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c'est la vie


They had fought. He left without a word... ...while she was sleeping. She threw on the gown she had worn for him the night before, pushed off the china vase and blooms he had given her. She watched them fall in...s l o w...m o t i o n, listened to them crash to the floor... ...sat on the window sill, where the bouquet and container had been. She proclaimed to the world "c'est la vie!". She was alone but at least... ...she was the only flower.
22~10~2014 Sponsor: Judy Konos Contest Name: c'est la vie

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  1. Date: 10/22/2014 4:22:00 PM

    I remember this one :) I like it :)
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 3:27:00 PM

    The ending of this one is STUNNING. I love how you end all your poems. That is a huge part of creating a good poem! Nicely done, Maurice. Soupmail
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 2:44:00 PM

    Most Excellent Write Here Maurice!! Best of Luck in the contest. In enjoyed this one very much. An obvious "7" from me and its a FAV!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 2:00:00 PM

    Love your climaxing line. Great poem. I am digging right now...we are in the process of moving and my thoughts are either packed in a box or scattered some where. lol.
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 12:57:00 PM

    Wow Maurice I love the revised version of the poem -hope she gets to bloom in full again:-) good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 10/22/2014 12:49:00 PM

    "C'esta la vie!" Maurice! ... I see some of your humor sifting here thru. The line I like it most "But at least she was the only flower." Good finished end line... Lol . I truly enjoyed your poem, my friend. GL in this contest! Love and light! xxx D.

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