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Crossed Me At The Borderline, Just In Time

-------------------------------------- ~*note: done in fun and aimed at no one~  

try and seed my name you'll concede to shame
no use in calling names to lose the game

yir' ill will is just plain disastrous 
asinine avatars deserve an asterisk

as for being fact-less, your slaps don't diss
every lick you spit simply tends to miss

harmless words that curse, rehearsed childishness
gets your face erased and they'll say who's next

as defilement arrives inside your text
that's when shame wheels you back, right to the nest.

~10 syllables in each of 10 rhyming lines~



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  1. Date: 8/1/2014 7:16:00 PM

    Light hearted rant still has a bite ;)
  1. Date: 8/1/2014 11:58:00 AM

    I have no idea wot I typed there below. I am still attempting to decipher the true meaning between the words, understanding that there might not be one.
  1. Date: 8/1/2014 11:56:00 AM

    Huh? Why should you worry about being offensive or wotever? I consider this piece as a warm-up exercise of sorts, a flexing before the F-16 Falcons and B-1B Lancers start carpet-bombing .... that's when the sick mess really begins.
  1. Date: 8/1/2014 9:51:00 AM

    Perhaps it's a lose lose situation for me here..., I never did write : "just kidding" ....rather, in order to insure that someone here on the Soup doesn't think this was a call out, a threat, or anything offensive... I simply placed a disclaimer as a prelude. Sure as I didn't, one may say I was spreading hate. For me, Poetry is blips and random words with little or zero thought. Often they come out cheery and nice, other times, not so nice...Many times the "offensive" tones are self loathing
  1. Date: 8/1/2014 5:23:00 AM

    Someone once said, there is a little truth in every JUST KIDDING...or in every rhyme! Thanks for your visits.
  1. Date: 7/31/2014 10:11:00 PM

    Very glad it was done in fun my friend. Nicely done.