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A Single Glance

With a single glance I was captivated
Impossible to get her out of my mind
The essence of my being permeated

There was a right moment that I would find
I was not willing to leave love to chance
Impossible to get her out of my mind

Between each heart beat I learned how to dance
So glad I had the courage to talk to her
I was not willing to leave love to chance

As we spoke I felt my emotions stir
Knowing somehow that she felt it too
So glad I had the courage to talk to her

Some thought I was crazy but that wasn't true
We were destined for each other from the start
Knowing somehow that she felt it too

We have two bodies but share the same heart
With a single glance I was captivated
We were destined for each other from the start
The essence of my being permeated 


A single glance can change a life forever! I enjoyed your
contest. I barely made the deadline, number 50.


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  1. Date: 7/20/2014 7:08:00 PM

    Again, lovely write!
  1. Date: 7/15/2014 10:23:00 PM

    A beautiful story, and a lovely write...
  1. Date: 7/15/2014 4:51:00 PM

    Fond memories of high school come into play while enjoying this. I remember when I use to make attempts to talk to my wife. She was quiet, well dressed, and gorgeous. I didn't know she walked by me intentionally, everyday to ignore me. 26 years later, we both payed attention. LOVE IN WORDING, POWERFUL!
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 5:18:00 PM

    Hey sweets, looks like your poem pleased the judge as well, as it should since it was amazing! Glad to see you on the list my friend. Hugs :)
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 11:59:00 AM

    Love is amazing... a miracle. I enjoyed your poem.
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 10:59:00 AM

    Richard, a great win. Congrats. Mohan
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 6:03:00 AM

    Fate is a mysterious force Richard and nothing and no one can change it. I oppsessively believe in destiny and when I read your terzanelle it solidifies it. Well written as per usual.
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 5:20:00 AM

    A single glance n many emotions precipitated Richard! Such a great write ,, adding to the beauty of this form,, I hv hardly known,, congrats on big win!
  1. Date: 7/13/2014 12:32:00 AM

    richard, thanks so much for saying Wind was one of your personal favorites. It means a lot to me. Ok, I am reading this one now and I am seeing that you got a WIN after barely making it!!! BIG congrats, I did not place but I can see how yours did!! A fabulous job, my friend.
  1. Date: 7/12/2014 6:48:00 PM

    Lovely romantic poem, Richard. I have never attempted this form, but you appear to have mastered it well. A glance (or a smile) can work wonders! Congrats on your win! // paul
  1. Date: 7/12/2014 4:08:00 PM

    Richard, your form is beautifully played and your story line is captivating.. Congrats on this winner!!
  1. Date: 7/12/2014 2:10:00 PM

    I love how the story goes..:) and this form is new..:) very nice..:)! The repeated lines are touching..:) good you beat up the deadline same as me when I have my muse few hours or few entries prior deadline..:D!
  1. Date: 7/12/2014 6:49:00 AM

    I like the rhythm and flow of this form, constant weaving of the lines over and under; a braid of words. As usual you breathed new life into the form and made it your own.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 5:56:00 PM

    I am not so familiar with this form, but man oh man you got it going on! I love this very much!
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 2:11:00 PM

    Stunning poem Richard Jared will love this good luck in the contest, Hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 1:11:00 PM

    "Between each heart beat I learned to dance..." Oh how the steps of a heart hot with dreams dances for love so sweet. I relate, and deeply respect the clarity of your affection for her. Beautiful poem Richard. J.A.B.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 9:30:00 AM

    Richard, a very nice poem, this is. looks straight from the heart. best for contest. Mohan
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 9:23:00 AM

    This is very good Richard. A single glance can change one's life forever. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 8:59:00 AM

    Terzanelle dream...beautiful...sweet....romantic...meant to be. I know that you have found your true love. I'm happy for you, Richard. You deserve to be loved with full devotion. Lovely write.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 8:55:00 AM

    I'm glad you made it for the contest Richard cause it would have been a pity if you didn't.One glance can indeed change a lifetime.Such a beautiful poem this is about finding true love.
  1. Date: 7/11/2014 8:27:00 AM

    Last but I believe not least...Well done Richard...I love this form and you seemed to have mastered it...kudos my friend

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