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A Unicorn spell

Opening wings spreading out
one pure beautiful image in beholding 
Gracefully embracing inside visions 
greeting Mother of pearl shimmering rainbow hues
Her horn sparkling tipped diamond 
Under the moonlight silver gleams 
Her silhouette reflecting light 
Princess wearing golden horse shoes 
One mane in softest satin silk 
Regally standing mustang wild 

Magically colored purest washed from the ocean foam 
Cascading hair scenting of burnt honey 
Eyes penetrating in baby blue 
Her long lush lashes flutter and glisten 
Upon her lips last rosebud's dew 
Her coat in white like slushy snowflakes 
reflecting glass shards of crescent cradles
She roams the fields singing to the prince
it is only love that will finally set her free 
from a curse cast on her beauty 
by an evil wizard 

To be the only winged unicorn 
of it's kind in the world 
flying into softest cushioned clouds 
She dances and sings,then she stills 
In distance she listens to the sound of a flute 
And there She sees a gorgeous young man 
lying on carpets of evergreen 
along with his father,and mother the queen 
Her melodic voice like that of a jeweled string harp
hypnotised the prince 
He ran and ran after pink butterflies which led the way 
They took him to her 
They glide above them 
then to the promising celestial sky 
they flew away baby blue 
infinite their love. 

As if He knew her in another lifetime sweetly
His eyes where glued. Into her own 
He knew he loved her and had to hold her 
Never to leave him all by himself 
regally standing mustang white

His eyes were fixed into hers... 
To her he went with joyful tears 
His lips brushed smoothly her every fears 
As then he whispered behind her ears 
You are a unicorn and I'm a man 
but with no other my.heart will share 
I ll make you mine if you say yes 
The first winged unicorn as a princess 
Then he kissed her upon her neck 
and a strong wind just pushed him back 
From a white horse. ,fair lady She 
had now won over her destiny 
The prince's lips removed the curse 
Now she is his ,as he is hers 

Overflowing his heart 
in sweeping golden joy 
forever on deep sands 
living always together 
in everlasting happiness

written by Liam and Charmaine 
a fun write dear friend

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  1. Date: 10/22/2014 8:44:00 PM

    Liam and Charmaine . . . This one's a 7++ in my book. The theme, the imagery, the tone, the words and the narrative interaction are all perfect and the results of your collaboration is a quite wonder piece here about The Unicorn and the mystery surrounding the spell. Quite extraordinary and most artfully done. The alliteration you've employed with many of the words only helps to dynamically highlight the narrative. My wife and I really like the legend of The Unicorn. Brilliant ending!! Gary
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 4:10:00 PM

    oh wow, what a visual delight. This is fantasy at its best and with Charma, you can't go wrong!!! Charma is sure busy writing these days!!!
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 3:14:00 PM

    Beautiful Liam and Charmaine. Enjoyed. Verlena
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 12:25:00 PM

    Fabulous collab... you guys did great together! Charmaine is a gem. A most whimsical tale of the Unicorn and the Princess :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 12:22:00 PM

    Thanks so much for reading dear friends: )
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 11:14:00 AM

    It has the feel of one who has the in and outs and full knowledge of the unicorn, perhaps you were once privi to their world of fantasy and color, I loved your poem Liam, and thank you so much for all your support on my scary story, "The Spectres wife," Ia glad you enjoyed it, it was a bit out of my comfort zone, but I enjoyed stretching my imagination, thanks xxx
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 8:38:00 AM

    Another fabulous collaboration...enjoyed stopping by this morning...thanks for the inspiration!
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 8:32:00 AM

    A fantasy poem, a unicorn, a princess, a mother-of-pearl. A real unicorn adventure- a great ride on the fabled creature. Enjoyed it liam, from my perspective. love.)))): rajat
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 8:19:00 AM

    A wonderful love story Liam......well penned
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 9:46:00 PM

    Excellent write enjoyed the beauty in this well painted work, cheri
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 8:28:00 PM

    Charma and liam what a lovely story of love...hugs and cheers Tim
  1. Date: 10/21/2014 6:00:00 PM

    It was so much fun.collabirating with you,thanks for your patience and wonderful ideas about this beautiful lady unicorn and her prince.Favouring it! : )

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