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LONELY LIGHTHOUSE

The Smeaton Eddystone First lighthouse protecting Light blinking, pulsating Loud foghorn resounding Guides shipwrecked mariners Or swarthy seafarers On oceans perilous A sailor’s salvation 09~19~14 Jan Allison Contest: The Lighthouse Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Form: Rhopalic verse

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  1. Date: 9/20/2014 7:11:00 AM

    There is plenty of life over here Jan, and for good reason , Great job on this one.
  1. Date: 9/20/2014 3:08:00 AM

    You have cracked it Jan. This is a wonderful tribute to the Lighthouse. I have enjoyed the rhyming too. I agree with Andrea the last line made great!
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 8:56:00 PM

    Jan this is great, ....Seren
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 8:34:00 PM

    oh that last line is quite a lovely tie up. I did not even look at this contest yet. Gotta check it out!!! Nicely done, Jan.
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 5:48:00 PM

    Thank you for the reply, I tooooo Hope they get better... well to tell you the truth, they are not.. However, I'm trying my best to move on... :(...LINDA
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 5:41:00 PM

    Hi Jan, I like the lonely lighthouse imagery. Almost Ghostly, there is something about a lighthouse I do not like! ((However I enjoyed the creepy surroundings in this one)) I'm wishing you luck in the contest. PS.. Thanks for the sweet comment on my poem. Love Linda
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 5:18:00 PM

    I like that Jan. A sailors salvation. I love it. Great write.
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 5:09:00 PM

    That is very good! :) hugxx
  1. Date: 9/19/2014 5:04:00 PM

    A very unique form Jan...It is a sailor's salvation...hugs Tim

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