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Heaven Scent

scented lavender was pressed between thin parchment.... sent beyond the grave
For Charlotte's Contest: "Creative Haiku" 9/20/14

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  1. Date: 9/28/2014 8:37:00 PM

    Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations.
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 7:57:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win Carrie
  1. Date: 9/28/2014 12:28:00 AM

    Carrie this is so lovely dear! Congrats on big win!
  1. Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 PM

    I just loved this one the first time too, Carrie. Congrats again to you this night.
  1. Date: 9/27/2014 5:41:00 PM

    Congrats, nicely done
  1. Date: 9/27/2014 5:40:00 PM

    lovely haiku here, carrie, and the only thing that kept it outside the top three was the past tense, otherwise it would've been a top placement for sure (I think you could say something like 'pressed between flimsy parchment' in that second line, to bring it into present tense) it's a very clever one; I loved the word play on scent/sent! congrats on your win in my contest :)
  1. Date: 9/27/2014 5:22:00 PM

    ANOTHER BIG WIN CARRIE!!!! Have you ever had a bigger day at the soup! CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!!!!
  1. Date: 9/27/2014 5:03:00 PM

    Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) hugs Jan xxx
  1. Date: 9/24/2014 12:24:00 AM

    You grabbed me with two of my favorite scents: lavender and heaven scent!!! GOOD one.
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 10:03:00 PM

    Mystical short poem here! I like it! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
  1. Date: 9/21/2014 11:29:00 AM

    Awesome work Carrie! Sure to do wonders !
  1. Date: 9/20/2014 6:14:00 PM

    very nice haiku, Carrie. I love the smell of lavender, but...those darn bushes just bug me silly. LOL Beautiful one here, very lovely. hugs, Catie :)
  1. Date: 9/20/2014 4:54:00 PM

    wonderful imagery Carrie I adore the scent of lavender it conjures up memories of the past especially of an old lady who I used to look after:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

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