The String and The wind--Revising

Written by: Ruben O.

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                                  Kite flying with the wind
                                  the tight string resists no more.
                                  From above the clouds 
                                  without the string, the same wind
                                  leads it floating to the ground








One of the poets on this site who has helped me over the past year to develop into a better writer? There are many!...Andrea, Charmaine, Carrie, Carolyn, Charles, Chris, Brian, Deborah, Linda-Marie, Nikko...Im sure Im forgetting many of them! Thank you all of you for your constant support and inspiration. 
Post Footnote: ...and Raul, Sharon, Karen, Sue, Michael....