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Drifting Through The Stars

Looking at the Milky Way, I know I am far, 
far from the high way, I left and you are.
I, for once should have known, the ride and the drift,
cause by what you have shown, be no voyage so swift.

Now that I could touch the dazzling stars you gaze,
should I paint a nebular without the scars of your face?
With a stargazer shining through your hair,
that waves across the universe blown by air.

My senses frozen, my soul feather light,
I feel slow motion, swimming in aurora at night.
Gently thinking, how shall I do it right
to rise knowing, I am your white knight.

When all the black holes vanish or die,
should I unfreeze my senses and fly,
to earth you never said me goodbye,
and show you what I painted in the sky.



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  1. Date: 8/29/2014 10:42:00 AM

    Hasan, well penned. Enjoyed reading this poem... Verlena
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 6:22:00 PM

    Hi Hasan, this is such a deep powerful write that is very beautiful. The imagery is amazing! Well done. I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita
  1. Date: 8/28/2014 10:48:00 AM

    Hasan- Quite a lovely poem and love the imagery. I soared reading it. Swimming in aurora at night sounds magical!!!!! Swim away!!!:-) Christine