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I do not SEEK to better describe what I am seeing but to FIND the feeling in what I am seeing! 

The goal is never greater Clarity.. The goal is always greater Connection! 

The moment you feel it, it becomes living and real.  Living is chasing moments not counting minutes.  Death is not extinguishing existence, but existing without feeling!

Color is simply a magnet that is attracted to emotion. On a color wheel, love and hate are next door neighbors.. It's a short distance to either.

Skill is finding more feeling with less words.  Brilliance is knowing when to quit.

Elaboration should only be done with a thin brush.

If beauty is feeling.. apply art first, not science or math.  If you're still painting inside the lines your soul hasn't discovered it's true voice (boxed in by others)

Children lose their imagination because some fool over valued information.

People will see what they want to see unless you tell them everything.. So stay mysterious?  Or you'll end up will only those who agree with you, finding your work Interesting.

Art is the feeling you create in the spaces between your words!

The goal is NOT a better scene.. It's a different play!

Don't write because your pen has ink.. Write because it has feeling!

Description grows dull with repeated reading.. Feeling is a flirt always appealing.

When I go to write I get excited by what I plan to neglect.  Art is NOT fair!

Make your write so obvious only the ardent seeker will find what you're hiding


6-Month Anniversary!

Blog Posted:8/12/2014 9:43:00 PM

Hey Soupers, 

I know that it's no big fanfare but I'm happy to be celebrating 6 months on the Soup tonight.  I've written lots of poems, placed in a few contest, learned a lot about forms, read so many awesome writes.. But the highlight has been you.  For so many I feel like I know you and we share a special part of our lives.. I'm so grateful!   God bless you all..

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  1. Date: 8/20/2014 8:35:00 AM
    It is great reading you, and knowing that you are reading my works too! Sharing inspiration is our creativity's food. Great to know you Dave! Regards, Teddy.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/21/2014 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Teddy, yes.. I love to read others poetry and I have definitely found inspiration in your works.. Keep up your excellent writes!
  1. Date: 8/18/2014 2:12:00 PM
    9 months for me Dave, I have to say what you given to this site is impressive and says a lot about you and your poetry, well done and keep writing my friend for you are a poet with something to say

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/19/2014 3:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Frederic, such words coming from someone I respect so deeply means the world to me.. Thank you sir!
  1. Date: 8/15/2014 5:44:00 PM
    Only six months! You shine so amazingly and are such a blessing to the soup. I guess it wasn't too much after you that I joined, I think I am on month 5. And wow I have learned A LOT in that little amount of time, and really I have you to thank for much of my lyrics, you are such a good muse and a good friend. I can't wait to celebrate your year anniversary with you, I am looking forward to every day with you here.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/17/2014 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cas, you rock and I dig your works.. Most of them anyways ;). You bring life and fire to our little bowl of soup and you give us rookies hope!
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 9:37:00 PM
    6 months is that all you have been here, seems a lot longer. Your work is outstanding, I so enjoyed writing with you, was an easy thing to do. Keep up the good work, no that's not right, keep improving at this rate and I will be reading them in book form next.....Happy Anniversary ....Seren

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/15/2014 12:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Seren, you are too sweet to me. Yeah, I've enjoyed writing with you too.. Effortless! Enjoying your works :)
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 8:57:00 PM
    I have been here three months and I am so very far behind! Please send me some of your rough drafts my friend. I'll pepper them up for you and sign off on my work too. lol All joking aside , you do marvelous work my friend, a gifted soul wielding a gifted pen!

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/15/2014 12:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Robert, you've been such a solid addition to the Soup. Your writes and comments are fantastic!
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 3:54:00 PM
    Gosh its 6 months for me too Dave and I echo your sentiment - I feel like I've been here all my life and one day i hope to write a lyric as good as yours! :-) hugs jan xxx

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/17/2014 10:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Always here for you my friend
    ALLISON Avatar JAN ALLISON Date: 8/15/2014 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are too kind Dave - I really value your support and your friendship:-) Hugs Jan xxx
    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Jan, you're such a special lady and we came to Soup at the same time. We've got that special connection that I cherish. Don't down play your incredible lyrics sister!
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 3:42:00 PM
    Congrats. On your sixth month anniversary..Its been my sixth year anniversary last february,and looking back ,the first six months were so good,so I know how you feel.In the firsr six months it was infatuation for this special site,all seemed so perfect.Six years after I tasted both the good and bad feeling of the site,but its still the best site.After six years its not infatuation anymore,Guess its more like love now..and that's what I wish for you along the way,plenty of love for poetry and poetrysoup site which has that family feeling,almost like home.Happt Anniversary and tnks for sharing your heart and soul through words-Charma

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    na Avatar wala na Date: 8/15/2014 11:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello back to you sweet Charma :)! and happy 6th year to you, wow you are old, haha, kidding! Me? I am 5 years and give or take a few months old....
    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Charms.. Thank you and I appreciate your perspective. My infatuation faded after a month when I had a first place finish moved to fifth and then off the winners list altogether. It was so good for me. Infatuation out of the way love took root. It's been sweet sailing since!
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 11:00:00 AM
    Happy 6 months to you, Lyric Man-- by the looks of it, you inspire so many here, and that's just been for half a year... I wish you continued inspiration for your poetry!

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nikko, thank you so much for your thoughtful words. Hope the next six months is just as fun!!
    Chircop  Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/14/2014 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi sweet Nikko : )
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 5:06:00 PM
    It sure has been a short time, but in this short've accomplished more than I have tried to in the almost two years since I've been here. Some people just have that Midas touch. Glad to have you around.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wait.. Hot Velvet is humble too! I've read too much of your works to believe that..
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 4:20:00 PM
    Congratulations, Lyric man! You found your home.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, it does feel good in this bowl of soup.. Thanks!
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 3:12:00 PM
    Craig's comment is great. He beat me to it, so I will mynah-bird his comment except for the "3" part, because I will be nearly 5 in December.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Chris, have patience with thus of us still in diapers ;)
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 2:57:00 PM
    David, only 6 months old and you're walking already!! I think your parents should be proud! Happy 1/2 birthday! I'll be 3 in December and I'm still stumbling LOL

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Craig, your the smartest toddler I've ever know. I'm loving the lyrics people are submitting for your current contest.
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 7:43:00 AM
    Thanks too Dave for sharing us yours..:) nice that we get all these poems to be read for free..:) God bless you..:)

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Olive, you're always so sweet and make me feel like a million dollars.. Thank you!
  1. Date: 8/13/2014 12:18:00 AM
    Congratulations! I hope the next 6 months will be just as good, as you continue to be a part of our Poetry Soup family. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poems and writing for your contests. I know how happy you must feel to be celebrating an anniversary, Dave. On Thursday I posted a poem titled, "One Year Ago", just to celebrate my one year anniversary on the Soup.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kelly, I read and commented on your amazing poem.. Loved it!
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 9:55:00 PM
    Congrats Dave. Glad you are on here and got to know you. You have become a good friend to me, always leaving nice comments and messages. Hope you stay on here for a long time.

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    Man Avatar Lyric Man Date: 8/14/2014 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robin, you're such an encourager.. I'm glad we are friends!!

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Date Posted: 9/21/2014 3:16:00 PM
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Contest Of My Dreams Finalized
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Contest Of My Dreams Update
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I TOOK A CHANCE (explained)
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4/1/2015 I'M COMING HOME Balladbeautiful,emotions,feelin
4/1/2015 APRIL FOOL Balladangst,break up,depression
3/29/2015 THE MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY Lyricintrospection,life,longin
3/28/2015 ITS HELL TO BE APART Lyricbreak up,emotions,feeling
3/27/2015 GIRL CRUSH TOO Lyriclove,
3/26/2015 I GOT EMPTY POCKETS Lyricbreak up,emotions,feeling
3/26/2015 JUST ANOTHER POET Lyricblessing,feelings,inspira
3/25/2015 WELCOME TO THE SOUP BOWL Lyricinspiration,inspirational
3/25/2015 I HOPE YOU DON'T MIND Lyriclife,lonely,longing,love,
3/24/2015 GREEN Lyricdepression,emotions,feeli
3/24/2015 THIS STARRY NIGHT Lyricflying,heart,hope,longing
3/22/2015 BEHIND THE SMILE Balladangst,betrayal,break up,c
3/19/2015 NATURE'S CONFETTI Lyricappreciation,beautiful,be
3/16/2015 FAITH TO BE AN ATHEIST Rhymebible,conflict,crazy,fait
3/15/2015 GOOD STUFF Free verseblessing,
3/15/2015 I CAN READ A WOMAN'S EYES Rhymeangst,courage,desire,hear
3/15/2015 ROOM 204 Rhymeabsence,angst,anxiety,cry
3/15/2015 FREE FALLING RABBIT Senryuangst,anxiety,death,depre
3/14/2015 NEON LIGHTS Senryuangst,corruption,cry,dark
3/14/2015 I READ MY WORDS TODAY Lyricangst,anxiety,crazy,depre
3/14/2015 MEMORIES Rhymeangst,emotions,feelings,l
3/13/2015 DOING THE WILLY NELSON Lyriclonely,longing,love,
3/13/2015 MAKE ME SING Balladbeautiful,desire,feelings
3/8/2015 YIKES Haikufunny,
3/8/2015 AMAZED IN YOUR WONDER Lyriclove,wife,
3/8/2015 IN THE DARKNESS Rhymeangst,deep,depression,hur
3/8/2015 SPRING'S LOVELY PRIZE Rhymelove,spring,
3/8/2015 FLOWER SONG Rhymelove,spring,
3/7/2015 I'LL NEVER LOVE YOU Balladbeautiful,feelings,heart,
3/7/2015 SO IN LOVE WITH YOU Lyriclove,
3/7/2015 I'VE FOUND MERCY Lyricabsence,angst,beautiful,c
3/1/2015 I'M COMING FOR YOU Lyricdesire,devotion,dream,ins
2/28/2015 I'LL LOVE YOU Lyricabsence,abuse,angst,anxie
2/28/2015 UNDER THE MOON Lyricbeautiful,care,emotions,f
2/28/2015 LOST Rhymecrazy,heartbreak,how i fe
2/28/2015 VELVET VOICE Lyricart,beautiful,beauty,deep
2/27/2015 OUR LOVE IS TRUE Lyricdesire,feelings,how i fee
2/26/2015 WE LIGHT THE NIGHT Lyricbeautiful,longing,love,pa
2/26/2015 IT'S MY BIRTHDAY Rhymeabuse,anger,angst,betraya
2/24/2015 DISCOVERY Senryuart,emotions,feelings,ima
2/22/2015 YOU'RE MY LYRIC Lyriclove,
2/21/2015 MORNING LOVE Lyricbeauty,desire,love,
2/19/2015 OH RIVER Lyricfeelings,longing,love hur
2/18/2015 ON THE ROAD AGAIN Free versefeelings,
2/15/2015 SAVING DAYLIGHT Balladangst,emotions,feelings,h
2/15/2015 FIELDS OF LOVE Kimobeautiful,celebration,dan
2/15/2015 I FELT THE SPIRIT FLOW Dodoitsucute love,innocence,longi
2/14/2015 VALENTINE ROULETTE Lyriclonging,loss,love,
2/14/2015 STRONG DESIRE Rhymedesire,
2/10/2015 LIFE IS LIKE A MAYPOLE Lyricadventure,desire,dream,lo
2/9/2015 YOU ARE MY MUSIC Questionkuheart,inspirational,longi
2/8/2015 BREATH OF LOVE Rhymelove,
2/8/2015 SO CLOSE I CAN FEEL THE BEAT Lyricheart,how i feel,longing,
2/7/2015 IT FEELS LIKE HEAVEN Balladcrazy,desire,longing,love
2/7/2015 JUST A ONE GIRL MAN Lyriclove,poetry,
2/3/2015 HEART TO BELIEVE Lyricbeautiful,love,magic,roma
2/2/2015 SUPER BOWL Lyricfun,games,philosophy,poet
2/2/2015 HEARTBREAKER - IG Limerickart,dream,fantasy,farewel
2/1/2015 DREAMS COME TRUE Balladbeautiful,boyfriend,longi
1/31/2015 BEAUTY WINS Lyricbeauty,bullying,emotions,
1/31/2015 LET'S GET REAL Lyricbeautiful,crazy,desire,ho
1/31/2015 WHEN DREAMS WERE REAL Lyricangst,beautiful,desire,dr
1/31/2015 I THINK OF YOU Lyricdesire,dream,longing,love
1/30/2015 THAT'S LIFE Lyriccrazy,emotions,feelings,l
1/28/2015 I'M NOT A GIMMICK I'M A GROUNDHOG Free verseabuse,angst,
1/28/2015 THIS CRAZY WORLD Lyricdesire,longing,love,
1/26/2015 WHEN I WAS YOUNG Lyricbeautiful,best friend,god
1/25/2015 WHAT CAN I DO Lyricabsence,abuse,break up,co
1/24/2015 I BELIEVE Balladlove,magic,valentines day
1/24/2015 A PERFECT MOON Rhymelove,
1/22/2015 LOVE WILL FIND YOU Balladdesire,dream,hope,longing
1/21/2015 LETS START OVER Lyricdesire,longing,
1/21/2015 CAN'T GET ENOUGH Lyricdesire,
1/19/2015 MARTIN LUTHER KING JR Clerihewdream,freedom,
1/19/2015 CHICK-FIL-A Senryuhumorous,
1/19/2015 GOD'S AND THE DEVIL'S Senryudevotion,evil,god,lost,lo
1/18/2015 CRICKETS AND COWBOYS Haikucowboy,
1/18/2015 CIRCLES Balladart,beautiful,feelings,fl
1/17/2015 FEEL THE HEAT Lyricbeautiful,desire,
1/17/2015 NIGHT SHADOW Lyricbeautiful,desire,
1/17/2015 JEALOUS OF YOUR SHADOW Lyricdesire,longing,love,
1/15/2015 MY DOCTOR POET Rhymeangst,feelings,poetry,
1/14/2015 FALSE RELIGION Versedeath,evil,god,murder,
1/13/2015 BEAUTIFUL Versebeautiful,
1/11/2015 MORE WILL RISE Rhymeanger,angst,feelings,reli
1/11/2015 FAITH IS A POWERFUL THING 2 Acrosticblessing,faith,god,life,
1/11/2015 FAITH IS A POWERFUL THING 1 Acrosticfaith,god,life,power,
1/10/2015 YOU'LL BRING SPRING TO ME Balladbreak up,hope,longing,lov
1/9/2015 PARADISE Free versebeautiful,nature,paradise
1/9/2015 MAGIC BEANS Free versebreak up,cute love,desire
1/9/2015 CAST A LONG SHADOW Rhymehow i feel,inspirational,
1/8/2015 SEASONS Versebeautiful,seasons,
1/6/2015 LOVE, IT LEAVES ME Verseart,beautiful,emotions,fe
1/5/2015 STICKS AND STONES Rhymeabuse,angst,betrayal,evil
1/5/2015 HOLD MY HAND Balladangst,depression,fear,hop
1/4/2015 YOUR FACE FINDS ME Balladbeauty,care,how i feel,i
1/2/2015 DUMB AS ROCKS Senryufunny,humorous,introspect
1/1/2015 MY VIOLIN Lyricfamily,hope,
12/31/2014 REMEMBER HOW YOU USED TO MAKE ME MELT Lyrichow i feel,loneliness,lon
12/30/2014 OUR SONG Lyricbeautiful,love,

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Bridge over troubled water Acrosticchange,courage,lost love,
Cinder Girl Rhymelovelove,
Irony Abounds Balladehumor,irony,sad,
To Heal a Heart- Ilyezas Two for One Rhymecourage,
NAMESAKE Acrostictribute,
My love for you Free verseheart,i love you,
Forgotten By Tomorrow Free verseblue,cry,dark,deep,loneli
The Mood of Her Rhymerelationship,romance,
AMUSE PURSUITS 3 Haikuconflict,
Never Hopeless Kyriellefaith,hope,
The Day I Saw the Earth Move Chokanature,
Measure for Measure Quatraincorruption,earth,eulogy,p
Where Free versefaith,
NOT ENOUGH Lyricangst,faith,family,fire,l
DESTINY Haikuart,beauty,butterfly,
To Whom it may Concern Rhymewriting,
tap dance Haikunature,
TOLERANCE Prose Poetrybetrayal,freedom,
Friday Light Poetrydeep,dog,humor,humorous,
MY DAY IS COMING Rhymefriendship,journey,life,
NEVER FELT SO RIGHT Lyricbeautiful,longing,love,ly
Sanctuary Found Acrostictime,
THE GIFT Free verseart,beauty,imagery,imagin
Soar Among Stars Versegrowth,
ODE TO CHANGE Odechange,
A Damsel Or A Camel Rhymeadventure,life,success,sy
Paradise Leaving Not A Trace Rhymegrowth,heartbroken,lost l
Tears Free versedark,
Beyond The Blue Free verseabsence,
Poetry Is Born Free versemother,
By the river Rhymebeauty,bird,mystery,natur
WORTH THE LONG Lyricbeauty,desire,dream,emoti
Who Is The Poet Free versebeauty,
YOUR FACE FINDS ME Balladbeauty,care,how i feel,i
TRUE LOVE Free versechild,children,heartbreak
First Love Rhymefirst love,hilarious,humo
Marry Me Haikucute love,love,
I FELT THE SPIRIT FLOW Dodoitsucute love,innocence,longi
NEON LIGHTS Senryuangst,corruption,cry,dark

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