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5/6/2010 2:53:28 PM
Pet Peeve	I'd always want to know if I made such an error.
5/6/2010 7:25:05 PM
Soup Mail	you have to click on a poem of the person you want to send mail to. and there should be a soup bowl symbol. cant fully remember if its next to the poem title or the poets name though sorry.
5/7/2010 5:20:26 PM
punched in face by fist in face	errrr strings burst from sirens lights strobe in our ears blinding us i can hardly listen to speaking mumbles a heavy bass resonates between us down another drink upside down yeah thats quite entertaining to millions not so funny on your own ooppps punched in face by fist in face blood falls out of face that has been punched by fist blood from face falls on floor fist removes from face placed down by bodies side unclenches night ends on sticky floors fight ends before it began light comes on get out get out homeward bound i headed alone again naturally another great night some would say my head will not agree with my stomach in the morning neither will its contents
5/8/2010 8:57:03 AM
punched in face by fist in face	i guess the fact no-one has been critical of this means its perfect. just as i thought. lol
5/8/2010 3:44:54 PM
punched in face by fist in face	thanks for the suggestions matt. i've done another version of it now errrr strings burst from sirens lights strobe in our ears blinding us i can hardly listen to speaking mumbles a heavy bass resonates between us down another drink upside down countdown to rundown ooppps punched in face by fist in face blood falls out of face that has been punched by fist blood from face falls on floor fist removes from face placed down by bodies side unclenches screaming idiots covered in plasma laugh silently punch angrily die readily night ends on sticky floors fight ends before it began light comes on get out get out any better?
5/8/2010 5:15:12 PM
Is there life on Mars?	i put no because although there are clearly simple celled organisms i don't really count them as life. logic would suggest that there are intelligent forms of life somewhere out there. it seems odd that we would be the only planet capable of creating life. but theres certainly none within our solar system
5/8/2010 7:35:21 PM
Is there life on Mars?	water cannot be classed as life because it requires no sustanance and cannot reproduce. flowers are alive trees are alive ants are alive lions are alive. water isnt. fact. lol
5/9/2010 5:09:30 PM
Dreaming	a good poem, no need to make anymore changes than you already have. its got a good flow as you intended and theres nothing at all wrong with using the word I.
5/11/2010 6:17:25 PM
tHe+++faLL==OF%maTH(+)	the great will fall in the fall of math resonant shapes crumble tangents and radius' melt multiply pain by infinity and wallow in sadness circles contain no answers mathbooks burn alone at night divide the earth in percentages the fall of math has come at last we all evaporate into nothing logic has abandoned humanity if you cannot add things up then you will be subtracted scream into the darkness scream with all your might scream for the return of math no-one answers but emptiness nothing answers but pi math has finally fallen. mourn
5/13/2010 4:13:39 PM
OVERSOUL MISUNDERSTOOD	i might give myself a crazy nickname. i am from henceforth known as Ragnarok
5/14/2010 7:26:04 AM
OVERSOUL MISUNDERSTOOD	i meant the norse end of the world.lol
5/14/2010 8:31:51 PM
Character limit	i wish they'd extend how long a title can be as well.
5/24/2010 5:53:21 PM
i'll slam this poem................	i spit words much better than you there is nothing at all that you can do check out my spelling and my epic grammar i'll smash your face in with a claw hammer i carve my name in all your brains remember me like the smell when it rains with my fists of fury i'll knock you out no-one can tell what the hell im on about my poems make you think sit down fools and take a drink while i amaze you all with my dark power no-one wants to read a poem about a flower or a fluffy cloud or falling in love we want to read about death from above i go against the grain and dont get a lot of views but that certainly doesnt mean i'll go boo hoo hoo it makes me stronger faster smarter dont count me out i'll have your guts for garters so what have we learned from me today listen quite closely to what i do and say don't self publish its ever so vain im sure it'll cause you nothing but pain when you get rejected it cant be what you all expected im the best poet in the world bar none better than byron shelley keats and donne i best be off to write a dreary haiku oh wait thats not me its obviously you
5/24/2010 6:11:52 PM
Poem Titles	im one of the people who write poems with long titles without capital letters and not much punctuation, so i guess you've never read one of mine. i rarely spell things wrong but i utilise long titles no capitilisation and basic punctuation as a stylistic element of my poems. why should they be bogged down by rules. poetry is about expressing yourself not sticking to what people "think" you should do.
5/24/2010 6:16:55 PM
swearing in poems	why can't we do it?
5/24/2010 7:26:57 PM
Poem Titles	it's all good. I didn't really start writing poems to become a millionaire anyway.lol. as long as we all like what we write then life is good.
5/26/2010 6:30:30 AM
swearing in poems	it just seems very outdated. i understand they don't want poems saying eff this and eff that and being swearing for swearing sake, but surely the odd swear can make a poem better. shakespeare swore so it cant be that bad.
6/1/2010 10:03:23 AM
Congrats	Just want to say congrats to everyone who made it through the first round of the site contest. And good luck in the finals.
6/17/2010 6:41:41 PM
Pollux & Castor	this is a really good poem but to be honest a lot of people don't use the forums and even less are prepared to comment on poems
6/19/2010 7:13:11 PM
The Weaver	maybe it doesnt need punctuation.
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