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IT'S OVER

You thought you’d make a fool of me
I was so blind but now I see
So now you’ve had your little joke
Guess I’m just warning other folk

You’d look at me with those bedroom eyes
But your tender words I now despise
You broke my heart through and through
Well honey I’ve got news for you

Your designer clothes are now in rags
Packed up inside black plastic bags
Your cars been scratched and it’s got a dent
Your names been taken off the rent

You love to flirt, but you’re a cheat
You’re just like a dog on heat
But I’m now aware of your little game
No man will hurt me ever again

Don’t get taken in by charming men
They use you and just start again
From now on I am in control
Hey man you’re just an asshole

Jan Allison
24th July 2014

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  1. Date: 7/24/2014 3:26:00 PM

    Reads like someone who has experienced a bad relationship or knows someone else who has ...Interesting work that you have penned today..It is packed with emotion..Thanks for your visits to my place..Sara
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 12:20:00 PM

    Hahaha! This is one of your best, Jan. Great rhymes, too, as well as the sentiments. Suggestion: "despite" should, I believe, be "despised." "dog on heat" should be "dog in heat"? at least that's how we across the pond say it. Sad to day, women are suckers for men like this. Hope you're not. Take care. CL.
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 12:19:00 PM

    You didn't mince your words and I loved it. That is how one should treat cheating people, because Jan it goes both ways. I truly enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 11:50:00 AM

    My life's mantra, if my love can't hold you then nobody's love can
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 11:34:00 AM

    Great write Jan ! The way to go ,, cheaters to pay this time // Upma//
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 10:12:00 AM

    applause!! wow girl! you are a force! love this Jan, awesome!
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 9:59:00 AM

    Hi Jan, I love this so much! Thanks for sharing the good advice about what we all have to do when a partner turns out to be bad news! BRAVO, my friend!
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 9:44:00 AM

    Hey, Jan...written like you experienced it. I liked the vehement way you told him off. Great!
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 8:53:00 AM

    Yikes! Shades of Carrie Underwood! This is an excellent lyric (though you may need to make one change :). I really enjoyed this. I can almost hear the music.
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 8:09:00 AM

    Wow wow wow...wowsy wow wow. :) Jan all I can say is wow !!!..... ... Can you write one for my ex?......absolutely love it....hugs Tim
  1. Date: 7/24/2014 7:56:00 AM

    Whoa, I pray this is fiction but like you say, either way it rocks! This blistering piece is an anthem for woman taken by a man with fancy lips and a brain below his belt buckle slips!

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