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2/1/2017 2:31:33 PM
I'm new to Poetry Soup...	I'm just a simple girl with some simple thoughts. I took a word that described my situation, then developed all the connections to that word by making a list and finally taking that list and finding homes for them in a sentence or at the end of my point. Words strategically placed. Graduating from it to her, this was my story. A woman who went from a not so good situation and found freedom. I'd love some feedback. I'm not an artist, but I love the idea of learning to be.
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2/1/2017 2:31:33 PM

I'm just a simple girl with some simple thoughts. I took a word that described my situation, then developed all the connections to that word by making a list and finally taking that list and finding homes for them in a sentence or at the end of my point. Words strategically placed. Graduating from it to her, this was my story. A woman who went from a not so good situation and found freedom. I'd love some feedback. I'm not an artist, but I love the idea of learning to be.

pages: 1