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My Sweet Love - Triplets

You take my breath completely away You mean the world to me, my love and Only I have to gaze softly into your eyes I rememb'r all the smiles upon your face And when I'm sad I replay them in my mind My heart savorin' every time I can't replace Sometimes it seems I'm living just a dream From which I don't want ever to wake up from And when you're far 'way I just want to scream 'Cause life without you can never be the same Love runs wild thru my veins like a roarin' fire And my skin burns recurring just your name. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2008 October,19,2014



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  1. Date: 10/20/2014 7:56:00 PM

    Quite Beautiful "D"!!! By the way, I saw Brenda's note below and your response. I've written a lot of "Tercet" poems (a verse unit of three lines), and a "Triplet" or "Triad" is just another synonym for "Tercet." (Although Triplet/Triad is becoming more antiquated as words for this stanza sequence.) My recent poem of last week, "A World on Fire," was in a Tercet poetic format, but it was "unrhymed." Regardless, of these details, your work here is most excellent. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary
  1. Date: 10/20/2014 6:35:00 PM

    Very beautiful poem Dorian, I just don't get what Triplets mean here? Sorry sweetie. Help