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Mystical Vibration


As Mars shakes out her rubies in the constellation Earthly eyes will take to the heavens with elation A fiery red star, of beauty and effulgence Will sit aside a blood red moon, indulgence Will be ours, as we witness a mystical, vibration

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  1. Date: 4/16/2014 12:55:00 AM

    Very nicely done, Vie. A great opportunity for a poem, and you grabbed it. Kudos! Thanks for reading my poems and for collaborating. Had a good time dancing, so to speak. Love and hugs, Mel :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2014 12:25:00 AM

    That's a mindblowing opening line, love it. this is a beauty of a poem, Vie.
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 10:11:00 PM

    Hi there Rose, a lovely write. I wrote one that I thought may catch your eye!!!! :) :)
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 9:57:00 PM

    'As Mars shakes out her rubies in the constellation' Mystic....great opening line! builds with remaining lines! Extremely mind-expanding and adventurous! Jimbo
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 9:15:00 PM

    As Always Your Gifted Beauty's Verse Astonishes In Brilliance, Fascinating Vienna...You Know, Millions Upon Millions Of Lives Across Time Especially These Last Decades; Have Saught Their Escapisms In Line With Such Mystical Moments Via, Drugs, And More Drugs: Why ? The Zillion Dollar Question ¿ Makes Myself Consider In Part His Tin Man....And Oh But There Is Shortage In They Trying Claim As Or Monopolize The Child Without Eyes ? Irony: deep Inside, No Matter All The Lies; These Know Thus Her Revolving Door His Scarecrow....Who Made Their Heavens ? The Zillion Dollar Answer....Love, Jeremy
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 6:23:00 PM

    A site to behold..Lovely Tim
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 4:58:00 PM

    You painted a beautiful picture here Rose, nice poetry......Peter
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 4:35:00 PM

    Love the description of this rare event love. You made it even more beautiful within your words. Love Gail
  1. Date: 4/15/2014 2:53:00 PM

    Dear Vie, Enjoyed the way you describe the "fiery red star" that sat beside the moon early this morning. We were watching and saw a shooting star as well. Hope you enjoyed the moon's magical display too! Best wishes in Dave's contest. Love you, Carolyn

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