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- Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line -


        Dew wet spider web 

        Sparkling pearls on fine parade 

        Life's boasting beauty 






  23.10.2014
  A collaboration Haiku: Demetrios Trifiatis 
  and Anne-Lise Andresen :)
      






        







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  1. Date: 10/25/2014 8:20:00 AM

    Though I'm not in the least a fan of spiders I am a fan of their beautiful webs... such intricate designs and you have captured a dew kissed one divinely !!!
  1. Date: 10/24/2014 10:52:00 PM

    great Imagery Anne. I loved the dew on the web. well penned. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
  1. Date: 10/24/2014 7:47:00 PM

    This is winner my friend so light and lovely, good luck in the contest I'll be crossing my fingers for you guys, cheri glad you like my route 666 and Anne Lise, booo! LOL RIGHT BACK AT YOU GIRL LOL
  1. Date: 10/24/2014 3:59:00 PM

    Very creative work for you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Reads like a winner to me ..Sara
  1. Date: 10/24/2014 2:50:00 PM

    lovely imagery,anne and D... I am enjoying this.. huggs on a great Friday!
  1. Date: 10/24/2014 2:15:00 PM

    Very pretty and vivid picture of a spider web. Kudos to you both . Xx~Xx
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 4:43:00 PM

    It's a joy seeing the dew on Spiders Webs. For one it highlights the intricate spinning of such an engineering feat. Loved this piece Anne Lise, James :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:17:00 PM

    I didn't even realize this was a collab.... congrats to Demetrios as well! I wonder how one can do a collab on such a small poem... interesting.
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:02:00 PM

    powerful piece you both painted very beautifully penned
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 1:46:00 PM

    They can boast, cause they contain such exquisite beauty, so does your poem Anne, loving hugs xxx
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 1:05:00 PM

    Quite exquisite, Anne! There is a celebration for life - even for the less popular of creatures. Beautiful haiku!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 12:58:00 PM

    I love it! I read it as imagining soup on the world wide web. Great!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 11:52:00 AM

    Ahh such perfection the pearls of dew on parade that the spider web shows as it glistens in all it's magnificence !Such a wonder to behold just like this beautiful Haiku you and Demetrios have written lil'Anne-Lise...simply lovely! xoxox
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 8:14:00 AM

    Beautiful write Anne Lise, never thought of it that way. The spider's web is so truly beautiful , especially with the dew while the sun shines its pearls :) eve
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:49:00 AM

    Wow! The imagery in this magnificent write is truly amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning Anne-Lise! I'm so impressed with your talent you have displayed with this awesome piece! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:33:00 AM

    Oh that's right. But the poor spiders! excellent metaphor for dew love.-------rajat
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM

    Dear Anne Lise, go to soup mail, please!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 6:21:00 AM

    that sure is! i like this!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 5:24:00 AM

    Goodness just goodness...Very nice and universal truth...Best to you...
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 4:06:00 AM

    simply stunning haiku Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:55:00 AM

    Oh I love this haiku, this is exquisite imagery!

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