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It's unexplainable yet undeniable 
as incredible as that may seem
Society says it's debatable, unfavorable 
but the impossible is inspirational to me

You can be unshakable no fear of breakable
you 're completely capable of anything
It's indescribable to be anti-gravitational
not held down by fallible thoughts of man.

It's not irrational in fact it's practical
and quite exceptional to be adaptable
So go be sensational a professional radical
Escape the natural and taste the magical

You call me laughable my thoughts fallible
this world's not bashful in its destain 
But I've grown fanatical now I'm unflappable
to touch the maximal and taste the valuable 
in everything!

*Based on first print in Debbie's contest rules

Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi
Contest Name: Rock My World
Date: 4-19-14
Poet: Dave Wood



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  1. Date: 4/19/2014 6:45:00 PM

    It's unexplainable yet undeniable as incredible as that may seem, this is an amazing poem!!!! A7 all the way!!!! :) Cheers
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 5:49:00 PM

    a tour de force,david!.. hugggs
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 5:40:00 PM

    I thought I already had you as a favorite poet, I have now remedied that oversite.
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 5:38:00 PM

    Damn! This is fantastic Dave! straight to my favorites, one of your best my friend.
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 5:02:00 PM

    This is an incredible write Dave, so very cleverly done. If I tried something like that I think my head would go round in circles. Great stuff mate, hope it is a win for you....Peter
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:47:00 PM

    Hi Dave. I'm new to PoetrySoup and was wandering around the site when I came across your inspirational poem. I love the rhythm and rhyme -- it is flawless. And your line, "the impossible is inspirational to me" I think says so much. Drop by some time. I would so like to hear your thoughts on my poetry. Though be forewarned my poetry is darker and more pessimistic than yours. Still I feel there is room in this world for different visions:) I look forward to hearing from you. Peace....Sam
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 12:26:00 PM

    Dave, I love the rhymes ending in -ble :) I love to play it in my lips:)"escape the natural and taste the magical.. :)" catchy one..:)superbly incorporated with words that's so capable:) well-penned..:) --- God blees always, olive eloisa here :)
  1. Date: 4/19/2014 11:02:00 AM

    You love adjectives!! : D I really enjoyed this poem. The rhyming pattern, the flow ... its sound, its playful tone: very nice, Dave! Ruben.