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LOVE WRITHES ON THE BLUES





Smokey air, husky wisps burn The tunes of a sax, And madness etches its velvet path This urge to rap, to boom, to reel Out of skin... Climbing unto your heat, a lover’s appeal Notes tracing hips and curves Into your arms , I swerve. Our bodies writhe on blues Grinding on café floors, Till cool refrains tilt a pitch My heart begins to drawl... Oh Latin strains urges a moan, A moan pulsing a fire While we burst in sweet desire. Turn me loose while rhythms arise We are fools, On this ragtime magic When magic wets moist lips; With a tempo flaming eyes Just this one night... Before last timbre of song burns As I wait for your long return.
Craig Cornish’s More Song Lyrics Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 9/2/2014 5:26:00 AM

    Congrats on the win with this nice song, nette
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 11:58:00 PM

    And back again wid huge congrats Nette on this winning awesome song!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 11:28:00 PM

    This is very beautiful Nette. I loved it. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 7:43:00 PM

    Congratulations, Nette! A very passionate write and a well-deserved win. Love, Carolyn
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 5:34:00 PM

    very beautifully painted piece
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 4:05:00 PM

    Congrats. I see you got some congrats down here and I am seeing Craig's remark, which probably means he is looking for the rhythmic aspect of it? He is so right about the uniqueness of your poem. It is very imaginative and sexy.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 2:27:00 PM

    Nette! If this contest was only about poetry this would have been sharing top billing. You always produce extra special and unique images and this is no exception.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 2:21:00 PM

    Congratulations Nette. Well written. Beautiful
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 2:16:00 PM

    congratulations. i knew this would win.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:41:00 PM

    Hmmm!How romantic..Lovely piece,Nette..Congrats on your superb win,dear friend...
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 10:17:00 AM

    Sensually dancing to the blues in centre stage while everything else fades into the background. Your ending, as usual, captivating! gl in contest. // paul
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 9:38:00 AM

    gorgeous imagery of loving feeling that wrap around the reader bringing a warming glow Nette. You have excelled hugs
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 9:05:00 AM

    Really sensual, it captures the reader
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 8:14:00 AM

    Very sweet song Nette! Amazing pen u hv, good luck dear!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 7:49:00 AM

    Jazzy love-- who could lose with that? I like the twist in the end. Nette, you are a song!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 6:43:00 AM

    excellent. I can't see this not winning. I loved reading this piece. thank you.
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:14:00 AM

    Venus is hot to the touch.. Her gravitational pull is irresistible and who would want to resist. Jazz me with sax.. Hot notes Nette. Your song sizzles as it pulls!
  1. Date: 9/1/2014 1:08:00 AM

    THIS is....so creatively HOT! :) Writhing....always a good thing. Lovely, Nette. Good luck in the contest, my dear.

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