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Two New Entries in "Haiku" Form (No pun intended) ... Nature Will Take Revenge


Blog Posted:4/28/2013 9:38:00 PM


Two New Entries

From Two Lovely Soupers:


                          Brains

                          By Sandy Ivy D


                               Mmm brains

                               Nothing wrong with mine.

                               It's perfectly washed.


                          Crustacean

                          By Andrea Dietrich


                               edging to his home -

                               the sea - lone beach comber risks

                               life unknowingly




Both poems

 are posted on PoetrySoup.com


and are written

in the following poetic form:


Haiku









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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 5:54:00 PM
    Thank you Ruben, for displaying what I thought is a bad haiku. Glad Andrea, named it a senryu. Hugs S-IVY

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/29/2013 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're welcome, Sandy!
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:47:00 PM
    sandy, go back to the drawing board. I really LIKE your haiku a lot! I find it to be clever and witty. I'd just rename it senryu instead of haiku.

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    Ivy D Avatar Sandy Ivy D Date: 4/29/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea.
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Nikko, glad you liked my cherry blossoms. I removed it from the contest and put Crustacean in its place. Do you remember the haiku contests Raul used to do when he was here? that haiku was based on a picture he showed us of a sea animal in a shell. I worked a long time to come up with that ridiculous haiku!! So it is much more deserving of the worst poems contest than my first haiku I ever wrote on cherry blossoms!

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    na Avatar wala na Date: 4/30/2013 9:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I remember Raul's haiku contests-- those were wonderful, him using picture prompts-- I don't recall that particular photo though? I must have missed that, and I was such a contest glutton before...and I have to agree, your cherry blossom haiku is loads better than the Sebastian one (haha I just watch the Little Mermaid again) I love that movie...
  1. Date: 4/29/2013 10:57:00 AM
    I am no haiku expert but I don't think these are too bad--I like the play on "brainwashed" and Andrea ok yours made me think, but admittedly I really liked your cherry blossom haiku-- that was nice and you wrote that as a kid??

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:13:00 AM
    These may be worthy to be in the running....;)...but they're not THAT bad.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 10:04:00 PM
    In this poetry contest, women's bravery compared with male counterparts is remarkable! Are Souper-women braver than Souper-men? : D

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    Aechtner Avatar Chris D. Aechtner Date: 4/28/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    True, except for Abdul. He has been very brave so far.
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/28/2013 10:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sandy: I have already chosen 5 favorites; yours is one of them! : D
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/28/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea: You are still our "great Andrea."
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:51:00 PM
    Sorry, Sandy, i love your poem ***the not haiku** I think my brain gets washed by the TV only... hugs... Andrea, LOL.... xox~ PD

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:49:00 PM
    lol... with the tape on the yellow face avatar.... I think you are saying it isn't so... But, guess what I laughed my butt off with Sandy's choice..LOL..I read that haiku, when it was for a contest. and if Andrea, thinks that's a bad haiku, Than she is right. I think Andrea's HAIKU has is a bad bad bad one,, nothing about it makes me say.. "GREAT IMAGERY ANDREA." Ruben you I can't believe Andrea, has you posting her's is she that embarrassed. LOL... your a great guy Ruben... goodnight... Linda

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    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/28/2013 10:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : D !!
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 4/28/2013 9:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Imagine that you have written "Crustacean"... Wouldn't you do the same?

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