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12/14/2013 6:53:23 PM
Hey everyone!	Hey everybody, I'm James. Obviously, new here. Just looking for some cool people to share my craft with and hopefully help each other become better writers. Always cool to meet fellow artists! I've gone ahead and posted some of my work, just some random stuff pulled from my facebook archive. You can find me there at facebook.com/liveloveburn This really seems like a cool venue, I'm looking forward to meeting some great poets! edited by betweenthefall on 12/14/2013
1/11/2014 2:08:21 AM
Critiques?	Oasis: I watched her swim up into the arms of a flickering sunset, mouth open, letting rain fall on a velvet tongue. She was a whisper in the arms of horizon, lightning strikes falling beneath her every stroke. I followed her to the edge, until the weight of muddy shores, stifled my breath and forced my knees unto the Earth. In silence, I devoured the sight, praying for the strength to find my way. -James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.
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