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Twisted sense

A twisted circle of pure commonality
They twist my senses
No sense of mortality
These senseless twisted circles of conviviality
Twisted twitching
Wrapped in sensless circles
Transcendant circles
Wrapped in my morality



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  1. Date: 8/22/2014 6:52:00 PM

    I love the flow and warping of your read, well done!
  1. Date: 8/22/2014 12:39:00 PM

    I sense a bit of reflective peer pressure herein, followed by the decline into the senseless, yet somehow inevitable, slide for life. Morality can be easily rationalized out of the equation leading to the "get me a drink" or "roll me a fatty". Tightly written and thought out poem.
  1. Date: 8/21/2014 9:36:00 PM

    You appear to have too many serious thoughts and views to express and resolve. Poetry always gives a feeling of satisfaction when you reveal it on the canvas of writing James. Thank you for kind your mail. Poetry Soup is a great place to learn and express many things, which you would learn from many great writers on this site I am only a simple writer, who is not even very regular on PS. My good wishes for your success here. Love and best wishes....Ravindra K kapoor