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6/7/2023 12:43:56 PM
If you read this, I'll be glad	Hi this is a poem I wrote. I want to hear your thoughts on it and keep in mind that I'm not a native English speaker. Thanks. I couldn't hear a word of what he's got to say no more As there was this war coming about in my head Soldiers against soldiers Men against men Tearing each other apart Eating each other's hearts I only can define a tiny bit of it For there was no war in the history To be defined by the human race, Humane enough to be borne by people's hearts And this one was no exception I might have to admit to the darkness of my soul The wounds of my own But wounds are nothing to be created by the wounded The wounded is just a prey for a predator's words As I was to him As I am to anyone The pitfall which I've been trapped in Is the story of my life edited by rominayaghubi on 6/7/2023
6/7/2023 1:10:43 PM
Please give me some feedbacks	Hi this is what I wrote.(keep in mind I'm not a native English speaker) I couldn't hear a word of what he's got to say no more As there was this war coming about in my head Soldiers against soldiers Men against men Tearing each other apart Eating each other's hearts I only can define a tiny bit of it For there was no war in the history To be defined by the human race, Humane enough to be borne by people's hearts And this one was no exception I might have to admit to the darkness of my soul The wounds of my own But wounds are nothing to be created by the wounded The wounded is just a prey for a predator's words As I was to him As I am to anyone The pitfall which I've been trapped in Is the story of my life
6/8/2023 5:03:26 AM
If you read this, I'll be glad	Hi. Thank you very much. I totally agree with you.
9/11/2023 6:58:17 AM
Can you tell me your thoughts on this?	And you don't know how much it hurts The way I feel every single piece of my heart Crushing under the weight of your love And I don't know what I'm supposed to do When the only thing I know is run I run run run down a road Where the sun goes down And they kiss goodnight You're tangled in me They way those lovers are But we're not lovers And you're not here So why don't you just let me go
10/5/2023 10:48:59 AM
Can you give me your thoughts on this	What's behind thy eyes? In their dark shade of brown When I pour out my heart For thou to tell me I'm smart I bring thee my fevered mind Thou just read it by heart I tell thee a word And thou spare me the world I'm dying to know The secret of thy eyes
12/21/2023 3:40:32 PM
Your opinion please	And all these voices They sing along in my head I hear their shrills And I hear their screams They cry out for help They ask like beggars But they've come to the wrong place For there is no triumph to be found in here There is only a pile of cries And a pile of lies And a pile of hopeless loves Waiting to be spared
12/21/2023 3:41:45 PM
taking a stroll	It is beautiful. Well done
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