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Bloggers PhotoWell I am not sure what to say here except to tell you that much of my story is told through my poetry...I have often written about my journey... I have a brother and sister I love dearly and a mom with dementia who doesn't know me but I love her dearly also. I live with a man I love very much ,one big reason being he makes me laugh!..I have many good friends and a kitty named Layla who is much loved and very spoiled! I have alot of interests including playing guitar,keyboard and harmonica,making all kinds of crafts,writing and cooking to name a few...I worked in resort hotels and clubs for many years so I've moved around a lot but now my home is in Pennsylvania which I love.  

Here is a stinker of mine!!

Blog Posted:4/25/2013 3:10:00 PM
I have many poems I think are not good enough for others to lay eyes on! But this particular one I do not like at all ...I guess at the time I wrote it I did like it but now I think it stinks! What do you all think...don't worry I won't be hurt Hahaha!


They say if you're tense
just picture them naked.
You don't feel clued in
creatively fake it.
Reconsider both sides;
look up-don't look down.
Mad waters could take you
crash you up from the sound.
And your voice might be lying;
seems your thoughts are too loud.
Far away from the quiet's
how you drown out the crowd.
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  1. Date: 4/25/2013 11:22:00 PM
    The opening lines had me rolling in the isles (how do you spell it?).... I once had to address (no pun intended) an audience and was given this advice prior to entering the room. When I stepped up to the podium and cast my gaze over the room, I nearly gagged on the sip of water provided. The room was filled with old fogies - and I assure you that it would not have been a pleasant thought to imagine them naked..... Love/Hate your poem, Deb. Sorry... Love, Su

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/26/2013 8:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    too funny Su!! they really did tell you that huh!!Yes it's ok I love/hate it too!!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:37:00 PM
    After reading the comments below ... I tried reading it backwards ... same result. : D Im with you, Deb ... Yes, you're in the competition! LOL!

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/26/2013 7:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it really does come across stinko to me LOL!!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 9:00:00 PM
    HI, DEB.... a bad poem yes.... and the imagery of the imagination is bad... however, I thought it was clever in a way...xox...pd

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/26/2013 8:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    golly pd thanx I guess haha!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:19:00 PM
    Hi Deb: Some of the lines I thought were quite clever. "You don't feel clued in creatively fake it. " Now that's good advice at any SuZ

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/26/2013 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol !!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:57:00 PM
    Same as mine Deb lol it's like mine, you write it and actually ours are too discombobulated (is that a word or what--I was waiting for spell check to tazer me!!--anyhow I think we're cooking on the same burner YO! Too much fun---but if we were to seriously post these--nevermind--luv Ya!

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/27/2013 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    don't know what I was thinking of when this was created...yikes!!discombobulated indeed lol !!!
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:25:00 PM
    Hmmm its different Deb lol, am looking for a crap one of mine, well more crap I should say ...Seren

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    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson Date: 4/26/2013 8:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    this one definetly spells ( or smells haha!) CRAP lol !!

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My computer is fixed and my contest is finalized!
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7/25/2014elixer of passionSenryulove,passion,
7/21/2014The Cat's Meow And Then SomeCoupletcat,heartbroken,passion,
6/26/2014The Cougar With The Green ThumbLimerickfunny,garden,sexy,
6/24/2014My Greenest HeavenCoupletappreciation,beauty,mount
6/8/2014Magnificent Beings Of The SeaRhymebeautiful,fantasy,sea,
3/24/2014Tanka For ChrisTankahumor,joy,
3/23/2014The Years Had Stolen Her SmileRhymeage,death,depression,
3/20/2014Squandered HeartRhymebetrayal,break up,lost lo
3/14/2014When Fur Flies And Worlds CollideRhymecat,dog,funny,
3/13/2014Memories On BranchesCoupletchange,nature,seasons,
3/9/2014Life LessonsCoupletangst,life,
3/9/2014Petey's Magical LizardRhymechildren,fantasy,
3/9/2014Who You Callin' Fattie-A LimerickLimerickfunny love,husband,
3/9/2014Imagine This-First Date,First KissRhymedad,daughter,mother,teen,
3/8/2014Guests On This EarthRhymebeautiful,earth,nature,
3/8/2014Crystal Clear TapestryRhymeage,growth,joy,
3/3/2014The Umbrella EffectRhymelove,people,world,
3/2/2014Badly Bent Not BrokenRhymeboyfriend,heartbroken,los
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