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- Haiku X 37 - Silver Beads On Line -


        Dew wet spider web 

        Sparkling pearls on fine parade 

        Life's boasting beauty 






  23.10.2014
  A collaboration Haiku: Demetrios Trifiatis 
  and Anne-Lise Andresen :)
      






        







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  1. Date: 10/23/2014 4:43:00 PM

    It's a joy seeing the dew on Spiders Webs. For one it highlights the intricate spinning of such an engineering feat. Loved this piece Anne Lise, James :)
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:17:00 PM

    I didn't even realize this was a collab.... congrats to Demetrios as well! I wonder how one can do a collab on such a small poem... interesting.
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:02:00 PM

    powerful piece you both painted very beautifully penned
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 1:46:00 PM

    They can boast, cause they contain such exquisite beauty, so does your poem Anne, loving hugs xxx
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 1:05:00 PM

    Quite exquisite, Anne! There is a celebration for life - even for the less popular of creatures. Beautiful haiku!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 12:58:00 PM

    I love it! I read it as imagining soup on the world wide web. Great!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 11:52:00 AM

    Ahh such perfection the pearls of dew on parade that the spider web shows as it glistens in all it's magnificence !Such a wonder to behold just like this beautiful Haiku you and Demetrios have written lil'Anne-Lise...simply lovely! xoxox
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 8:14:00 AM

    Beautiful write Anne Lise, never thought of it that way. The spider's web is so truly beautiful , especially with the dew while the sun shines its pearls :) eve
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:49:00 AM

    Wow! The imagery in this magnificent write is truly amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this morning Anne-Lise! I'm so impressed with your talent you have displayed with this awesome piece! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:33:00 AM

    Oh that's right. But the poor spiders! excellent metaphor for dew love.-------rajat
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 7:21:00 AM

    Dear Anne Lise, go to soup mail, please!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 6:21:00 AM

    that sure is! i like this!
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 5:24:00 AM

    Goodness just goodness...Very nice and universal truth...Best to you...
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 4:06:00 AM

    simply stunning haiku Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 10/23/2014 2:55:00 AM

    Oh I love this haiku, this is exquisite imagery!

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