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5/14/2010 1:37:58 AM
Hello Critics needed for my poetry. My name is Latisha Jacobson. Check out my poems and tell me what u think and if I've got the form right. Thanks.
5/15/2010 4:04:26 AM
Hello need a little help I would love a little help with my poetry form comments and suggestions please if you have anything you would like to help me learn that would be grate thanks again need to better express my new self just need help getting started back up...
5/15/2010 11:06:41 AM
Hello How do i post a poem not sure what to do..
Catie wrote:
Hi Latisha, if you would like your poems critiqued in the forum, just post one by clicking here, under Be Gentle or High critique, then click on new topic and post your poem. I look forward to reading your poems. Welcome to the Soup! Catie
5/15/2010 11:21:18 AM
blogs How do i post a blog?
5/17/2010 4:54:31 PM
Freed Spirit If I could make myself strong enough to stand firmly in front of the gun,
Do you love me enough to pull the trigger?
Releasing me.
Freeing my mind from this hell.
Captured behind my eyes.
Bleeding in disguise.
Freedom is worth dying for.
Life is worth being free.
I live in a world that confuses me.
I have the world on the surface for everyone to see.
Then shadowed by my mind, I have a world for only me.
Trapped behind my eyes, misery and lies, betrayal and lust,
laughter and pain.
Shatters of un comfort rage destroys the happiness of my reality.
Caught up in the raptured discomfort of what I've created.
Purity is lost, sanity is the cost.
Haunted by my childhood, the curse that lust invoked.
I feel it all around me, absorbing and consuming me.
Attempting escape, yet by my hand just a waste.
I want someone to believe me.
Stand here freely and have the sympathy to release me.
4/23/2011 7:09:01 AM
How do I get a sponsor to become a premium member? I absolutly love writing poetry and would love to be able to get serious with my writing. I am a single mother and can't afford to pay for the premium package, or trust me I would have already joined. I am a fulltime student at itt-tech, going for my criminal justice degree. I know that me being able to write my poetry helpsrelieve the stresses I face. If any one angel could step forward and help me out I would be so greatful and I will write a personal poem about you.

Latisha Jacobson
jacobson3139@yahoo.com
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