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Titanic Zeugma

The massive ship and hopes were lost
No lifeboats left for passengers
Their lips were blue, skin bit by frost
The massive ship and hopes were lost
Atlantic Ocean not yet crossed
The radar failed, no messengers
The massive ship and hopes were lost
No lifeboats left for passengers


*Written August 28, 2014 for Sara's "Zeugma" contest


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  1. Date: 8/28/2014 7:37:00 PM

    You did this form so well my friend. Surely a strong winner it will be!!!
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 7:13:00 PM

    This is a great serious one, Carolyn. Captured the essence of the great disaster in a few short lines, perfect for the triolet form.
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 6:20:00 PM

    well captured Carolyn gl in contest hugs
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 5:58:00 PM

    Perfectly said......and the subject is unforgettable....after so many years, is still filled with so many stories! Well done in this Zeugma contest!
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 5:29:00 PM

    Wow Carolyn i love it - i can't get my head round this form you have done a great job. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

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