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9/25/2017 3:14:16 AM
Introduction to Craig Hawkins Hi all...
To start off, I have not been to university to study language or been a teacher of any sorts. I write poetry from my heart and sometimes my stomach;-).
I am a regular guy who works for the steel industry during the day and then in my spare time scribbles some notes on pieces of paper and hopefully it makes sense.
I am very new to putting my work out there for the world to see and would accept any advice. I have only been writing for the past six months, I have to say I really do enjoy the experience.
Feel free to have a look at my work and critique at will.
9/27/2017 6:31:03 AM
Contests I have entered keep saying my placing N/A hi,



The contests I have entered have all said N/A in the place column, i assuming they are not good enough but would just like some clarity.
9/27/2017 9:35:06 AM
The Master Plan A year has gone past
As I take my last
My last what, I hear you say
My last day, I sit and pray
Trying to retrieve any happy thoughts
Oh wait there, I used to love my mother’sfreshly cut bread toast
Now all has gone, leaving an empty throne
A place which used to be my home
Where onceI did stand tall
But inside, I was always feeling small
Puny, pathetic, a miserable man
That once upon a time tried to hold togetherthe clan
Now it’s time to lie down, pills in my hand
Am I working to the master plan?
What will I miss? I hear you say
The TV, Radio, Work, in-laws, no way!!
Possibly, The birds tweeting good morning
To the sound of the ex-wife yawning
Only god knows where I will end up
As I pull the duvet cover up
What is the master plan?
Hopefully god is not a con-man!
Now, the year has finally passed
Here, I take my last…
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