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12/1/2021 11:06:39 AM
Critique my villanelle about gender dysphoria!	razorblade by gale weathers with a razor I crop and cut away all signifiers of my birth name so i can finally let my hips sway prickly pits and nasty days of dreading dance, searing shame with a razor; I crop and cut away what urges you to hiss at me? how I dare defy nature so seductively? i have. to let my hips sway bitches beware of my witty ways the ones that cross me will know my pain with a razor; I cut and cut away those who march to a different drummer though baby! call me by my chosen name so i can finally; let my hips sway! never have I felt so clean and gay each hair, each foe and all that shame with a razor I cut and cut away so i can finally let my hips sway.
12/1/2021 11:07:32 AM
Critique my villanelle about gender dysphoria!	razorblade by gale weathers with a razor I crop and cut away all signifiers of my birth name so i can finally let my hips sway prickly pits and nasty days of dreading dance, searing shame with a razor; I crop and cut away what urges you to hiss at me? how I dare defy nature so seductively? i have. to let my hips sway bitches beware of my witty ways the ones that cross me will know my pain with a razor; I cut and cut away those who march to a different drummer though baby! call me by my chosen name so i can finally; let my hips sway! never have I felt so clean and gay each hair, each foe and all that shame with a razor I cut and cut away so i can finally let my hips sway.
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