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Goddess Grip

She struts with a strategic lust
punishing hesitation with voluptuous thrust,
invading my chamber of fresh heart and hard part
certain for her meal of tender male from the start,
perfume from waving sea spreading broadly through this fantasy
skin textured fine with urge for pulsing vine, Goddess grins robustly,
she walks in rosebud red
stalks the songs and lips within this throbing head,
the call she croons to with curving tongue
door of desire widens to release a white river upon breasts divinely hung -

J.A.B.

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  1. Date: 10/19/2014 6:39:00 AM

    again!! so alive in every word!!!!!
  1. Date: 10/17/2014 1:39:00 PM

    "breasts divinely hung" for her sake hopefuly her suitor is as well. Great line and great poem Justin!
  1. Date: 10/16/2014 8:31:00 PM

    The word voluptuous caught my attention as I scan this poem Justin. Structured well, a passionate piece as well. Loved it! Verlena
  1. Date: 10/15/2014 8:20:00 PM

    Surely there is inimitable, passionate , daring freedom in the great Goddess Grip! Lovely poem Justin; quite magical actually. I really like the inner pulse of this poem. Reading it aloud, it actually flows very well, as do a lot of your verses. Your words just have that grip on me. In sensuous effect, you mold metaphor like no other. I really like the punishing hesitation line-this Goddess is beyond charm and chivalry. Thoroughly intrigued yet again! Always, Laura
  1. Date: 10/15/2014 5:55:00 PM

    What grips me most about this poem Justin is the shortness of it all, it pulses in abundance and fullness, from A to Z, I'm glad you like my bio, and the Sun card for you, I'm not surprised, you propagate heat wherever you go, in other words "You Sizzle" baby, xxx
  1. Date: 10/15/2014 1:56:00 PM

    The passion in this poem is clear to see....Vivid write...-Love Ettie
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 11:21:00 PM

    VERY descriptive of this goddess. I think she is Aphrodite!! thanks for your comments on my poems today!
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 12:19:00 PM

    my, my, justin...I need oxygen after having savored this piece which reels of pure ecstasy.. each line brings the next to one big peak experience, from the meal of a tender male to breasts divinely hung... thanks too for having me in your contest...huggs
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 11:06:00 AM

    'She walks in rosebud red /stalks the songs and lips within this throbbing head'-It seems this Goddess played all her powers upon you.A very beautiful poem,with a very seductive ending.Seductive yet sweet She seems fulfilling a fantasy and a dream.Beautiful,Justin.
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 3:11:00 AM

    Justin...I'm here to thank you for my placement in your contest. I'm ....literally .....overwhelmed. So so happy! For a while there, I thought I wouldn't make it, but...I'm so glad I did. Thanks...I'm flying high! Rosebud red is an inviting color...Every woman should have red in her wardrobe. I've been told it suits me whenever I wear it! :) Lovely poem here! Thanks again for the placement. I'm...honored!
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 8:11:00 AM

    Wonderfully seductive, masterfully crafted. Excellent!
  1. Date: 10/13/2014 3:11:00 AM

    Good way of poetry and the language is also nice..Great beauty

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