Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership

Read rain Poems Online


This Golden Day: A Madrigal for Amber

My Amber dear, awake to me. 
My madrigal has melody
in trills of the gold finch that you hear.
Awake to me, my Amber dear!

It’s dawn.  Arise, my angel sweet.
Put golden slippers on your feet.
We’ll follow where our songbird flies.
My angel sweet. It’s dawn; arise!

We must make haste, my lovely lass,
to walk on glistening velvet grass.
A day like this we cannot waste.
My lovely lass, we must make haste!

A meadow waits, my cherished one.
Through sun-bright posies we shall run,
where dewy fragrance permeates.
My cherished one, a meadow waits!

I know a stream, my darling love,
a shining mountain sits above.
And water falls where gold fish gleam.
My darling love, I know a stream.

We’ll find a rock, oh, maiden fair,
where you can loose your yellow hair.
And please me more. . . unloose your frock!
Oh, maiden fair, we’ll find a rock.

My one true heart, do come away.
Beneath the falls this golden day,
pure pleasure will our love impart.
Do come away, my one true heart!

4/17/14 for the Colourful Verse Contest of Charlotte Puddifoot

(Just playing around with swap quatrain form,
imagining one of those guys from centuries ago trying
to woo his maiden!)



Please Login to post a comment

  1. Date: 4/19/2014 3:45:00 AM

    Reads smoothly, like you've done this many a time. Thanks for the win in your competition, I have changed to "free verse"; just when I thought I was understanding the difference between 'free' and 'blank'. May Easter treat you well.
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 10:46:00 PM

    They would have been copying your words Andrea. This is lovely and so romantic!
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 9:54:00 PM

    Andrea, this was worth the wait. You're a polished poet and in writes like this it's displayed in beautiful brilliance!
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 7:25:00 PM

    Wowa!! This is just beautiful. Love your words... Have a beautiful Easter love. Hugs and love Gail
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 6:55:00 PM

    I love you swap Andrea...Ah the simple times..Your describe the wooing splendidly..Sometimes I wish times were still like this...hugs
  1. Date: 4/18/2014 5:46:00 PM

    Well done Andrea. this is one of my favourites of all your stuff I have read. I really hope it is a winner for you.....Peter