenight,swe
jellyfish back stropheImagismallegory,nature,on writin
Disposable WisdomRhymeage,cat,life,wisdom,
LonelinessRhymeintrospection,life
Remission (In Memory of William Watt).Elegybrother,death,nostalgiawo
The Day That Died ForeverFree verseadventure,angst,art,confu
HeritageQuatrainadventure,cowboy-western,
Summer MatineeNarrativebrother,me,
The Moon and II do not know?hope,life,love,nature,pea
Seeking, SearchingFree verseimaginationlove,
BEFORE SPRING CAMENarrativeadventure,animals,childho
PledgeSonnetdevotion
Wild Cherry TreeFree versechildhood,devotion,nature
Words from the OracleLayallegory,philosophy
ScienceFree verse 
Mona Lisa resemblesChokaart
AND WITH MERRIEST SPIRITQuintain (English)faith,father,holiday,insp
Cotton-Pickin' ParadiseVersechildhood,life,nostalgia,
Where The Sycamore GrewFree verseautumn,family,house,life,
LarksFree versedeath,devotion,imaginatio
Big BangLimerickfunny,science
winter (do not forget among the loss of flowers) meFree verse 
LetI do not know?loveme,me,
He Was Smoking HotI do not know?funny
Alabaster NightFree versenature,sea,
Haunted OrbHaikufantasy,nature
This Night Sonnet 
Tombstones & TeacupsRhymeallegory,childhood,death,
Today Not TomorrowFree versededication,depression,gir
Years Of The RoseFree verselost love,loveday,
The Joy that Sweetly StaysFree versehappinessjoy,
Cinder GirlRhymelovelove,
Biography (Thesis Statement)Versehistory,life,philosophyli
Figure FusionVerseart,sports
Dancing Bird - with video linkFree verseanimals,introspection,nat
Poem for a sensuous poetFree versefantasy,on writing and wo
The Road Walked Down Through the YearsRhymelife,on writing and words
The Iceman Cometh!Rhymenostalgia
He says/ She saysNarrativelife
I've seen so manySonnetintrospectionnight,night,
Searching for MichelangeloFree verseart,hope,life,people,imag
When Madness Rides on MoonlightSestinalovegod,light,god,life,li
Falling StarsFree versehopestar,star,
Before the City WakesSonnet 
realisation of self (War Child)Free verseme,me,
Reporting Live On The Soup (Colorado)Rhymefunnyme,me,
Late at nightLyricimaginationme,fear,me,
Reverencing NatureBalladfaith,naturenature,heart,
DreamsCoupletimagination
Simple PleasuresRhymehappinesssummer,summer,
I ExistPantoumintrospectionlife,me,
Leaving Madrid Blank versenostalgia,travel
Magnolia SongFree verselove,romance,
yellow bus roars throughHaikuallegory,nature,places
Ethel's RemediesRhymefunny,people
A Dream In The MistNarrativefantasy,imagination,natur
volga 1 - 3Prose Poetryfantasy
Mama's CleaningQuatrainintrospection,life,mother
UPROOTING THE HEART VEINSFree verseangst,hope,mysteryme,
Revelation Free verseimagination,lifesong,epic
Sports LimerickLimerickfunny
Don't Come Free versedeath,lost love,me,
The SnowflakeItalian Sonnetgirlfriend-boyfriend,roma
Love Beyond the PaleQuatraindevotion,lost love,
JackLyricintrospectionlife,
Night VisionsFree verselost love,passion,
The Ghost That Travels FarPersonificationnature
Kite Flying - TestFree verseallegory,art,imagination,
Dining with CrowRhymeanimals
Beauty, yesSijohope,imagination,philosop
Smart and Final ProseProse Poetrypeoplepeople,red,city,peo

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