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4/12/2020 4:16:22 PM
Critique My Poem "Psychosis"	Psychosis Psychosis Psychosis I can see your face in the dark I can see you no longer love this world Are you going to take me to a trip I haven’t yet told her of my love Will you let me write her a letter Telling her how she meant the world Just one last day I will come on the next one Psychosis Psychosis This is not at all what we planned I thought we agreed I live till death do us part I know I never set the date is it this far Will I be happy when we walk with the stars Why did I have to carry this curse Just one last day I will come on the next one Psychosis Psychosis Are you jealous of all this stuff This connections with spiritus and son Do I at least get to reap the rewards Or is the Ogre going to beat me to a pulp Is death where I can finally find myself I went there last I was really afraid of the dark Are the monsters scared of me Just one last day I will come on the next one Psychosis Psychosis I have seen myself in the casket with glass I have to say my suit was really dapper I was smiling ?Did I win it was I free at last Did I fight a good fight Did I save them from the master Or was my life my life just a blur Just one last day I will come on the next one Psychosis Psychosis I have to ask Do they have music In the other world Will I finally learn to dance Will I dance With my brothers Who the government shot at work What about my daughter is she fine Did she find another dad Did she know How much I hurt Just one last day I will come on the next one Psychosis Psychosis Is it strange that the tears are a flood They are people who love me In this world Will their tears be rain where We are To mask my face so that my brothers won’t know I am sad And that I really loved That I really laughed And at the end …
3/21/2023 1:17:51 AM
Happy Poetry Day	21st March is World Poetry Day I changed from someone who wrote poems to saying I am a poet in 2015. It provided me with an opportunity to share my lens, my experiences and myself with you. It has been my very public therapy, It has been my freedom, It has been an identity. It is how I express all my beauty, all my genius and all the complexity that comes from being. Thank you for all the love, the kindness and understanding so far. Happy World Poetry Day!!! You could share your journey on this thread as we celebrate the day.
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