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Thoughtless fools

Inspired By Tim Smiths poem 'Inner beauty'

Thoughtless fools.

I often take a look around
And watch some cruel men
The way they looks at women Kind
With lust their only yen
They see a body, this is all
Just like dogs they be
They never see her beauty
Nor her depth of mystery.

They never looks into her eyes
At the beauty of her soul
They never feel her tenderness
They always play the role
Of the hunter, seeking out his prey
To appease his ugly lust
They just want action, this be all
As they take away her trust

Used, abused and, so confused
The lady sees all men
As heart breakers with hearts of steel
She’ll never trust again
And all because a man don’t see
True beauty, not at all
They come from where the cavemen came
These dull, and thoughtless fools.

11 August 2014 @ 1353hrs



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  1. Date: 8/15/2014 5:45:00 AM

    Hey Robert I used to be the most thoughtless bloke in the world. Still got some of it in me, Ask the wife....LOL....peter
  1. Date: 8/14/2014 7:33:00 PM

    A little of this thoughtless fool, lives inside of me. But acting like a heartless ass, well that, you'll never see. Keep us on our toe's Peter. Peace. :)
  1. Date: 8/12/2014 9:42:00 PM

    Nothin' worse than a Macho D'-Bag guy if ya' know what I'm spellin' without Spellin it out! Caveman ExtraordinaireZ!~
  1. Date: 8/11/2014 7:36:00 PM

    A real man sees body, mind and soul in women. We are genetically programmed to admire and prefer certain attributes but as "civilized and learned creatures" we all should now go past that very basic programming to SEE the mind and soul as well. Your fine write puts that so aptly my friend. My wife is beautiful in 1.mind 2.soul and 3.body. If the first two are there the last one listed is there as well to the other partner.. Great write my friend!
  1. Date: 8/11/2014 5:56:00 PM

    Peter this is so true, captain cavemen, are all over the place, beauty lies within every human spirit one has just but take the time and look inside, past the exterior, dearest friend on this one your right on the button. I wrote another work for you my friend, It's called WANDERLUST, i posted it today let me know what you think. ok and say hi to vera, let her know I'm still having trouble with email. but will write in comments to her tonight.
  1. Date: 8/11/2014 3:09:00 AM

    And such is the reality! Very thoughtful, intense, and raw. I hope more people start to look at her eyes, and not her body. Well-written!
  1. Date: 8/11/2014 3:05:00 AM

    This is such a thoughtful write Peter ! Alas all could feel the same way n reach out to touch her soul thru her eyes! Ur poetry awes me !