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Unforgettable Moment

Those were my green and salad days
My friends, my toys were all my wealth.
Marbles and pebbles, my gems and pearls.
No fear of loss or bother about gains.
Trump cards valued no less than money.
School , home and uncle’s was my world.
What comes from where and goes where
None of them, I cared about, alike prince.
To run the empire of my utopia, my dad
Fought so many battles against all odds.
Unaware of all, with joy pass my days.
Till one day to pay my fees, I remember
If anything seeped into my mind ever
Like an engraved word on copper plate.
He has to sell his  wedding watch 
On the pulse, for the first moment in life.
My eyes were wet for someone else
Other than me, painted with the colours
 Of emotion, as most memorable picture.

For a poetry contest,inspired from a real memory.
©15/09/2014

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  1. Date: 9/16/2014 9:15:00 AM

    Well done Malik....Tricia ....good luck:)
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 7:56:00 AM

    Unique and creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 6:49:00 AM

    - A really great poem - very well written !!! - Take care of your unforgettable moment,Malik ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 3:47:00 AM

    Wow an impressive poem on utopia and carefree phases of life. I enjoyd reading the lines. Pls do review my latest poem too.
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 12:38:00 AM

    Oh, I've done it again. Here is your well deserved 7. Bev
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 12:37:00 AM

    Sensitivity and openness are not always easy to convey. You've done that guilelessly. Your writing is refreshing. Bev
  1. Date: 9/16/2014 12:01:00 AM

    Nice Malik... Rated and enjoyed... Verlena
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 10:43:00 PM

    wow, that is quite a memory and I really love how you put it into the context of what was happening in your life. it shows a very sensitive person! good poem.
  1. Date: 9/15/2014 11:04:00 AM

    Beautiful lines Yaseen. I really liked the most striking lines, Those were my green and salad days, My friends, my toys were all my wealth.' My good wishes for you and for your family members, who are in Jammu and Kashmir. Will be visiting your other poems soon. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor

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