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The First Flower I Chose

The First Flower I Chose

You were my rose, the first flower I chose
A beauty so fair, such shine in your hair
You I chose, the finest ever love rose
Asked on a dare, the prettiest girl there

Soon we wed, pretty flower graced my bed
Nights sent such bliss, heaven I did not miss
Flames in bed, want no other instead
Honey that kiss, love never was like this

Years together, in good and bad weather
Loving every night, touching sweet just right
Joy our weather, sweet kisses a feather
Sexy the sight, your naked body at night

My rose did cast, true love that did so last
I held so fast, to that ship's greatest mast


Contest- Form Sonnet
Regina Riddle 
Contest Name , Sonnet on a Intimate Relationship 

Syllables Per Line:  10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10  
Total # Syllables:  140  
Total # Lines:  17  (Including empty lines)  
Total # Words:  114



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  1. Date: 9/2/2014 12:34:00 AM

    Robert, rated 7. Superlative write enjoyed! Verlena
  1. Date: 9/2/2014 12:09:00 AM

    This year was my 20th anniversary. Best 20 of my life.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 11:29:00 PM

    This should do well, married can be sexy!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 6:24:00 PM

    This is perfect Robert...How wonderful....Tim
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 2:13:00 PM

    Dear Robert, You are both blessed to have found such happiness. It's always wonderful to read joyful poems about wedded bliss. God blessed you and your wife. Love, Carolyn
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:51:00 AM

    :) :) :) :) :) :)....that is what I feel about this sonnet. GOOD luck in the contest. :) It's beautiful. I'm glad your rose has no thorns.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:14:00 AM

    Great passionate write Robert! The first flower of life is a real treasure! Best wishes!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 12:09:00 AM

    Robert, intimacy beautifully displayed here in your passionate write!