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war

i wittnessed a war just yesterday,
being the reason for much dismay,
i'm sorry for all the death and blood,
and all the soldiers in the mud,
i wish i could stop it just can't be done,
i'll need everybody including a nun,
i'll need jesus to forgive our sins,
that knock us down like bowling pins,
i'll need everybody to read this poem,
in hopes that all the soldiers get back home.

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  1. Date: 9/2/2014 8:24:00 AM

    Jeffery, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:15:00 PM

    - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Jeffery - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2014 10:01:00 AM

    Very touching poem and welcome to poetry soup btw. Come check mine out. :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2014 12:45:00 AM

    Hi Jeffery, this powerful piece struck a chord with me especially since I have a son who is a soldier. Please take a look at my piece called "Tribute to Jayson My Brave Warrior." I love your well-penned write! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
  1. Date: 8/30/2014 10:41:00 PM

    I too pray that they do alongside you thank you for sharing Jeffrey xxx

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